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Brief Encounter Chapter 20
Really this place hasnt changed much! I shook my head and looked around Although there are now more new faces looking to hook up
Shane: Hey Bette would you like to have another drink?
Bette: New faces in here
Shane: Yeah so Bette what would you like to have?
Bette: Oh huh? Oh mmm whatever youre having
Shane: Ok. Alice?
Alice: (Without looking around) Nah its ok Shane Im good something I want to do
Shane and I looked in the direction Alice was looking and smiled. Yup she has found her prey and they were making eye contact. You could really see the heat theyre both emitting!
Shane: Ok Bette, I will be right back with the drinks.
Bette: Ok Shane.
I looked at Alice who was still making eye contact with the girl.
Bette: Al enough already you should just go to her! She wants you Al!
Alice: Yeah I know
Bette: So just go!!!
Alice turned around concern reflected in her eyes.
Alice: You going to be ok?
Bette: Of course I will Al! Now go already go and get your woman!
Alice had the biggest grin on her face! Even in the dark I could see sparkles in her eyes, how ecstatic she was.
Alice: Ok Shane will be right back.
She sauntered towards the girl just as Shane came back with the drinks.
Shane: So she finally made the move eh?
Bette: Yeah Good for her. Wheres your woman Shane?
Shane: Nah I do my own thing she does hers. Were cool like that you know? But we trust each other so its cool.
Bette: Thats good Shane, Im very happy for you.
Shane: Thanks Bette. So hows Mel? Is she in New York?
Bette: Shes good. Not in New York shes just busy shes thinking of relocating.
Shane: Oh ok. So uh Bette. Can I ask you something?
Bette: You can ask me anything Shane
Shane: Ok well are you like, I mean you and Mel? Are you
Bette: I dont know Shane. I like her and all but somethings missing.
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(58 votes, average: 3.79 out of 5)
Like everyone else, I’m dying here. Love the story, so please post soon. And, please, please, let B/T finally hook up. PLEASE!!!
Is it just me or does anyone else think it’s Mel on the other end of the line?
It’s gotta be Tina, if it’s not i’m going to hang my self and blame u for my death.. =P
definitely gotta be Tina! post soon…!!!
Oooh damn the familiar voice calling out her mane, please let it’s be Tina I hope. Please post soon, thanks!
Come on Thumbs, the wait is killing me, please update soon!
Thanks Neg8740 for posting Thumbs story. I know she is having trouble with her computer. What an amazing update and yes it is Tina calling from NY is it not. I sure hope so. Post soon Thumbs – hope your troubles are over soon
Aaaargh! Glad to have an installment, as always. Still….cliffhanger…arrrggghhh.
‘…a familiar voice…’ Oooh my! Don’t leave us hanging!
I hope it’s TINA Hey Neq thank you for writing this I’m been waiting for this story I love it Hey Thums where are you well I just wait for the next chapter I guess post soon Please.
About the call..”did love find the way??” ;) Post soon!.
yep hellena flew bette to la cause tina was coming to new york. Thank you posted for T, N I have been waiting for ever for this update.
please post soon… this is killing me… and i hope its tina… mybe its that girl telling bette tina was looking for her and is now on her way back to LA… love this story
I’ve missed a few of these and went back and read them… Such an incredible story, I love it! I hope Tina get’s to her girl soon! Thanks, Thumbs, your writing is lovley…I can’t wait for the next chapter!!!!
Man Alive, I am chomping at the bit waiting for them to meet !!!! Ooooo I cant take it, please post real soon, love the story, u have me hooked, its great writing !
Wow I thought I was the queen of drama. You win. THat was so great and thanks to Neq8740 for posting this gem for you. I love your story and look for it every time I log on. Can’t wait for the next.
Thanks for the update Neq…
Thumbs thank you for writing the update that was brilliant.
WHO is on the phone????
It’s all worth it waiting so long for your update, can’t wait for the next post…. don’t keep us hanging…!
Very cool…..keep up the great writing….I like Shanes feeling hesitant in bringing Mel up to to Bette…
Shane: Oh ok…. So uh… Bette. Can I ask you something?
Bette: You can ask me anything Shane
Shane: Ok well are you like, I mean you and Mel? Are you
LOL…too funny….
Your such a friggin tease Thumbs, you sure your ST8? lol. Thanx great update.
LET IT BE TINA…DON’T KEEP US HANGING TO LONG…PLEASE………LOVE THE CHAPTER GOOD JOB…
Thanks for posting. I was missing this story so much! I hope Thumbs gets her computer working soon…..
I hope Love finds their way back to each other.
Helena is mean! But at least she, again, didn’t bring up Candance…..yey…
OMFG, Thumbs. Don’t know how much more my heart can take! Please update soon.
My Sweet Tee, you are getting so good at being a tease. Hee Hee. I loved your chapter. I really like the love the friends still share even with Bette not there as much. You can weave a tale like no other. I am so proud of you and oh, thanks for the mention in author’s notes. I owe you so much. Thank you for all your support and love. I would not be happy if not for you. Please post again soon. I love it!