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Breathe- Chapter 8
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Stacey, she whispered hoarsely as she ran her fingers roughly through her hair. She needed me, she was clinging to me. I didnt cross any line until she touched my lips and commented on my beautiful smile.
Bette smiled slightly at the memory, letting her fingers play across her lips where she could still feel Tinas touch. With one touch, I was hers, Bette said simply. And now youre telling me it might all be because she was under the influence.
No, Bette, Stacey said firmly. Tina needs you as much as I have ever seen a human being need another. You are as important to her right now as the air she breathes and the water she drinks. Dont pull back from her. Im not sure what kind of emotional wreckage that might leave in its wake. Just be aware. Take things slow, Stacey negotiated, hoping she hadnt prompted her already relationship-wary friend into doing what she does best, withdrawing and erecting walls.
Youve let Tina in Bette. Thats a good thing. Let her stay, Stacey said, trying to talk her friend away from the ledge. Let her stay. Stacey whispered as she moved her head from side to side trying to make direct eye-contact with Bette. She finally had Bettes eyes and saw the fear. Let her stay. Stacey said again as Bette nodded weakly.
You can do better than that, Stacey said playfully, waiting for her friends breathtaking smile. When greeted with a shadow of the smile she knew Bette possessed, she said reassuringly, I guess that will have to do for now. Should we get you back to Tina? Stacey said, rubbing her friends arms trying to quell the chill she was sure she could see on Bettes skin.
Bette shook her head. Not just yet, her tone suggested Detective Porter had more questions.
How could he have given her the drug? Bette asked as her mind toying with possibilities.
Stacey returned to her desk and picked up a file. It comes in pill form, and unless we have her stomach contents we cant know if she digested the meds.
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Love…the truest of love can break through anything and shine so bright to bring warmth and happiness in the soul. LOVE the story. Thank you for sharing. ~Legaspi
Wow sox, I love the friendship with Stacey – someone helping Bette process her needs awesome. Waiting for more even though you have a life. Thanks for creating this and sharing it. ~ bfan
hmm dodgy vegan hippie nurse…. definetly shifty, lol!
L-O-V-I-N-G T-H-I-S!!
Thank you for posting each one so soon, u know ur actually helpin me through my exams! well done u and the greater good! lol
ok now my mind is off and running, have so many question you have to answer, and bette needs to start doing her job, or they can count tina out of this case. so marcey must of come home early?? and the special shoes could be a nurse or a doctor or sometype of kicthen staff, and if they were drugged it would be easy for a women to be the killer, which I think you should make it a women, and I think it should be jenny lmao, as you can tell I’m not really of fan of hers, oh and she did kick ass on 24 so she has skillz.
Can’t wait until the next chapter, and can I have a key to bette’s house too lol
What can I say ? Wonderful. Don’t ever imagine to stop writting this story. It’ll be my death. One more time, thank you
What can I say, simply fantastic…. Looking forward to continuing.
Absolutely fabulous. You have managed to paint Bette as a well rounded character in no time. Bobbie? – looking forward to hearing about their relationship.
this is now getting better and better! another 10 bright stars for you Sox!
“I was so worried about Tina, I don’t remember flushing”, one thing: eww. lol
Great chapter, as usual, keep writing and I’ll keep leaving comments :)
xxx
Awesome, can I be president of your fan club? Can’t wait for the next chapter….
I cannot express to you how absolutely addicted to this story I am!! Thank you!!
Wow, I love murder mysteries and this story is GREAT. I think the killer wanted to get Tina (hence the drug), but Marcey got home before her and surprised him. Just my theories lol.
This story is fantastic, I wait eagerly for each chapter
Your wrighting is truly wonderful to read i love this story it is so tuching on so many levels. Thank you
This is so terrific…I am always at the edge of my seat when I read your fic. You have a really great writing style and can really maintain the pace. I can’t wait for the next chapter!
Absolutely wonderful writing. You have me signing on to check for updates from home, usually I’m just on-line at work. This has to be the one of the very best stories posted here….you MUST promise to see it to completion…please…please…please…..
It’s that male nurse!! Ohhh your going to have us all guessing all the way along….Totally love this story, poor Tina how very sad, thank goodness she has found bette….tks again for 2 chpts!!!! YEA…
Tell us about Bobbie. Will Bette keep Tina at her home? When the drug wears off,how will Tina feel? thanks
This story is great. I say the same damn thing every time! I love it and I can’t wait to read more!
such a compelling story line. the delicacy that you use to weave the details together is absolutely tantalizing. And in my completely unsolicited opinion, this story flat out rocks. Why have I visited this site three more times today to see if another installment has been posted. In the words of Julia Roberts “well done!”
OMG… i read every word and every chapter last night at work… my god girl this is great… i can feel the tension… i love it… so this bastard was after tina… and marcy came home first… he fucked up… he didn’t know she had a roommate… he will be back to finish the job… bette better be watch her… this guy is crazy and this will be haw they get him./… his obsesion is now to get tina… by stuffing her picture in marcy mouth… so he will be back…
i am sorry i can’t leave comment when i read at work… but thank god i can still read these great stories at work…
please continue
TAKE HER HOME BETTE….TINA HAS TO KNOW THE KILLER….THANKS FOR THE FABULOUS STORY…POST SOON…..
Sox,
Simply out, AWESOME.
I can feel the love but adore the way the mystery is deepening.
Your writing style is tremendous and the attention to the little details spell-binding.
Many thanks for this fantastic addition to the site.
Your Loyal Fan.
I love the way you depict both characters and their emerging relationship … The wealth of your story is also that they will have to start knowing and love each other (in all meanings … knowing that T is not a gay lady at the start) and in parallel, B&T will have to be in another kind of relationship: police officer and witness (where there is no room of space for personal feelings).
I am not sure I made myself clear but no matter, the story is great.
Thanks
It’s great that Bette has a friend that is up front with her, yet supportive, and compassionate. Hope Bette is able to maintain a cool deamor as she sorts the case, as well as her feelings for Tina. Tina is such a key factor in solving this case. Hope she’s able to assist Bette and her team, capture this ruthless murderer. Great story!
I feel like I have been drugged!! I am so addicted to this story. Anxiously need my next fix!! Great story.
This is such awesome story sox1…hope to find out more about “bobbie”.. will there be red herrings in future posts to keep us on our toes…i hope so…
Thank you.
“I can take you home now” I was surprised that Tina assumed that Bette would indeed take her home to Bette’s… this is a very trusting Tina!
Great post!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Who is bobbie give us the details in to this bette poter Please tell me she will ” let tina stay” and not push her away post soon!!!!!!!!!!!
Awesome. And I am learning to really dislike the killer more and more. I think she has to know him or her too. Sox, really you should charge us money to read your work, its that good.
That was emotional!