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    Breathe- Chapter 8

    Story written on July 21, 2005 by Sox1.
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    Tina wants to bite her tongue, Bette gets lots of news, and James goes fishing.

    Oh, God Bette, Stacey said as she fit the pieces together. There eyes met and Stacey leaned forward and picked up Tinas chart. Flipping to the tox screen results she said Its Roofies,

    Bette looked shocked and then angry. The date-rape drug? she asked. The ***** gave Tina the date-rape drug. Even Bette was surprised by the speed her anger rose to the surface.

    Stacey nodded. There are really several drugs that fall in the date-rape category. Gamma Hydroxy Butyrate or GHB, Ketamine Hydrochloride and Rohypnol. Tina, she continued ingested Rohypnol, and from the amount remaining in her system enough to impact her significantly earlier in the day but not render her unconscious.

    Bette got up and began pacing, her anger not letting her sit any longer. Do you have any idea how he delivered the dose?

    Stacey shook her head. Theres no way to tell exactly. We could pump Tinas stomach and see if there are any pill fragments remaining. But, its highly unlikely anything would survive this long in the stomach’s acidic environment and its a pretty brutal procedure to put her through for a long shot.

    Bette shook her head. No, she said still pacing. I dont want to put her through that.

    Theres something I dont understand, Stacey started. Rohypnol is virtually undetectable. Its tasteless, odorless and colorless. All traces of the drugs will be out of her body in another 48 hours.

    “Like most date-rape drugs, she continued knowing that Bette wanted all the information she had. Rohypnol renders a person incapable of thinking clearly or making appropriate decisions. This makes for a very passive victim, who will have no clear memory of what happened after-the-fact. Did Tina mention a loss of memory to you in her interview?

    Bette stopped, biting her lip she looked down at the carpet. The decision to protect her from an immediate interview was now bearing fruit. I havent interviewed her yet, Bette met her friends eyes. So, I dont know what she does and doesnt remember.

    Bette, Stacey said as a simple admonishment, knowing she could offer no words that would chastise Bette as effectively as her own thoughts were doing right now.

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    2. Wow sox, I love the friendship with Stacey – someone helping Bette process her needs awesome. Waiting for more even though you have a life. Thanks for creating this and sharing it. ~ bfan

    3. hmm dodgy vegan hippie nurse…. definetly shifty, lol!
      L-O-V-I-N-G T-H-I-S!!
      Thank you for posting each one so soon, u know ur actually helpin me through my exams! well done u and the greater good! lol

    4. ok now my mind is off and running, have so many question you have to answer, and bette needs to start doing her job, or they can count tina out of this case. so marcey must of come home early?? and the special shoes could be a nurse or a doctor or sometype of kicthen staff, and if they were drugged it would be easy for a women to be the killer, which I think you should make it a women, and I think it should be jenny lmao, as you can tell I’m not really of fan of hers, oh and she did kick ass on 24 so she has skillz.
      Can’t wait until the next chapter, and can I have a key to bette’s house too lol

    7. Absolutely fabulous. You have managed to paint Bette as a well rounded character in no time. Bobbie? – looking forward to hearing about their relationship.

    9. “I was so worried about Tina, I don’t remember flushing”, one thing: eww. lol
      Great chapter, as usual, keep writing and I’ll keep leaving comments :)
      xxx

    15. This is so terrific…I am always at the edge of my seat when I read your fic. You have a really great writing style and can really maintain the pace. I can’t wait for the next chapter!

    16. Absolutely wonderful writing. You have me signing on to check for updates from home, usually I’m just on-line at work. This has to be the one of the very best stories posted here….you MUST promise to see it to completion…please…please…please…..

    17. It’s that male nurse!! Ohhh your going to have us all guessing all the way along….Totally love this story, poor Tina how very sad, thank goodness she has found bette….tks again for 2 chpts!!!! YEA…

    20. such a compelling story line. the delicacy that you use to weave the details together is absolutely tantalizing. And in my completely unsolicited opinion, this story flat out rocks. Why have I visited this site three more times today to see if another installment has been posted. In the words of Julia Roberts “well done!”

    21. OMG… i read every word and every chapter last night at work… my god girl this is great… i can feel the tension… i love it… so this bastard was after tina… and marcy came home first… he fucked up… he didn’t know she had a roommate… he will be back to finish the job… bette better be watch her… this guy is crazy and this will be haw they get him./… his obsesion is now to get tina… by stuffing her picture in marcy mouth… so he will be back…
      i am sorry i can’t leave comment when i read at work… but thank god i can still read these great stories at work…

      please continue

    23. Sox,
      Simply out, AWESOME.
      I can feel the love but adore the way the mystery is deepening.
      Your writing style is tremendous and the attention to the little details spell-binding.
      Many thanks for this fantastic addition to the site.
      Your Loyal Fan.

    24. I love the way you depict both characters and their emerging relationship … The wealth of your story is also that they will have to start knowing and love each other (in all meanings … knowing that T is not a gay lady at the start) and in parallel, B&T will have to be in another kind of relationship: police officer and witness (where there is no room of space for personal feelings).

      I am not sure I made myself clear but no matter, the story is great.

      Thanks

    25. It’s great that Bette has a friend that is up front with her, yet supportive, and compassionate. Hope Bette is able to maintain a cool deamor as she sorts the case, as well as her feelings for Tina. Tina is such a key factor in solving this case. Hope she’s able to assist Bette and her team, capture this ruthless murderer. Great story!

    27. This is such awesome story sox1…hope to find out more about “bobbie”.. will there be red herrings in future posts to keep us on our toes…i hope so…
      Thank you.

    28. “I can take you home now” I was surprised that Tina assumed that Bette would indeed take her home to Bette’s… this is a very trusting Tina!

    29. Great post!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Who is bobbie give us the details in to this bette poter Please tell me she will ” let tina stay” and not push her away post soon!!!!!!!!!!!

    30. Awesome. And I am learning to really dislike the killer more and more. I think she has to know him or her too. Sox, really you should charge us money to read your work, its that good.

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