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    Can’t Help Falling in Love Chapter 13

    Story written on June 18, 2005 by flairforthedramatic.
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    Story Shortlink: https://lesfan.com/?p=54871
    Author Notes:

    “Don’t procrastinate, don’t articulate, girl it’s getting late, you just sit and wait around!”
    There is nothing worse then shopping while bitter!

    Alice stepped between them as quickly as she could

    Alice: I dont think I like that idea very much!

    Tina took Alice by the arm and led her to the other side of the changing room.

    Tina: OK, first of all, we arent a couple and Bette knows that.

    Alice: How?

    Tina: She just does. She knows me.

    Alice: Fine.

    Alice resigned.

    Alice: TK if she makes you happy I wont stand in the way. But you are my best friend and the idea of that…that…

    Alice was looking for some kind of awful name to call Bette.

    Tina: Gorgeous.

    Alice: Not the adjective I was looking for! I was gonna say evil, dirty *****.

    Tina rolled her eyes.

    Alice: Fine, for arguments sake lets just say SHE. The idea that SHE is going to hurt you kills me. But what hurts even more is that I know I cant take away the pain. I can be here to comfort you, but I cant make it all better. And that will be HER fault.

    Tina: Im sorry Al. I know it hurts you to watch me get…

    Alice: Crushed.

    Tina giggled.

    Tina: Not the adjective I was looking for. I was going to say hurt.

    Alice: I like crushed better. It is a stronger word. Makes a more vivid picture.

    Tina: OK, crushed it is. I know you hate to see that. But Im not going back to her. I wont put myself in that situation. I just want to hear what she has to say.

    Alice gave in.

    Alice: Fine go.

    Tina gave Alice a peck on cheek and headed back to Bette.

    Alice yelled out to her friend.

    Alice: STAY STRONG YOUNG SOLIDER.

    Tina turned back to smile at her best friend and then headed into the battle field.

    Tina: OK, lets talk.

    Bette looked around for somewhere private. She spotted the dressing room at the end of the row and took Tinas hand.

    Bette: Come on.

    The two women stepped inside and suddenly realized how small the room was. Tina could feel Bettes breath on her lips. Bette placed her hands on Tinas upper arms as if to hold her place.

    Bette: Ive missed you.

    Tina didnt respond.

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    4. Ouch ! I assumed one of the directors Bette used to sleep with called her ‘punkin pie’…..though I don’t agree with what Bette did to be famous and stay that way….but I do pity her…and I do feel that no one can judge how Bette feels cuz we’re not in her shoes…so it’s unfair the way Alice and Alex treated her…anyway…good chapter….hehe…thaanks…

    8. Hmm, curiouser and curiouser! I was thinking Tina was better off without this Bette after she shagged some bloke, but you’re adding more layers on intrigue! I like it! More please.

    11. Wonderful story. Once i finish the newest chapter I find myself going back to the beginning and starting it all over again. I’m not a big poster or commenter but you’ve got a lovely style or writing. Thankyou for a plot that doesn’t cling to the shows, for dialogue that is not inane and characters who have depth and emotion. And suspense must be your middle name. P.S. I hope when you say one more chapter you don’t mean your last post? I’d go into withdrawal for motnhs….

    15. Wow!!! U got me wondering about the “punkin pie,” comment. U are doing such a great job & I can’t wait to read more. I hope that Bette comes to her senses & doesn’t loose Tina & I love how funny u have made Alice.

    16. Bring on the drama, if your writing it, I want it, can’t wait to hear the story behind “punkin pie”. Thanks for the update, it makes my day so much better. So writers block??, we can’t have that.

    17. oohhh…your the best…I’m thinking Tina doesn’t know about pumpkin pie…but it’s not something to be proud of….will she tell tina?? Will Bette confront???….sitting on the edge of my seat about to fall off…Tks for the post…

    19. The loyalty of your Alice for Tina is tremendously supportive and heartwarming. She more than compensates for all the meddling Alices in all the other stories combined. This is an interesting twist – Alice is usually primarily Bette’s friend. This and so many other plot inversions make for a very engaging fanfic!
      I’m loving every minute!
      And what or who is Punkin Pie, besides a very delicious dessert, particularly with whipped cream?
      This Alice is to Tina as Annette was to Jennie – everyone needs a unconditional friend. I’m so glad Tina has one in Alice. Maybe she’ll wake up and see the person who truly loves her. It’s Alice.
      Bette can go jump in the Central Park Lake!

    20. I loved it! but don’t leave us hanging here for to long! I wanna know whats up with that punkin pie thing! And please get B/T together! or they have to get together sometime right?

    21. OMG that was so good…Alice what have you discovered, i wonder…”punkin pie” now i have no idea what this is about, i’m not going to even guess but i’m sure we will find out, oh god Bette is spooked….what is Chad’s role in all of this.
      Thank you.

    27. Those are some really great crumbs, you gave us, thanks, I am so loving your story. now my sick my is guessing that pumkin pie was a porn flick that Bette was dinner in.

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