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    Can’t Help Falling In Love Chapter 16

    Story written on June 21, 2005 by flairforthedramatic.
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    “Return To Sender…”
    STRESS

    Alice: maybe she’s just in a bad area for reception.

    Tina: Or maybe she took a nice long walk OFF the Brooklyn
    bridge! What do I do?? I mean should I call the police?

    Alice: I think it’s a little early for that. Does she have a
    home phone number?

    Tina: Yeah, I have that number somewhere.

    Tina dug through her purse. She remembered Bette handing it
    to her on a piece of paper.

    Tina: Please God tell me I didn’t throw it away!!! Oh, got
    it!

    Tina reached for her phone again and dialed the new number.
    As the phone rang and rang Tina’s face became more pale.

    Alice: She’s not answering?

    Tina: No. *****, what should I do?

    Alex: Maybe we should go to her apartment, she could just be
    sleeping.

    Alice: Guys I hate to say this, but maybe she doesn’t want
    to be found. Maybe we should just give her some space.

    Alex: She might be right kid.

    Tina: And what if I wait and she is sitting somewhere alone
    and scared and needs me?

    Alex: why don’t you just jot her a note. Let her know that
    you’re here for her. She has a show tonight and you KNOW she’ll be there.

    Tina smiled at the faint memory of what Bette had told her a
    few days ago. ” Bette Porter never misses a show!”

    Alex: So just drop it off at the stage door later today.

    Tina sighed. She silently thanked god for her friends. If it
    weren’t them she would be down at 1 Police Plaza filing a missing persons
    report.

    Tina: That’s a great idea.

    Tina took a piece of notebook paper and a pen. She starred
    at the blank lines.

    Alex could sense she was nervous to say the wrong thing.

    Alex: Just keep it simple. Let her know that you’re here.
    That’s it.

    Tina took another deep breath and touched the pen to the
    paper.

                Bette,

    Whenever you’re ready to talk, I’m here to listen.
    Whenever….

                                        T

    She folded the paper and prayed to herself that Bette was
    truly ok.

    Alex: We have to go to work babe.

    Tina: I know.

    Tina looked over at Alice.

    Tina: Can I trust you to do me a huge favor?

    Alice: Anything.

    Tina: I am going to need you to take this to the stage
    door.  Can you do that?

    Alice: Of course I can.

    Tina took Alice’s hands in her own.

    Tina: Alice please baby. Please.

    Alice: I know. You have my word.

    Tina: Ok good.

    Tina looked over at Alex.

    Alex: Let’s get out of here.

    As Tina and Alex scrambled out the door Alice stood in the
    door way.

    Alice: I won’t let you down, I promise.

    Tina smiled and offered Alice her pinky.

    Tina: Pinky promise?

    Alice: Pinky promise!

    They hadn’t done that since they were kids but everyone
    knows, you don’t ever break a pinky promise no matter how old you are!

    With that the door closed and Alice starred at the letter.
    Part of her wanted to throw it away. She wanted to grab her friend by the
    shoulders and shake some sense into her. She needed to tell Tina that Bette would
    never be who she wanted her to be. She could never treat her as well as I
    could. Like a queen. With that Alice turned the doorknob and headed out to the
    theatre. When Alice rounded the corner she spotted the stage door. It took
    every ounce of energy she had to hit the buzzer.Related

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    Comments

    1. Ohh Gosh!!!! Here comes The Drama !!!! ;)
      I am totally hooked to ur story . I love it . I am so happy to see ur posts . But u can’t stop there !! come on plsss post the next chapter right now plssss . pretty pls with sweet sugar on top :)) . I can’t wait to read what happens next !!! I am sitting here at the edge of my seat holding my breath !!
      I think Tina should have gone to talk with Bette instead of sending Alice with the letter . I really hope that B&T work it out and realise that they Love each other and I hope that , Bette realises that Tee is the one for her :D
      Keep up the gr8 work and pls continue with the story and post sooooooon !!
      And don’t worry , ur writing is so amazing that I for sure won’t ever lose my interest in this wonderful story :D . Consider me a Big fan of ur’s ;)) * kisses *
      Gazillion stars to u all the wayyyy !!!
      Thanx :D
      P.S. I am eagerly awaiting ur next post !! :D

    3. Hey :)) I agree with Bette&TinaForever . I would totally Love to see some Happy TiBette times in the story , Together with each other..Happy and In Love !!! ahhhhh… *Happy Sigh* :D
      Thanx . :)

    7. Totally waiting for your next posts…and seeing that you have so many fans…maybe you can rethink that outside your writing work thing…I’m sure we fans can all pitch in and you’d be a millionaire and only have time to write……buttering you up enough??? Eagerly awaiting followup chapter….sooo exciting!!!!!!

    9. This is such a good story! It’s so refreshing to experience the B&T saga in a whole different context! I’m believing every word you write!
      Thanks.
      And so what if it isn’t my birthday, a girl can wish for a happy ending anyway, can’t she?????

    12. ahhhhhhh what a joy to see your post! What was Bette thinking when she wrote her letter? What is Bette thinking! She needs to come out during her Tony award. Not that I would ever pressure anyone to come out but when you are in love with someone it makes it a hell of a lot easier ;] Thank you for the great post! Where are you from?

    16. The message on the voicemail had me LMAO! Once again the perfect combo of comedy and drama! You are the queen and deserve your own pedestal.

    18. WOOHOO, a new chapter.. =D
      OK this is turtore, 1st you keep me thinking what Bette wrote in the card and all we get is T-..
      2nd you can’t stop here, you’re such a tease *sniff, sniff*

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