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    Can’t Help Falling in Love Chapter 13

    Story written on June 18, 2005 by flairforthedramatic.
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    Story Shortlink: https://lesfan.com/?p=54871
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    “Don’t procrastinate, don’t articulate, girl it’s getting late, you just sit and wait around!”
    There is nothing worse then shopping while bitter!

    Bette: Ow!

    Tina: I hope it hurts! You deserve to feel the same pain you have caused me to feel.

    Bette placed her hand on Tinas thigh and quickly moved it up towards Tinas hot center.

    Tina: Dont.

    Tina knew she was saying no and yet she couldnt manage to pull herself away.

    Bette was grateful for the slit in Tinas dress. She thrust her hands up and let just one finger enter Tinas wet core.

    Tina moaned loudly causing Alice to ask if she was ok. Tina stuttered out a quick “uh huh”.

    Bette: This is what you want isnt it?

    Tina didnt respond. Bette placed her scorching lips back on Tinas. She let another finger slip quickly into her lover. Tina rode Bettes fingers knowing she wasnt far from climaxing,

    And then a bolt of a lightening hit her. This wasnt what she wanted! Not at all. Tina pushed Bette off of her.

    Tina: No, I dont want this! I dont want you!

    Bettes smirked hoping Tina would think she didnt care, but her eyes expressed all the pain in the world. Tina knew if she looked into them any longer she would just give. She couldnt.

    Tina: This never happened and will never happen again.

    With that Tina opened the door and walked out toward another room.

    Tina: Ill be right there Al, I just need to change out of this thing.

    Alice followed at Tinas heels.

    Alice: Are you ok?

    Tina: I am just fine!

    Alice: Ok.

    Tina locked the door to dressing room and slid to the ground. The tears flowed freely down her red cheeks. She was so angry and not at Bette. She was angry at herself for wanting Bette so much. For being so close to running back into the same arms that had betrayed her. She almost screwed it all up.

    Bette had quickly changed out of her gown back into jeans. When she stepped out of the dressing room Alice and Chad were standing right there, shock on both of their faces.

    Chad: Bette, you ok?

    Bette: Im great!

    Bette lied. After all she was an actress she could at least ACT like her heart wasnt ripped out.

    Bette: Chad lets buy this stupid thing and get out of here.

    Chad: You got it.

    Alice knew something awful had just happened. She knew Tina to well and should could read her face like a book. She wouldnt just let Bette off the hook.

    Alice: Hey!

    Bette turned around.

    Alice: Good luck at the Tonys punkin pie.

    Chads face contorted in confusion. But no matter how great an actress Bette was she couldnt hide her shock. She quickly turned away from Alice who was now smirking in victory. Bette dropped her dress to the ground and stormed out of the store.

    Alice thought to herself. Thatll teach you ya crazy *****.

    Bette was practically running down the street. She ran past Chad who just stood there shocked. The tears were burning her cheeks as she ran. Finally when Bette was completely out of breath she fell back on a bench with her head tucked to her knees.

    Bette: How would she have known about “punkin pie”?

    TBC….

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    4. Ouch ! I assumed one of the directors Bette used to sleep with called her ‘punkin pie’…..though I don’t agree with what Bette did to be famous and stay that way….but I do pity her…and I do feel that no one can judge how Bette feels cuz we’re not in her shoes…so it’s unfair the way Alice and Alex treated her…anyway…good chapter….hehe…thaanks…

    8. Hmm, curiouser and curiouser! I was thinking Tina was better off without this Bette after she shagged some bloke, but you’re adding more layers on intrigue! I like it! More please.

    11. Wonderful story. Once i finish the newest chapter I find myself going back to the beginning and starting it all over again. I’m not a big poster or commenter but you’ve got a lovely style or writing. Thankyou for a plot that doesn’t cling to the shows, for dialogue that is not inane and characters who have depth and emotion. And suspense must be your middle name. P.S. I hope when you say one more chapter you don’t mean your last post? I’d go into withdrawal for motnhs….

    15. Wow!!! U got me wondering about the “punkin pie,” comment. U are doing such a great job & I can’t wait to read more. I hope that Bette comes to her senses & doesn’t loose Tina & I love how funny u have made Alice.

    16. Bring on the drama, if your writing it, I want it, can’t wait to hear the story behind “punkin pie”. Thanks for the update, it makes my day so much better. So writers block??, we can’t have that.

    17. oohhh…your the best…I’m thinking Tina doesn’t know about pumpkin pie…but it’s not something to be proud of….will she tell tina?? Will Bette confront???….sitting on the edge of my seat about to fall off…Tks for the post…

    19. The loyalty of your Alice for Tina is tremendously supportive and heartwarming. She more than compensates for all the meddling Alices in all the other stories combined. This is an interesting twist – Alice is usually primarily Bette’s friend. This and so many other plot inversions make for a very engaging fanfic!
      I’m loving every minute!
      And what or who is Punkin Pie, besides a very delicious dessert, particularly with whipped cream?
      This Alice is to Tina as Annette was to Jennie – everyone needs a unconditional friend. I’m so glad Tina has one in Alice. Maybe she’ll wake up and see the person who truly loves her. It’s Alice.
      Bette can go jump in the Central Park Lake!

    20. I loved it! but don’t leave us hanging here for to long! I wanna know whats up with that punkin pie thing! And please get B/T together! or they have to get together sometime right?

    21. OMG that was so good…Alice what have you discovered, i wonder…”punkin pie” now i have no idea what this is about, i’m not going to even guess but i’m sure we will find out, oh god Bette is spooked….what is Chad’s role in all of this.
      Thank you.

    27. Those are some really great crumbs, you gave us, thanks, I am so loving your story. now my sick my is guessing that pumkin pie was a porn flick that Bette was dinner in.

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