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Broken Voyagers
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Bette swallowed as delicate hands caressed the adequately sized mounds, squeezing lightly before pushing them together and up in an enticing cleavage.
The next sound Bette heard was that of her own gasp as her brain kicked in and forced her body, now near deprived of oxygen, to take a lifesaving breath. Her hand shot to the wall where she steadied herself as a wave of dizziness took over.
She felt warm and her brain seemed to misfire repetitively, rendering her incapable of rationalising what she was doing. She knew it was wrong and disrespectful, but the woman was beautiful and to top it all, totally unaware that Bette was standing there in the dark looking at her.
Bette drew her bottom lip in between her teeth, her cognitive function returning slowly just on time for her to realise that the blonde couldn’t possible see her.
She clenched her thighs together aware of the fire which had sparked to life in her lower belly. It started burning slowly licking every nerve in her tensed body awakening her most basic instincts.
She licked her lips when next, practised feminine hands reached behind the petite frame to flick open the clasp of her bra letting it fall down her arms. The small surprisingly unassuming garment found its way to the floor joining there the shirt previously discarded.
A shudder ran the length of Bette’s spine. Just as she had thought, they were perfect. The girl was perfect. Her mouth watered at the vison of the two most flawless delectable mouthfuls on display. Creamy and perfectly shaped the deliciousness of the sight further enhanced by the dusky pink of her nipples.
Bette’s grip on her curtain tightened. Her brain was screaming at her to stop her intrusion. To stop involving herself in this shameless show but her resolve was battling her will with renewed strength especially when the girl resumed cupping her breast again, bare this time. It occurred to the brunette then that whatever she was witnessing was not just someone getting ready for bed. No. This girl was enjoying what she was doing.
Thumbs circled and brushed stiffened nipples while fingers spread and held her breasts gently caressing the sensitive underside. From her spot, Bette could only but imagine the sounds coming from the blonde’s mouth. She could see her closing her eyes at the self-inflicted ministrations, eyes fluttering shut, mouth opening in a softly exhaled ‘oh!’, legs closing tightly as she doubled up a bit leaving little to no doubt as to where the blonde’s actions were echoing.
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Hi! You one of my favourite writers and i very glad and happy that you returned and finished this amazing story! Thank you very much!
After i reading i leave another comment which will be more about story plot.
Wow Kins this takes care of my weekend reading!
Will comment again when I’ve read it.
Thanks in advance for posting.
SG
So glad you finished this story! Thank you for sticking it out and giving us this story. Loved it
Hi Kins,
So glad to see this story! It will take some time to read it and i will leave a comment after i finish.
Hi, welcom back, Kins!
Thank you for finished this story! Ok, now i’m going to read it.
Hi, Kins
Oh my God, Kins, welcome back, after almost 2 years, it’s been a long time, but reading the whole story now I feel, the wait was worth.
You have given us a quite wonderful and interesting story full of adventures and riddles and full of love of my favorite couple Bette and Tina.
You ended the story in a very good way, but I feel as if I want to know more about them, if Bette gets the funding for her project in Mexico, the wedding, their partnership, what Tina does for a job… and many more things.
I hope we could read more new beautiful stories from you; I like very much your style.
Thank you very much and please, post other TIBETTE stories
P
Ok, i read again this story, this time the whole and i’m ready to leave another comment.
First – thank you again for finish the story.
Second – happy to see happy final -treasure was found, bitch Kelly got lost. And i must say i like how you got rid from her – like in life we can say with 100% probability what happened – or she sank or she was killed by shark.
Third – i like how you described Bette and Tina and love between them. I like it in all your stories (maybe with one exception – in Frozen beginnings i don’t like your Bette during the story, but in final she corrected :) )
So, welcome back and maybe in the future we can see another great story from you? I really hope so.
Hi Kins,
Really enjoyed the read, thank you so much.
A great Story and I loved reading it in one post. As an English Lady I really enjoyed your explanation of Cricket!
I would love it if you would now consider a Sequel with these two characters.
Thanks again for posting.
SG
Welcom back, Kins!
I was a silent reader a long time, but after you finished this story i must register to say – “Thank you for fantastic story! And i hope this story won’t be your last on this site!”
Totaly agree with MissOne – i hope this story won’t be the last from you too!
Hi Kins,
You took us trough a incredible journey! Full of adventures, little clues i tried to catch to find the treasure, the background on the history of those ships and of course the love between Bette & Tina.
I really hope you will continu with a sequel or a new story.
Thank you so much for posting the whole story after two long years!
In-cre-di-ble! Kins, thank you so much for returning to this story and for giving us such a glorious and sweet ending. You’re such a talented writer. What a wonderful plot with astonishing details to the treasure hunt.
I second the previous comments and hope you’ll find the inspiration (and time) to work on a sequel. Maybe Bette’s project in Mexico with a twist with some unexpected traces of a legendary Aztec treasure ;)
Well ive read it at last.So pleased you managed to finish this story.I know how long it was in conception and all the research you did for its authenticity.
A great read.Loved the shark sequence.Found it quite thrilling.
Not as thrilling as the love scenes that you tell so well between Bette and Tina tho ????
Look forward to the next story that you will write for us.
Don’t make it too long a wait tho
C.x
Kins…!!! Yay! It’s really you!!
^_^
First, am so happy to see your name appear again! :) been so long!! So Glad to hear from you! hope all are fine for you and your love one!
Second, OMG…! The Long story at once!! Woohooo… such a great treat! THANKS!!
And third…. LOVE your story! This is so worthy! Appreciate your hard work in researching, plotting, writing and sharing this wonderful story! Your writing style is getting more interesting and fantastic! It’s Long pages but I just can’t stop reading it – well there’s a moment where I wanted to stop reading when that low creature kidnap her (ugh.. I don’t want to spoil the story).. it’s too much for me.. >.<
Again… thanks for sharing your talent here! :) if you ever consider to publish this, do update us here! ;-)
Take care always Kins! ^.^
Just finished reading. It was a fun read. Thanks for the adventure.
Wow!!!! Such rich detail that it feels so true ,.. as if you have near lived these experiences ur self. And along w the romance of it, I learned so much about ship wrecks and diving. Do post it on AO3 as well to get a broader audience… it belongs to stories worth sharing :)