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Can’t Help Falling in Love Chapter 25
Tina: Perhaps we should go back inside now.
Bette stood up first quickly reaching for her shorts and shirt. Tina couldnt resist, she planted a sweet kiss on Bettes taught stomach.
Bette: What was that for?
Tina: Im not sure.
Bette: Im ok with that.
Tina had slid on her sweat pants and t shirt and helped herself up.
She took a hold of Bettes hand and led her back down the steps.
They paused outside of Tinas apartment.
Bette: Maybe I shouldnt come in.
Tina: Why?
Bette: You said Alice was sleeping. I dont want to wake her.
Tina kissed Bette gently, letting her tongue lick at Bettes lips.
Tina: So when your coming, dont scream.
Bette slapped Tina on the ***** and followed her inside.
Tina: I think well be sleeping on the couch.
Bette: wheres Alice?
Tina: Shes in the bed.
Bette: You guys were sharing a bed?
Tina: Is that a problem?
Bette; Oh no. I was just curious.
Tina: Bette Porter I do believe you might be jealous.
Bette: Have you guys ever messed around?
Tina: When we were younger we used kiss and touch, but we were kids it was nothing.
In the other room Alices ears perked up at the mention of her name. She had heard the whole conversation unfold. She always knew nothing between she and Tina was serious but to hear it come out of her mouth like that, really stung. Alice took a deep breath and turned her head toward the door. To her Tina was like the sun. It was beautiful and mysterious. You knew if you starred too long it would burn your eyes and yet you always had to look.
Bette: Any chance we could get a quick shower?
Tina: Together?
Bette: That was the plan.
Tina: Ok.
Bette: But no getting freaky!
Tina: What!! Then where is the fun?
Bette: I need you to trust me on this. Unless you have a HUGE shower, ***** in it is over rated. You wind up getting all pruned and your knees get bruised from the floor of the tub.
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(52 votes, average: 3.96 out of 5)
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Poor alice, but if i was in her place i would stay and watch.. ppl pay to see these stuff.. LOL.. nah i would rather die before seeing any one i know having sex..
Fuck, I almost passed out. Poor, poor Alice. “The worst thing in the world is to watch the one you love, love somebody else.” Thats tough stuff. Well in this situation sum1 always gets hurt, but I hope it runs out for the best.
Poor Alice – could you write in a love interest for her as well. And… EXCELLENT job with the NC-17. HUBBA.
Great chapter………but I know your setting us up for the Drama next with Helena; thinking we’d forget…be gentle pls….tks
Geeeezzzz…OMG…i´m sorry but i think cold shower is not enought for me right now..i need a tub with a lot of ice..amazing fucking chapter..
Hey Flair…you know I’m taking notes, right? haha. I’m all warm and tingly now…thanks…I guess :-D
MEgga- Well, that was fun! I LOVE this story, please post again soon!
Oh damn that was so fucking hot and damn so awesome and excellent, love it. Damn damn so hot hot hot, love it. Poor Alice, well maybe she will find Dana or someone later. Post soon, thanks! Excellent chapter, so fucking hot!
god, every time i read a new chapter it just reminds me why this is my fav story. i’m glad B&T are together, but i can’t help but feel like something will go wrong. will alice stick around to pick up the pieces? and i find myself wondering what alice and tina would be like together. aw, man now i wanna read the next chapter so bad, post soon!
You have more than a flair for the dramatic. That was,I dont know I’m speechless.
Love Bette and Tina together but felt bad for Alice in this chapter.
Just started reading this from the beginning. So far…..very hot! Been fanning myself like mad. One problem though – ch 25 pg 4 doesnt load no matter what browser I use.
hahahhahah ecstasythrumusic, you cracked me up.
but it’s true, right? these two are SMOKIN’.
oh poor ecstasythurmusic, you don’t know what your missing out on, don’t worry someday you’ll find it. F damm girl can it get any hotter, poor alice that must be heart breaking, feelin for her right, not really cause I’m sure she watched the whole thing. Can’t wait to see what Bette does to Helena.
Wow Flair that was HOT!!! You do NC-17 very well!
Quite the workout! Did you intend for their encounter to lack, how can I say it, tenderness? It seems really rah-rah, full-on and that’s good, very good. Don’t get me wrong, I’m loving that they got together, thank you. But does Tina’s heart really belong to Alice? Is their affair “too hot not to cool down”?
Thank you for bringing it! Love this story!
Girl, you def know how to get things going. Great chapter. Post soon.
call 911!!!this was way too hot for words!!!great chapter, you rock!!!!!!
THat was hot. I wish sex was that good in real life.Then again maybe it is and i am not aware of it.You rock.
Your so bad ass. I usually don’t comment on the nc-17 stuff (im a bit of a prude sometimes) but that was great. I feel bad for Alice, I would die if I were ever in that situation. Your story really rawk’s the casbah!
K
Totally hot! Wow. Poor Alice, she needs to find someone for her. Love this so much.
Your new name is FreakNastyFlair ;p Your sex scenes are realistic, I mean right on target and for that you get a million stars, I was thinking Alice would have watched and done herself off, instead she has to call attention to herself and close the damn door! lol Well it’s nice to know your Bette knows all my moves and there are others out there that F*** like me! Yeaah, I said it!! Thank you for the update Miss Flair :)
SMOKIN alice needs to let it go for everybody sake
wow that was WOW so damn hot!!
That definately was H-O-T !!! Unlike some of you, I ain’t getting that kind of lovin’, f—–, so more power to those of you that are. And for the rest of us, we’ll just keep reading this story. (Smile) Post soon.