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Brief Encounter Chapter 20
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I arrived at The Planet at 7.30 sharp. I am not one to be late. That hasnt changed.
Bette: Hey Kit!
Kit: Hey baby sis. How was your day?
Bette: Pretty eventful and Im real glad.
Kit: You mean everythings done?
Bette: Hey you should be happy for me Kit. I worked my ***** off today.
Kit: Yeah but it also means youre not going to stay in LA long!!!
Bette: Oh come on Kit dont give me that. Im here now. Where are Shane and Alice?
Kit: Theyre just waiting for you. Alice just got here though. Come
We walked to a special room set for some party. But most of the time this room is used for entertaining Alice and Shane.
Kit: Hey Baby Sis, youre not in a hurry to jet off somewhere tonight are you?
Bette: No I have the night free
Kit: Ok cool. Then you wouldnt mind going to Milk tonight then?
Bette: What? Who said anything about going to Milk?
I looked at Shane and Alice who had guilty written all over their faces. I sighed and rolled my eyes.
Alice: Oh come on Bette!!! We barely see you and we wanna party the Bette Porter style… Please!!!! We forgot how to and we just want you to show us again!!!
Shane was laughing at this. And Kit and I joined in.
Alice: Well thats nice that youre finding this amusing and all but does that mean you will go?
Bette: Yeah ok Al.
Alice: because if you dont wait What did you say?
Bette: I said yes Al.
Alice walked closer and examined me.
Bette: What are you doing Al?
Kit and Shane were laughing their asses off.
Alice: Im just Where is THE Bette Porter I know?
I rolled my eyes.
Kit: Ok ok ladies break it up NOW! Or none of you will have anything to eat tonight.
Shane cleared her throat.
Shane: Yeah you guys come and sit. Im famished.
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It was eleven and the place is packed. We have been at Milk for a half hour just taking in what everyone was up to. The atmosphere at Milk hasnt changed much. At the bar you would see some girls waiting to be asked to dance or chatting up some girls. And you would probably also see a few girls just drinking the night away trying to drown their sadness. At some tables you will see a couple of friends having a laugh or playing a game of who they would do. On the dance floor. Well thats where the magic lies. You can tell just by looking at the way they dance; whether they are just casually dating, up for one night stands or majorly in love with one another. You can tell the way they press their bodies together, how their hands venture one anothers bodies and the eye contact they are making. Just how things were with me and Tina I shook my head, dont go there Bette.
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(58 votes, average: 3.79 out of 5)
Like everyone else, I’m dying here. Love the story, so please post soon. And, please, please, let B/T finally hook up. PLEASE!!!
Is it just me or does anyone else think it’s Mel on the other end of the line?
It’s gotta be Tina, if it’s not i’m going to hang my self and blame u for my death.. =P
definitely gotta be Tina! post soon…!!!
Oooh damn the familiar voice calling out her mane, please let it’s be Tina I hope. Please post soon, thanks!
Come on Thumbs, the wait is killing me, please update soon!
Thanks Neg8740 for posting Thumbs story. I know she is having trouble with her computer. What an amazing update and yes it is Tina calling from NY is it not. I sure hope so. Post soon Thumbs – hope your troubles are over soon
Aaaargh! Glad to have an installment, as always. Still….cliffhanger…arrrggghhh.
‘…a familiar voice…’ Oooh my! Don’t leave us hanging!
I hope it’s TINA Hey Neq thank you for writing this I’m been waiting for this story I love it Hey Thums where are you well I just wait for the next chapter I guess post soon Please.
About the call..”did love find the way??” ;) Post soon!.
yep hellena flew bette to la cause tina was coming to new york. Thank you posted for T, N I have been waiting for ever for this update.
please post soon… this is killing me… and i hope its tina… mybe its that girl telling bette tina was looking for her and is now on her way back to LA… love this story
I’ve missed a few of these and went back and read them… Such an incredible story, I love it! I hope Tina get’s to her girl soon! Thanks, Thumbs, your writing is lovley…I can’t wait for the next chapter!!!!
Man Alive, I am chomping at the bit waiting for them to meet !!!! Ooooo I cant take it, please post real soon, love the story, u have me hooked, its great writing !
Wow I thought I was the queen of drama. You win. THat was so great and thanks to Neq8740 for posting this gem for you. I love your story and look for it every time I log on. Can’t wait for the next.
Thanks for the update Neq…
Thumbs thank you for writing the update that was brilliant.
WHO is on the phone????
It’s all worth it waiting so long for your update, can’t wait for the next post…. don’t keep us hanging…!
Very cool…..keep up the great writing….I like Shanes feeling hesitant in bringing Mel up to to Bette…
Shane: Oh ok…. So uh… Bette. Can I ask you something?
Bette: You can ask me anything Shane
Shane: Ok well are you like, I mean you and Mel? Are you
LOL…too funny….
Your such a friggin tease Thumbs, you sure your ST8? lol. Thanx great update.
LET IT BE TINA…DON’T KEEP US HANGING TO LONG…PLEASE………LOVE THE CHAPTER GOOD JOB…
Thanks for posting. I was missing this story so much! I hope Thumbs gets her computer working soon…..
I hope Love finds their way back to each other.
Helena is mean! But at least she, again, didn’t bring up Candance…..yey…
OMFG, Thumbs. Don’t know how much more my heart can take! Please update soon.
My Sweet Tee, you are getting so good at being a tease. Hee Hee. I loved your chapter. I really like the love the friends still share even with Bette not there as much. You can weave a tale like no other. I am so proud of you and oh, thanks for the mention in author’s notes. I owe you so much. Thank you for all your support and love. I would not be happy if not for you. Please post again soon. I love it!