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Brief Encounter Chapter 20
Kit: No problem baby sis and if you stay here longer
Bette: Kit!!!!
Kit: Ok… Ok…
Shane: Hey guys
I looked at Shane. Hmm she seems normal. I turned my gaze to Alice. Well well well look what we have here Alice smiled and tried to be casual. She didnt know that I saw what happened earlier.
Alice: Hey Bette. So when are you free today?
Shane glared at Alice and she ignored her but sat down quietly nonetheless.
Bette: I have a lot to get done today Al. I want to get it all over with so I can fly back to New York as soon as
Shane: What? Oh come on Bette we dont see you much anymore. At least stay for the weekend!!! Itll be just like old times
Shane suddenly stopped, remembering things would never be like old times. She knows full well that I would never have come here if it werent for work. Never. I wouldnt return unless there is something someone is worth coming home too. Kit snapped me back to reality.
Kit: So whats everyone having?
Shane: Just my usual morning shot Kit. I got a client to meet this morning.
Alice: A croissant will do Kit. And the usual please thanks. (Turning to Shane) Another one from the production Shane?
Shane: Umm nah
Alice: So Bette youre not going to stay longer?
Bette: As soon as I get everything sorted Im going to fly back to New York. Theres no way Im going to let Helena mess anything up there. She might have a hidden agenda to fly me here.
Shane: Helenas hidden agenda?
Bette: Yeah well I mean, shes never nice to me. And now she sends me here and put me in a very nice hotel and everything… I just thought
Alice: Youre right. She has a hidden agenda!
Shane: What?
I wanted to laugh as I heard Alices comment. You gotta give it to Alice.
Alice: You heard me. (she rolled her eyes at Shane and turned to me) Helena is one sneaky bitchShes rich and all but I would NOT go near her… only stupid women would
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(58 votes, average: 3.79 out of 5)
Like everyone else, I’m dying here. Love the story, so please post soon. And, please, please, let B/T finally hook up. PLEASE!!!
Is it just me or does anyone else think it’s Mel on the other end of the line?
It’s gotta be Tina, if it’s not i’m going to hang my self and blame u for my death.. =P
definitely gotta be Tina! post soon…!!!
Oooh damn the familiar voice calling out her mane, please let it’s be Tina I hope. Please post soon, thanks!
Come on Thumbs, the wait is killing me, please update soon!
Thanks Neg8740 for posting Thumbs story. I know she is having trouble with her computer. What an amazing update and yes it is Tina calling from NY is it not. I sure hope so. Post soon Thumbs – hope your troubles are over soon
Aaaargh! Glad to have an installment, as always. Still….cliffhanger…arrrggghhh.
‘…a familiar voice…’ Oooh my! Don’t leave us hanging!
I hope it’s TINA Hey Neq thank you for writing this I’m been waiting for this story I love it Hey Thums where are you well I just wait for the next chapter I guess post soon Please.
About the call..”did love find the way??” ;) Post soon!.
yep hellena flew bette to la cause tina was coming to new york. Thank you posted for T, N I have been waiting for ever for this update.
please post soon… this is killing me… and i hope its tina… mybe its that girl telling bette tina was looking for her and is now on her way back to LA… love this story
I’ve missed a few of these and went back and read them… Such an incredible story, I love it! I hope Tina get’s to her girl soon! Thanks, Thumbs, your writing is lovley…I can’t wait for the next chapter!!!!
Man Alive, I am chomping at the bit waiting for them to meet !!!! Ooooo I cant take it, please post real soon, love the story, u have me hooked, its great writing !
Wow I thought I was the queen of drama. You win. THat was so great and thanks to Neq8740 for posting this gem for you. I love your story and look for it every time I log on. Can’t wait for the next.
Thanks for the update Neq…
Thumbs thank you for writing the update that was brilliant.
WHO is on the phone????
It’s all worth it waiting so long for your update, can’t wait for the next post…. don’t keep us hanging…!
Very cool…..keep up the great writing….I like Shanes feeling hesitant in bringing Mel up to to Bette…
Shane: Oh ok…. So uh… Bette. Can I ask you something?
Bette: You can ask me anything Shane
Shane: Ok well are you like, I mean you and Mel? Are you
LOL…too funny….
Your such a friggin tease Thumbs, you sure your ST8? lol. Thanx great update.
LET IT BE TINA…DON’T KEEP US HANGING TO LONG…PLEASE………LOVE THE CHAPTER GOOD JOB…
Thanks for posting. I was missing this story so much! I hope Thumbs gets her computer working soon…..
I hope Love finds their way back to each other.
Helena is mean! But at least she, again, didn’t bring up Candance…..yey…
OMFG, Thumbs. Don’t know how much more my heart can take! Please update soon.
My Sweet Tee, you are getting so good at being a tease. Hee Hee. I loved your chapter. I really like the love the friends still share even with Bette not there as much. You can weave a tale like no other. I am so proud of you and oh, thanks for the mention in author’s notes. I owe you so much. Thank you for all your support and love. I would not be happy if not for you. Please post again soon. I love it!