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    Can’t Help Falling In Love Chapter 16

    Story written on June 21, 2005 by flairforthedramatic.
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    Story Shortlink: https://lesfan.com/?p=54926
    Author Notes:

    “Return To Sender…”
    STRESS

    Tina shot her a suspicious look.

    Alex: No she’s right kiddo. I mean what if you open it and
    inside is like a letter bomb or something…you know? We should be here to
    deactivate it. Don’t you think?

    Tina; You guys are really grasping at straws here but fine
    you can stay.

    Tina eyed her name on the front of the envelope. She ran her
    fingers across the ridges the ink made in the paper while trying to imagine
    poor Bette sitting down to write this.

    Alex: Anytime you’re ready…

    Alice began humming the theme song to Jeopardy.

    Tina: I swear the two of you were separated at birth,
    equally annoying.

    They smiled at each other and Tina began slowly opening the
    letter. She removed the card out of the envelope and took a deep calming
    breath. She opened the card and her eyes grew wide.

    Tina: What does this mean???

    Alex: What?

    Alice: What does what mean??

    Tina handed them the card and walked over to the couch.
    Inside the card Bette had only written “T-”.

    Tina: why didn’t she finish it?

    Alice: That’s just eerie.

    Alex: you don’t think she did anything stupid…do you?

    Alice: Define stupid.

    Alex: You know what I mean!

    Tina: Oh god, what if she did?

    Panic flooded Tina’s face. She jumped up from the couch and
    began pacing back and forth.

    Tina: I’m sure she wouldn’t have done anything like that. I
    mean she has so much to live for. Her career, her friends…

    Alice: Her tony nomination.

    Tina: Yeah, I mean that nomination means the world to her, I
    know it does.

    Alex: OK, let’s not get ahead of our selves here. I’m sure
    she’s fine. She probably just didn’t know what to say so that’s what she wrote.

    Alice: yeah I agree with Alex. I’m sure she’s fine. Just
    call her.

    Tina: Yes, good idea. I’ll call her.

    Tina reached for her phone and scrolled to Bette’s number. She
    quickly pressed, “send” and starred at her friends.

    “Hey you’ve reached Bette, I’m not available to take your
    call right now. Leave a message. If it’s an emergency you can try to reach me
    on my pedestal.” <beep>

    Tina hit “end” and dropped her head.

    Alice: what happened?

    Alex: Voicemail?

    Tina: Yeah. It didn’t even ring which means the phone is
    off, or it’s dead.

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    1. Ohh Gosh!!!! Here comes The Drama !!!! ;)
      I am totally hooked to ur story . I love it . I am so happy to see ur posts . But u can’t stop there !! come on plsss post the next chapter right now plssss . pretty pls with sweet sugar on top :)) . I can’t wait to read what happens next !!! I am sitting here at the edge of my seat holding my breath !!
      I think Tina should have gone to talk with Bette instead of sending Alice with the letter . I really hope that B&T work it out and realise that they Love each other and I hope that , Bette realises that Tee is the one for her :D
      Keep up the gr8 work and pls continue with the story and post sooooooon !!
      And don’t worry , ur writing is so amazing that I for sure won’t ever lose my interest in this wonderful story :D . Consider me a Big fan of ur’s ;)) * kisses *
      Gazillion stars to u all the wayyyy !!!
      Thanx :D
      P.S. I am eagerly awaiting ur next post !! :D

    3. Hey :)) I agree with Bette&TinaForever . I would totally Love to see some Happy TiBette times in the story , Together with each other..Happy and In Love !!! ahhhhh… *Happy Sigh* :D
      Thanx . :)

    7. Totally waiting for your next posts…and seeing that you have so many fans…maybe you can rethink that outside your writing work thing…I’m sure we fans can all pitch in and you’d be a millionaire and only have time to write……buttering you up enough??? Eagerly awaiting followup chapter….sooo exciting!!!!!!

    9. This is such a good story! It’s so refreshing to experience the B&T saga in a whole different context! I’m believing every word you write!
      Thanks.
      And so what if it isn’t my birthday, a girl can wish for a happy ending anyway, can’t she?????

    12. ahhhhhhh what a joy to see your post! What was Bette thinking when she wrote her letter? What is Bette thinking! She needs to come out during her Tony award. Not that I would ever pressure anyone to come out but when you are in love with someone it makes it a hell of a lot easier ;] Thank you for the great post! Where are you from?

    16. The message on the voicemail had me LMAO! Once again the perfect combo of comedy and drama! You are the queen and deserve your own pedestal.

    18. WOOHOO, a new chapter.. =D
      OK this is turtore, 1st you keep me thinking what Bette wrote in the card and all we get is T-..
      2nd you can’t stop here, you’re such a tease *sniff, sniff*

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