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Capitulation Part II
Alice
Yeah, it is kinda nice when you can actually go out with someone, like in public and all.
Dana
Going out in public isnt everything, Al. You can do things, you know, like not in public.
Tina
(acting as if she did not hear this little interchange between Alice and Dana).
Shes been wonderful about the baby. Its nice to have someone tell you that you are attractive, especially when you arent feeling attractive. And, she is a great lover.
Alice
(obviously trying not to spit out her mouthful of coffee)
You mean you slept with her already?
Tina
Im an adult, Al, and its not like I did it on the first date.
Dana
So, what was it like, you know, being with somebody other than Bette?
Tina
It was good; despite my limited experience, I say that she is quite good in bed.
Alice
Better than Bette?
Tina
Al, is Dana better than Bette?
Dana
(spits out of coffee onto the table)
Huh?
Tina
You too couldnt be more obvious if you were trying.
Alice
*****. Does everybody know?
Tina
I suspect only the people who have been privy to your off the wall conversations about whether it is better to be in public or private.
Dana
*****.
Tina
I take it Tonya doesnt know.
Alice
Its not like that, Tina.
Tina
Look you guys, I dont want to know, okay. I just dont want to know.
EXT: FRONT PORCH OF BETTE AND TINAS HOUSE: NIGHT
(Shane is standing at the door, she knocks. Bette comes to the door casually dressed, holding a remote control in her hand).
Bette
Hey, Shane. Whats going on?
Shane
I just came by to say hi. If its a bad time
Bette
No, come in.
(Shane enters the house).
Bette
Im starting to remember why I rarely watch television. Everything is so stupid.
Shane
Yeah, my roommates always have it on, I wish they would just turn it off.
Bette
Would you like something to drink?
Shane
Sure, wadya got?
Bette
I think there are a couple of beers in the icebox. That okay?
Shane
Sounds great.
(Bette leaves and returns with 2 bottles of beer handing one to Shane before returning to her seat holding the other bottle).
Bette
So, what are you doing here on a Friday night? Have all of the women in West Hollywood been quarantined somewhere?
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(47 votes, average: 3.94 out of 5)
Ok so you have done it again…first emails back and forth, now Capitulation…and what a title…I hope you continue with this….you are doing a great….EXCELLENT…job…bravo
Damn…this one almost had me in tear…how can things get so fucked up?
Great update, but poor Bette and her Poo Sandwitches……:)-
I really like the script format. Thanks for capturing the nuance of the scene.
damn im on the verge of crying right now, it is soooo emotional. plz more
excellent story! thank you for writing it :)
seems i’m not the only one tonight whose life’s fucked up. It’s nice, in a weird way… But if theirs doesn’t get fixed (this being fiction), how can i expect mine to get better? Great chapter, and I’ll be waiting for the next one, hoping that in a few chapters, happiness’ll come around :)
What can I say, save, I liked it a lot, format and all.
It hell when you can get upset ove a F/F For a years we have laugh cryed and seen death broken heart wrecks you name it and your all have taken us there. Guess what I still love to read Fan Fiction. Now we are back to a broken heart. Love it thanks
Wow this is bad, Bette and Tina is divorced now and Tina now going out with Helena and now Bette is alone and lonely and hurt so bad. Anyway please post soon the next one soon, thank you! Great chapter!
I think my heart just broke over fictional characters. How can that happen…oh yeah, when the writing is as wonderful as yours. Thank you.