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Can’t Help Falling in Love Chapter 25
Tina: Then why does everyone always get soo crazy about ***** in showers?
Bette: I honestly have no idea.
The two woman scurried off to the bathroom and before long the water was running.
Alice sat up in the bed and wiped away the single tear that found its way down her cheek. She reached for her phone and dialed one of the few numbers she had memorized.
Gabby: Alice?
Alice: Hi.
Gabby: Do you have any idea what time it is?
Alice: Not really. Im in New York.
Gabby: What are doing there?
Alice sat in silence.
Gabby: Oh Alice. Are you still chasing after her? When are you gonna get it that it just isnt going to happen.
Alice: I know, I know. Im a glutton for punishment.
Gabby: Just come home, Ill make it all better. You know I know how!
Not now.
Alice: Who are you talking to?
Gabby: Just a friend.
Alice: Right, a friend. I hafta go. Ill call you tomorrow.
Alice hung up the phone defeated. Why would she even call Gabby? Of all people, she decided to call Satan herself! When she heard the water shut off in the bathroom Alice flung her body backwards and covered her head with the blanket. The bathroom door flew open and Bette and Tina emerged sharing a towel.
Tina: So when are you going to tell me what happened with Helena?
Bette: Tomorrow.
Tina: Do you swear?
Bette: I swear.
Tina: why not now?
Bette: I dont want to say anything until its over and done with.
Tina: Fine.
Tina grabbed the blanket off the couch and wrapped it around her almost dry body.
Bette felt the cool breeze hit her skin and shivered.
Bette: where are you going?
Tina: I was going to get some clothes for us.
Bette: Isnt that silly?
Tina: Why?
Bette: Ill just be peeling them off of you.
Tina: I know, thats part of the fun.
Tina crept softly into the bedroom hoping to not disturb Alice. Little did she know Alice was awake. Alices eyes peered out from under the cover as she watched Tina drop the blanket and slip on a pair of Arizona University boxers. Alice watched the arch of Tinas bare back as she reached for a tank top. This was pure torture! Within seconds Tina had grabbed a pair for Bette and scurried back into the living room. Lucky or unlucky for Alice the view from the bedroom door was the couch. She watched as Tina slowly removed the towel from Bettes damp body and ran her hands down Bettes back.
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(52 votes, average: 3.96 out of 5)
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Poor alice, but if i was in her place i would stay and watch.. ppl pay to see these stuff.. LOL.. nah i would rather die before seeing any one i know having sex..
Fuck, I almost passed out. Poor, poor Alice. “The worst thing in the world is to watch the one you love, love somebody else.” Thats tough stuff. Well in this situation sum1 always gets hurt, but I hope it runs out for the best.
Poor Alice – could you write in a love interest for her as well. And… EXCELLENT job with the NC-17. HUBBA.
Great chapter………but I know your setting us up for the Drama next with Helena; thinking we’d forget…be gentle pls….tks
Geeeezzzz…OMG…i´m sorry but i think cold shower is not enought for me right now..i need a tub with a lot of ice..amazing fucking chapter..
Hey Flair…you know I’m taking notes, right? haha. I’m all warm and tingly now…thanks…I guess :-D
MEgga- Well, that was fun! I LOVE this story, please post again soon!
Oh damn that was so fucking hot and damn so awesome and excellent, love it. Damn damn so hot hot hot, love it. Poor Alice, well maybe she will find Dana or someone later. Post soon, thanks! Excellent chapter, so fucking hot!
god, every time i read a new chapter it just reminds me why this is my fav story. i’m glad B&T are together, but i can’t help but feel like something will go wrong. will alice stick around to pick up the pieces? and i find myself wondering what alice and tina would be like together. aw, man now i wanna read the next chapter so bad, post soon!
You have more than a flair for the dramatic. That was,I dont know I’m speechless.
Love Bette and Tina together but felt bad for Alice in this chapter.
Just started reading this from the beginning. So far…..very hot! Been fanning myself like mad. One problem though – ch 25 pg 4 doesnt load no matter what browser I use.
hahahhahah ecstasythrumusic, you cracked me up.
but it’s true, right? these two are SMOKIN’.
oh poor ecstasythurmusic, you don’t know what your missing out on, don’t worry someday you’ll find it. F damm girl can it get any hotter, poor alice that must be heart breaking, feelin for her right, not really cause I’m sure she watched the whole thing. Can’t wait to see what Bette does to Helena.
Wow Flair that was HOT!!! You do NC-17 very well!
Quite the workout! Did you intend for their encounter to lack, how can I say it, tenderness? It seems really rah-rah, full-on and that’s good, very good. Don’t get me wrong, I’m loving that they got together, thank you. But does Tina’s heart really belong to Alice? Is their affair “too hot not to cool down”?
Thank you for bringing it! Love this story!
Girl, you def know how to get things going. Great chapter. Post soon.
call 911!!!this was way too hot for words!!!great chapter, you rock!!!!!!
THat was hot. I wish sex was that good in real life.Then again maybe it is and i am not aware of it.You rock.
Your so bad ass. I usually don’t comment on the nc-17 stuff (im a bit of a prude sometimes) but that was great. I feel bad for Alice, I would die if I were ever in that situation. Your story really rawk’s the casbah!
K
Totally hot! Wow. Poor Alice, she needs to find someone for her. Love this so much.
Your new name is FreakNastyFlair ;p Your sex scenes are realistic, I mean right on target and for that you get a million stars, I was thinking Alice would have watched and done herself off, instead she has to call attention to herself and close the damn door! lol Well it’s nice to know your Bette knows all my moves and there are others out there that F*** like me! Yeaah, I said it!! Thank you for the update Miss Flair :)
SMOKIN alice needs to let it go for everybody sake
wow that was WOW so damn hot!!
That definately was H-O-T !!! Unlike some of you, I ain’t getting that kind of lovin’, f—–, so more power to those of you that are. And for the rest of us, we’ll just keep reading this story. (Smile) Post soon.