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    Brief Encounter Chapter 26

    Story written on January 19, 2006 by Thumbs.
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    Bette “Tina, Tina, Tina”

     

    Mel:  Hey babe?

     

    Bette:  Huh?

     

    Mel walked over to me and placed the back of her palm on my forehead. 

     

    Mel:  Hmm your temperature seems normal.  Are you sure you’re ok?

     

    Bette:  Yeah I am I just you know, work.

     

    Mel:  Do you wanna lie down for a while?

     

    Bette:  Yeah I mean no.  We should go out.  You haven’t eaten a thing. 

     

    Mel:  Me?  It’s you I’m worried about!

     

    Bette:  Well, I’m taking care of you, you shouldn’t b worried about me.  I’m good I just am a little stressed about work.  But you know me!!!

     

    Mel:  Awww stressed?  You’ll do fine!  Don’t worry too much  It’s just the nerves 

     

    Bette:  Haha just the nerves?!?  Look who’s talking!

     

    Mel:  Haha look who’s talking?  Come on, let’s go out.  Give me a few minutes.  I just need to put something on. 

     

    Bette:  You sure?  I mean do you really want to?

     

    Mel:  Babe, do u really want me to go out in this robe?

     

    Bette:  Huh?  I meant

     

    Mel:  Yeah, yeah give me a minute

     

    I sighed as I watched Mel walked into the bedroom.

     

    —————————————

     

    Mel:  so what do you think?

     

    Bette:  Huh?

     

    Mel:  Babe what is the matter with you?

     

    Bette:  What did you ask?

     

    Mel:  No I thought it’d be good if we fly back on Wednesday?  Then it’ll give u time to sort things out at the gallery.

     

    Bette:  Oh uh yeah I was thinking of the same thing.  I mean I know they can handle things while I’m gone but I need to put some finishing touches before the show goes on the road.

     

    Mel:  Ok.

     

    Bette: Ok.

     

    I smiled at Mel and went back to staring at my coffee.  And I felt Mel’s hands on mine.  She took the cup away and placed it on the table. 

     

    She took my hands close to her chest.

     

    Bette:  Mel?

     

    Mel:  Babe, I know there is something wrong.  Please tell me.  I’m always here for you, you should know that

     

    Bette:  No..

     

    Mel: .. and don’t tell me its nothing cos I know something is wrong.  You haven’t been talking much since I came here.  Was it a very bad surprise to fly here? 

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    2. SOOOOOOOOOOOOO glad to have you back too…and yes bye bye Mel well we have to say bye to all of Mels we know..lol..and welcome true love…hey T please dont took forever to post again i missed you and about our portuguese class we will see..lol..later baby thanks :o)

    5. I just read your story Home (well, the first one) and I just have to say something to you about it, might as well be here, cause I don’t think you’ll read the comments of that one anymore ;-)”But I wouldn’t have called it some woman. It’d be one special woman. The woman I fell in love with the first time I saw her, the woman who made all things possible for me, the woman who showed me the world, the woman who makes my heart flutter, the woman who I’ve fallen madly in love with over and over again even after the long years, the woman who I would spend my life with and the woman who would always be my first, last and forever…”That part, wowwww, that just broke my heart, If that’s what Tina was feeling, how heartbroken must she have been after Bette cheating!! How awfull!! I almost cried haha.. Your writing is very good!!! thumbs up for you!!

    7. what to do? easy…go to tina and talk to her, tell her everything you feel and if tina doesn’t want her, bette can always go back to mel, who seems nice…talk to tina, now

    12. hey thumbsy!!!! ty for this story! I loved it! I just don’t know what all the whining is about, though! I mean what could possibly be more important in your life than writing FF? OK, besides me. Huh? Certainly not your old dorky bf! So, I don’t want to hear any more talk of putting on the brakes with this story, ya hear? All this about,*using whiny voice* “life is so busy and i’m not sure if anyone is still reading…and my leg hurts and my boyfriend is acting weird, and my doctor says i’m obese(which is soooo not true!)…and i’m running out of real excuses so i’m going to have to start making them up now (that will probably be your next FF chapter–4 pages of excuses!!!LOL) blah, blah, blah…WHATEVER T!!! I don’t want to hear anymore of it, K? All i want to hear is how you can’t wait to write the next chappy, and how you are going to get B&T together again no matter how weird your boyfriend gets. I don’t care if he sprouts a new head, T, GET’R DONE!!! Oh, and if you are a really good girl, I’ll even buy dessert for you on our date tonight;)!!!

    13. WOooooooooHhhhhhhhoooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo..!!!!after the long wait…tada..!!thumbs is back thumbs is back.. *happy dance* LOL~ sure is high time gal…keep in touch gal..dun go MIA too long!great update..still loving it!

    14. Wow, it’s great to have you back. And, oh so good to have things, well as least, start to fall into place. You’re on a roll, don’t stop now! With the way s3 has been going, I know I’m going to need you story to help get me through. That IC doesn’t seem to be much of a B/T fan, so I’ll rely on fanfic, for happier times. More, please, you’re doing great!!!

    15. Oh I loved it. Two months wasn’t that that long. Hey I know all about the life getting in your way part. I am so enjoying not having the selfimposed pressure to get another chapter out. But never the less I love your story and how you tell it. I can’t imagine Mel missing the connection between Tina and Bette. Now we just have to get them to sit down and be honest. I think Tina’s ready and it looks like Bette’s getting close too. I’ll still wait. THanks

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