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    Broken Voyagers

    Story written on October 5, 2018 by kins40.
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    Story Shortlink: https://lesfan.com/?p=95173
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    “We found so much more that day too,” the diver continued. From a locked cabinet, he lifted a plastic bag filled with sand that flecked with the unmistakable glimmer of gold dust. “There’s a river of gold dust down there,” he said, “Really fine dust. We also found a concretion that day. Innocuous to the

    “We found so much more that day too,” the diver continued.

    From a locked cabinet, he lifted a plastic bag filled with sand that flecked with the unmistakable glimmer of gold dust. “There’s a river of gold dust down there,” he said, “Really fine dust. We also found a concretion that day. Innocuous to the untrained eye, about 18 inches long. It looked like a piece of rusted metal, but the x-ray revealed coins… hundreds of them stacked up like poker chips.”

    Barry returned his attention to the open drawer and lifted a small cloth bag. He handed it to Bette.

    “Take a look inside.” He suggested.

    Bette upturned the little bag and let the single coin fall into the palm of her hand.

    “It’s a Spanish piece-of-eight.” Bette exclaimed marvelling at the silver piece which covered nearly the inside of her palm. It was blackened by the long time it had spent in the water and resembled a small charred pancake, but it was unambiguous as to its origin.

    “That’s right, and the last time a human touched it, it was being handled by a pirate or being used to buy human lives.”

    As dismal a reality as that last statement was, the grin of treasure fever suddenly gripped Bette and Tina alike. Bette knew now why this wreck was on the list. Her father had wanted her to feel the elation he had possibly felt when he had uncovered his treasure. She felt closer to her father’s treasure and for the first time since his death, she felt closer to her father.

     

     

     

     

     

     

     

    Chapter 12

    Back in their hotel room, Tina was sitting on their bed browsing a few pages on the internet and at the same time was listening to the conversation Bette was having with Kelly over the phone.

    The brunette was pacing impatiently up and down listening to the sharp voice.

    “Put her on speaker phone.” The blonde mouthed to a brunette who could do nothing else but grip fistfuls of her own hair in frustration at the irate tirade she was being subjected to.

    “You cannot overlook North Carolina!” the disembodied voice boomed across the space once Bette hit the speakerphone button on the screen of her smartphone.

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    1. Hi! You one of my favourite writers and i very glad and happy that you returned and finished this amazing story! Thank you very much!
      After i reading i leave another comment which will be more about story plot.

    6. Hi, Kins

      Oh my God, Kins, welcome back, after almost 2 years, it’s been a long time, but reading the whole story now I feel, the wait was worth.

      You have given us a quite wonderful and interesting story full of adventures and riddles and full of love of my favorite couple Bette and Tina.

      You ended the story in a very good way, but I feel as if I want to know more about them, if Bette gets the funding for her project in Mexico, the wedding, their partnership, what Tina does for a job… and many more things.

      I hope we could read more new beautiful stories from you; I like very much your style.
      Thank you very much and please, post other TIBETTE stories

      P

    7. Ok, i read again this story, this time the whole and i’m ready to leave another comment.

      First – thank you again for finish the story.

      Second – happy to see happy final -treasure was found, bitch Kelly got lost. And i must say i like how you got rid from her – like in life we can say with 100% probability what happened – or she sank or she was killed by shark.

      Third – i like how you described Bette and Tina and love between them. I like it in all your stories (maybe with one exception – in Frozen beginnings i don’t like your Bette during the story, but in final she corrected :) )

      So, welcome back and maybe in the future we can see another great story from you? I really hope so.

    8. Hi Kins,
      Really enjoyed the read, thank you so much.
      A great Story and I loved reading it in one post. As an English Lady I really enjoyed your explanation of Cricket!
      I would love it if you would now consider a Sequel with these two characters.
      Thanks again for posting.
      SG

    9. Welcom back, Kins!

      I was a silent reader a long time, but after you finished this story i must register to say – “Thank you for fantastic story! And i hope this story won’t be your last on this site!”

    11. Hi Kins,

      You took us trough a incredible journey! Full of adventures, little clues i tried to catch to find the treasure, the background on the history of those ships and of course the love between Bette & Tina.

      I really hope you will continu with a sequel or a new story.

      Thank you so much for posting the whole story after two long years!

    12. In-cre-di-ble! Kins, thank you so much for returning to this story and for giving us such a glorious and sweet ending. You’re such a talented writer. What a wonderful plot with astonishing details to the treasure hunt.

      I second the previous comments and hope you’ll find the inspiration (and time) to work on a sequel. Maybe Bette’s project in Mexico with a twist with some unexpected traces of a legendary Aztec treasure ;)

    13. Well ive read it at last.So pleased you managed to finish this story.I know how long it was in conception and all the research you did for its authenticity.
      A great read.Loved the shark sequence.Found it quite thrilling.
      Not as thrilling as the love scenes that you tell so well between Bette and Tina tho ????
      Look forward to the next story that you will write for us.
      Don’t make it too long a wait tho
      C.x

    14. Kins…!!! Yay! It’s really you!!
      ^_^

      First, am so happy to see your name appear again! :) been so long!! So Glad to hear from you! hope all are fine for you and your love one!

      Second, OMG…! The Long story at once!! Woohooo… such a great treat! THANKS!!

      And third…. LOVE your story! This is so worthy! Appreciate your hard work in researching, plotting, writing and sharing this wonderful story! Your writing style is getting more interesting and fantastic! It’s Long pages but I just can’t stop reading it – well there’s a moment where I wanted to stop reading when that low creature kidnap her (ugh.. I don’t want to spoil the story).. it’s too much for me.. >.<

      Again… thanks for sharing your talent here! :) if you ever consider to publish this, do update us here! ;-)

      Take care always Kins! ^.^

    16. Wow!!!! Such rich detail that it feels so true ,.. as if you have near lived these experiences ur self. And along w the romance of it, I learned so much about ship wrecks and diving. Do post it on AO3 as well to get a broader audience… it belongs to stories worth sharing :)

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