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Brief Encounter Chapter 26
Bette: Yeah. Sorry.
Tina: It’s ok.
Bette: I have to go. I’m really sorry. But what did you want to tell me?
Tina: Oh it’s uh I’m just glad you’re here.
I smiled. I didn’t want to go but I can’t really stay. If I stayed any longer I probably would’ve blurted out my undying love for her and this isn’t a good start to trying to be friends with someone. Besides, Mel is waiting at the hotel.
Bette: I’m glad too Tina. It’s really good to see you. I had a good time
Tina: Me too. I will see you when I see you then ok?
Bette: You bet.
We both stood up and gave each other a hug. God if I didn’t cheat on her this would all be mine. I love you Tina, I always will. I didn’t wanna let go but I had to. I walked out of The Planet and looked at her one last time before getting out of sight. Hmmm the way she looked at me. What was that? I shook my head, I must be dreaming. There’s no way she would feel the way I do after what I did to her.
When I got back at the hotel, Mel was in her bath robe just had her shower.
Mel: Hey baby did u have fun?
Bette: Yeah it was good I had a talk with Kit about her business and well the girls asked when I’m moving back.
Mel: Moving back?
Bette: Yup.
I walked to the coffee table and looked at the different magazines trying to find something that would interest me, something that would take my mind off Tina.
Mel: As in moving back here? In LA?
Hmm Good hotel but pretty much shitty magazines that wouldn’t even grab anyones attention, I mean come on look at these magazine covers!!! Tina would look good on the covers of these magazines. Damn it. She looked pretty hot today too.
Bette: What’s that? Oh oh yeah LA yeah
Get your acts together Bette!!! Mel can see right through you. Or maybe not. I am, after all, pretty good at hiding things Gosh Tina it was so so good to see you earlier
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(31 votes, average: 3.52 out of 5)
SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO Glad your back and you better not think about not continueing..We will wait BUT PLEASE continue..
SOOOOOOOOOOOOO glad to have you back too…and yes bye bye Mel well we have to say bye to all of Mels we know..lol..and welcome true love…hey T please dont took forever to post again i missed you and about our portuguese class we will see..lol..later baby thanks :o)
We’ll wait, take you time but continue, please I wanna B&T together. Great story !
you played me we had a deal james is so mad!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! i am eating pizza great update i still like u!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I just read your story Home (well, the first one) and I just have to say something to you about it, might as well be here, cause I don’t think you’ll read the comments of that one anymore ;-)”But I wouldn’t have called it some woman. It’d be one special woman. The woman I fell in love with the first time I saw her, the woman who made all things possible for me, the woman who showed me the world, the woman who makes my heart flutter, the woman who I’ve fallen madly in love with over and over again even after the long years, the woman who I would spend my life with and the woman who would always be my first, last and forever…”That part, wowwww, that just broke my heart, If that’s what Tina was feeling, how heartbroken must she have been after Bette cheating!! How awfull!! I almost cried haha.. Your writing is very good!!! thumbs up for you!!
oh please don’t make us wait tooo long to post again love your story…. can’t wait for your next post…..
what to do? easy…go to tina and talk to her, tell her everything you feel and if tina doesn’t want her, bette can always go back to mel, who seems nice…talk to tina, now
Good to see you post and don’t keep us waiting this long next time.
Please post soon. love this and Mel is a smart lady,knowing she could never take Tinas place in Bettes heart. thanks
Wow, Mel was so very cool about everything. Glad you’re back with this story.
Very happy to see you back. Please post soon, pleeease!
hey thumbsy!!!! ty for this story! I loved it! I just don’t know what all the whining is about, though! I mean what could possibly be more important in your life than writing FF? OK, besides me. Huh? Certainly not your old dorky bf! So, I don’t want to hear any more talk of putting on the brakes with this story, ya hear? All this about,*using whiny voice* “life is so busy and i’m not sure if anyone is still reading…and my leg hurts and my boyfriend is acting weird, and my doctor says i’m obese(which is soooo not true!)…and i’m running out of real excuses so i’m going to have to start making them up now (that will probably be your next FF chapter–4 pages of excuses!!!LOL) blah, blah, blah…WHATEVER T!!! I don’t want to hear anymore of it, K? All i want to hear is how you can’t wait to write the next chappy, and how you are going to get B&T together again no matter how weird your boyfriend gets. I don’t care if he sprouts a new head, T, GET’R DONE!!! Oh, and if you are a really good girl, I’ll even buy dessert for you on our date tonight;)!!!
WOooooooooHhhhhhhhoooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo..!!!!after the long wait…tada..!!thumbs is back thumbs is back.. *happy dance* LOL~ sure is high time gal…keep in touch gal..dun go MIA too long!great update..still loving it!
Wow, it’s great to have you back. And, oh so good to have things, well as least, start to fall into place. You’re on a roll, don’t stop now! With the way s3 has been going, I know I’m going to need you story to help get me through. That IC doesn’t seem to be much of a B/T fan, so I’ll rely on fanfic, for happier times. More, please, you’re doing great!!!
Oh I loved it. Two months wasn’t that that long. Hey I know all about the life getting in your way part. I am so enjoying not having the selfimposed pressure to get another chapter out. But never the less I love your story and how you tell it. I can’t imagine Mel missing the connection between Tina and Bette. Now we just have to get them to sit down and be honest. I think Tina’s ready and it looks like Bette’s getting close too. I’ll still wait. THanks
Good to see youre back and good chapter. Now its time to say bye to Mel and hello to Tina and let them work thing out. Ok post soon please, thanks!