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    Breathe- Chapter 8

    Story written on July 21, 2005 by Sox1.
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    Tina wants to bite her tongue, Bette gets lots of news, and James goes fishing.

    Stacey looked at the sheet of paper she was holding. You know Bette it also comes in injectibles and liquid. Since it is tasteless and colorless, its easy to slip into a drink of some type.

    Which a date would have ready access to, Bette nodded getting a clearer picture of the destructive nature of this drug.

    You know, even if we wanted to put her through a stomach pumping, which I dont, Bette said. She got so sick at the house. I cant imagine anything being left in her stomach.

    Their eyes met as the realization hit them both at the same time. Bette pulled her cell phone from her jacket. Hitting speed dial she looked at Stacey and said, Poor James. Stacey nodded and agreed, Poor, poor James.

    James, as always answered on the first wring. Hey boss, do you know what time it is? Bette looked at her watch and grimaced. James, *****, Im sorry but something has come up.

    She could hear covers rustling and someone complaining about a light and then James was back on the phone. Details Bette. I know you wouldnt call if it wasnt important.

    Bette hesitated wondering just how she was going to describe this assignment. James, I need you to gather some evidence.

    She started slowly, her eyes traveling to the ceiling trying to see if the right words were written there. O.K, he responded slowly. Thats what I do, so whats with the pregnant pause.

    Well, Bette tried to begin again. I need you to collect stomach contentsfrom my homefrom my master bathroom toilet. There, it was out. She waited for his reaction.

    Bette, do you remember when you sent me into that rotting basement, with the rotting body laying on top of that other rotting body?

    Bette grimaced at the memory. That was pretty bad, she agreed.

    You think going into your 6,000 sqaure foot home in the suburbs and retrieving a few taquitos from the loo will even phase me?

    Bette laughed at the visual James had just painted for her. Im sorry James, she said, willingly accepting her scolding. I dont know what I was thinking.

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    2. Wow sox, I love the friendship with Stacey – someone helping Bette process her needs awesome. Waiting for more even though you have a life. Thanks for creating this and sharing it. ~ bfan

    3. hmm dodgy vegan hippie nurse…. definetly shifty, lol!
      L-O-V-I-N-G T-H-I-S!!
      Thank you for posting each one so soon, u know ur actually helpin me through my exams! well done u and the greater good! lol

    4. ok now my mind is off and running, have so many question you have to answer, and bette needs to start doing her job, or they can count tina out of this case. so marcey must of come home early?? and the special shoes could be a nurse or a doctor or sometype of kicthen staff, and if they were drugged it would be easy for a women to be the killer, which I think you should make it a women, and I think it should be jenny lmao, as you can tell I’m not really of fan of hers, oh and she did kick ass on 24 so she has skillz.
      Can’t wait until the next chapter, and can I have a key to bette’s house too lol

    7. Absolutely fabulous. You have managed to paint Bette as a well rounded character in no time. Bobbie? – looking forward to hearing about their relationship.

    9. “I was so worried about Tina, I don’t remember flushing”, one thing: eww. lol
      Great chapter, as usual, keep writing and I’ll keep leaving comments :)
      xxx

    15. This is so terrific…I am always at the edge of my seat when I read your fic. You have a really great writing style and can really maintain the pace. I can’t wait for the next chapter!

    16. Absolutely wonderful writing. You have me signing on to check for updates from home, usually I’m just on-line at work. This has to be the one of the very best stories posted here….you MUST promise to see it to completion…please…please…please…..

    17. It’s that male nurse!! Ohhh your going to have us all guessing all the way along….Totally love this story, poor Tina how very sad, thank goodness she has found bette….tks again for 2 chpts!!!! YEA…

    20. such a compelling story line. the delicacy that you use to weave the details together is absolutely tantalizing. And in my completely unsolicited opinion, this story flat out rocks. Why have I visited this site three more times today to see if another installment has been posted. In the words of Julia Roberts “well done!”

    21. OMG… i read every word and every chapter last night at work… my god girl this is great… i can feel the tension… i love it… so this bastard was after tina… and marcy came home first… he fucked up… he didn’t know she had a roommate… he will be back to finish the job… bette better be watch her… this guy is crazy and this will be haw they get him./… his obsesion is now to get tina… by stuffing her picture in marcy mouth… so he will be back…
      i am sorry i can’t leave comment when i read at work… but thank god i can still read these great stories at work…

      please continue

    23. Sox,
      Simply out, AWESOME.
      I can feel the love but adore the way the mystery is deepening.
      Your writing style is tremendous and the attention to the little details spell-binding.
      Many thanks for this fantastic addition to the site.
      Your Loyal Fan.

    24. I love the way you depict both characters and their emerging relationship … The wealth of your story is also that they will have to start knowing and love each other (in all meanings … knowing that T is not a gay lady at the start) and in parallel, B&T will have to be in another kind of relationship: police officer and witness (where there is no room of space for personal feelings).

      I am not sure I made myself clear but no matter, the story is great.

      Thanks

    25. It’s great that Bette has a friend that is up front with her, yet supportive, and compassionate. Hope Bette is able to maintain a cool deamor as she sorts the case, as well as her feelings for Tina. Tina is such a key factor in solving this case. Hope she’s able to assist Bette and her team, capture this ruthless murderer. Great story!

    27. This is such awesome story sox1…hope to find out more about “bobbie”.. will there be red herrings in future posts to keep us on our toes…i hope so…
      Thank you.

    28. “I can take you home now” I was surprised that Tina assumed that Bette would indeed take her home to Bette’s… this is a very trusting Tina!

    29. Great post!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Who is bobbie give us the details in to this bette poter Please tell me she will ” let tina stay” and not push her away post soon!!!!!!!!!!!

    30. Awesome. And I am learning to really dislike the killer more and more. I think she has to know him or her too. Sox, really you should charge us money to read your work, its that good.

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