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    Brief Encounter Chapter 26

    Story written on January 19, 2006 by Thumbs.
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    Bette “Tina, Tina, Tina”

     

    OMG bad surprise? 

     

    Bette:  No!!!  no that’s not it!

     

    Mel:  So what is it babe?  I mean, please don’t keep me in the dark!  I have been thinking about it all night.  I know you say it’s just pressure from work but I think there’s more to it than that please tell me

     

    Bette: I I dunno what to say

     

    Mel:  Just say whatever is on your mind babe.  I mean, is it us?  Is it moving too fast for you?  Cos if it is, we can work something out. 

     

    Bette:  No it’s not that Mel It’s a little complicated.  I mean it’s not you, it’s not us, it may be work but work isn’t a big part of it.  It’s, it’s just me.  And I feel like, I need to work on this myself.  I just, I’m a little lost, a little confused.  I dunno anymore Mel  I’m very very lost.

     

    Mel:  Please just. I’m here talk to me

     

    What should I tell her?  That I want Tina?  That I am still in love with her even after all this time?  I tried to speak but I just didn’t know what to say.

     

    Mel looked at me confused and worried.  I just wanted to tell her the truth.  I want to tell her what I feel for her, for Tina.  God I don’t know anymore.  This is all so confusing, even for me.  I looked at her hands and then looked up to face her.  I looked into her bemused eyes.  She tilts her head on one side as if trying to weigh out whatever I’ve said to her.  Her eyes squinted.

     

    Her face turned cold.  She knows!  OMG she knows.  I bowed my head down. 

     

    Mel:  I knew something like this would happen.

     

    Bette:  Huh?

     

    Mel let go of my hands.

     

    Mel:  I’ve booked a flight for tonight to fly back to New York. 

     

    Bette:  What?  When?

     

    Mel:  The flight’s in 2 hours time. 

     

    Bette:  But why?

     

    Mel:  I thought you sounded very different everytime u call me.  So I wanted to check on you make sure everything is alright and got on the first flight I could get when I get into New York.  But I also booked a seat today just in case.

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    2. SOOOOOOOOOOOOO glad to have you back too…and yes bye bye Mel well we have to say bye to all of Mels we know..lol..and welcome true love…hey T please dont took forever to post again i missed you and about our portuguese class we will see..lol..later baby thanks :o)

    5. I just read your story Home (well, the first one) and I just have to say something to you about it, might as well be here, cause I don’t think you’ll read the comments of that one anymore ;-)”But I wouldn’t have called it some woman. It’d be one special woman. The woman I fell in love with the first time I saw her, the woman who made all things possible for me, the woman who showed me the world, the woman who makes my heart flutter, the woman who I’ve fallen madly in love with over and over again even after the long years, the woman who I would spend my life with and the woman who would always be my first, last and forever…”That part, wowwww, that just broke my heart, If that’s what Tina was feeling, how heartbroken must she have been after Bette cheating!! How awfull!! I almost cried haha.. Your writing is very good!!! thumbs up for you!!

    7. what to do? easy…go to tina and talk to her, tell her everything you feel and if tina doesn’t want her, bette can always go back to mel, who seems nice…talk to tina, now

    12. hey thumbsy!!!! ty for this story! I loved it! I just don’t know what all the whining is about, though! I mean what could possibly be more important in your life than writing FF? OK, besides me. Huh? Certainly not your old dorky bf! So, I don’t want to hear any more talk of putting on the brakes with this story, ya hear? All this about,*using whiny voice* “life is so busy and i’m not sure if anyone is still reading…and my leg hurts and my boyfriend is acting weird, and my doctor says i’m obese(which is soooo not true!)…and i’m running out of real excuses so i’m going to have to start making them up now (that will probably be your next FF chapter–4 pages of excuses!!!LOL) blah, blah, blah…WHATEVER T!!! I don’t want to hear anymore of it, K? All i want to hear is how you can’t wait to write the next chappy, and how you are going to get B&T together again no matter how weird your boyfriend gets. I don’t care if he sprouts a new head, T, GET’R DONE!!! Oh, and if you are a really good girl, I’ll even buy dessert for you on our date tonight;)!!!

    13. WOooooooooHhhhhhhhoooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo..!!!!after the long wait…tada..!!thumbs is back thumbs is back.. *happy dance* LOL~ sure is high time gal…keep in touch gal..dun go MIA too long!great update..still loving it!

    14. Wow, it’s great to have you back. And, oh so good to have things, well as least, start to fall into place. You’re on a roll, don’t stop now! With the way s3 has been going, I know I’m going to need you story to help get me through. That IC doesn’t seem to be much of a B/T fan, so I’ll rely on fanfic, for happier times. More, please, you’re doing great!!!

    15. Oh I loved it. Two months wasn’t that that long. Hey I know all about the life getting in your way part. I am so enjoying not having the selfimposed pressure to get another chapter out. But never the less I love your story and how you tell it. I can’t imagine Mel missing the connection between Tina and Bette. Now we just have to get them to sit down and be honest. I think Tina’s ready and it looks like Bette’s getting close too. I’ll still wait. THanks

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