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Broken Voyagers
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”George drowned…” Bette sighed.
”How is all this going to help in finding this treasure?” Tina asked before adding in near defeat. ”Anything that could have pointed us in the direction of the wreck site has been erased.”
Bette lifted her gaze from the report she was reading and locked her gaze with Tina.
”This box has not given up all its secrets yet…” Bette let her words hang as she readied herself once more to work her magic.
This time, her interest was concentrated at the top of the box to the area where the inkwell compartments and pen tray were situated. Running her thumb, once more, along the inside panel of the side of the box along the very bottom of the box, which had been revealed by Bette’s previous action, the brunette press on the side in a similar way as she had previously.
The fact that a panel sprung open directly beneath the inkwell and pen tray compartment failed this time to astonish Tina. What the blonde was not prepared for however was to see appear in front of her eyes, two little drawers concealed behind the panel which fitted snuggly below the ink and pen tray compartment.
Her gasp was very audible.
Two little tufts of cloth had been fed through small drilled holes into the front of the drawers and served as makeshift handles.
With a trembling hand Bette reached for one handle and with one look requested Tina did the same with the other. The little concealed boxes slid out without much effort revealing their content.
Bette’s contained a rolled-up scroll and Tina’s a neatly folded piece of paper.
As both papers were unrolled and unfolded, a series of numbers and dots appeared.
”What is this?” Tina asked perplexed.
”It’s a cipher…” Bette replied
Chapter 5
Bette recognized the pattern almost immediately. It was her father’s favourite game all over again. The very one he used to play with her.
”It’s a Cipher.” Bette repeated her mouth hanging open slightly as she looked in awe at the pages of numbers and dots, “The very same one that my father made up when I was a child.”
“This is insane!” Tina declared, “This day is really turning out to be a bad remake of ‘National Treasure’.” She added dumbfounded as she herself was by the page she was holding which bore the exact same pattern.
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Hi! You one of my favourite writers and i very glad and happy that you returned and finished this amazing story! Thank you very much!
After i reading i leave another comment which will be more about story plot.
Wow Kins this takes care of my weekend reading!
Will comment again when I’ve read it.
Thanks in advance for posting.
SG
So glad you finished this story! Thank you for sticking it out and giving us this story. Loved it
Hi Kins,
So glad to see this story! It will take some time to read it and i will leave a comment after i finish.
Hi, welcom back, Kins!
Thank you for finished this story! Ok, now i’m going to read it.
Hi, Kins
Oh my God, Kins, welcome back, after almost 2 years, it’s been a long time, but reading the whole story now I feel, the wait was worth.
You have given us a quite wonderful and interesting story full of adventures and riddles and full of love of my favorite couple Bette and Tina.
You ended the story in a very good way, but I feel as if I want to know more about them, if Bette gets the funding for her project in Mexico, the wedding, their partnership, what Tina does for a job… and many more things.
I hope we could read more new beautiful stories from you; I like very much your style.
Thank you very much and please, post other TIBETTE stories
P
Ok, i read again this story, this time the whole and i’m ready to leave another comment.
First – thank you again for finish the story.
Second – happy to see happy final -treasure was found, bitch Kelly got lost. And i must say i like how you got rid from her – like in life we can say with 100% probability what happened – or she sank or she was killed by shark.
Third – i like how you described Bette and Tina and love between them. I like it in all your stories (maybe with one exception – in Frozen beginnings i don’t like your Bette during the story, but in final she corrected :) )
So, welcome back and maybe in the future we can see another great story from you? I really hope so.
Hi Kins,
Really enjoyed the read, thank you so much.
A great Story and I loved reading it in one post. As an English Lady I really enjoyed your explanation of Cricket!
I would love it if you would now consider a Sequel with these two characters.
Thanks again for posting.
SG
Welcom back, Kins!
I was a silent reader a long time, but after you finished this story i must register to say – “Thank you for fantastic story! And i hope this story won’t be your last on this site!”
Totaly agree with MissOne – i hope this story won’t be the last from you too!
Hi Kins,
You took us trough a incredible journey! Full of adventures, little clues i tried to catch to find the treasure, the background on the history of those ships and of course the love between Bette & Tina.
I really hope you will continu with a sequel or a new story.
Thank you so much for posting the whole story after two long years!
In-cre-di-ble! Kins, thank you so much for returning to this story and for giving us such a glorious and sweet ending. You’re such a talented writer. What a wonderful plot with astonishing details to the treasure hunt.
I second the previous comments and hope you’ll find the inspiration (and time) to work on a sequel. Maybe Bette’s project in Mexico with a twist with some unexpected traces of a legendary Aztec treasure ;)
Well ive read it at last.So pleased you managed to finish this story.I know how long it was in conception and all the research you did for its authenticity.
A great read.Loved the shark sequence.Found it quite thrilling.
Not as thrilling as the love scenes that you tell so well between Bette and Tina tho ????
Look forward to the next story that you will write for us.
Don’t make it too long a wait tho
C.x
Kins…!!! Yay! It’s really you!!
^_^
First, am so happy to see your name appear again! :) been so long!! So Glad to hear from you! hope all are fine for you and your love one!
Second, OMG…! The Long story at once!! Woohooo… such a great treat! THANKS!!
And third…. LOVE your story! This is so worthy! Appreciate your hard work in researching, plotting, writing and sharing this wonderful story! Your writing style is getting more interesting and fantastic! It’s Long pages but I just can’t stop reading it – well there’s a moment where I wanted to stop reading when that low creature kidnap her (ugh.. I don’t want to spoil the story).. it’s too much for me.. >.<
Again… thanks for sharing your talent here! :) if you ever consider to publish this, do update us here! ;-)
Take care always Kins! ^.^
Just finished reading. It was a fun read. Thanks for the adventure.
Wow!!!! Such rich detail that it feels so true ,.. as if you have near lived these experiences ur self. And along w the romance of it, I learned so much about ship wrecks and diving. Do post it on AO3 as well to get a broader audience… it belongs to stories worth sharing :)