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    Capitulation Part II

    INT: THE PLANET: DAY
    Tina is sitting at the table with Alice and Dana. They are all drinking from coffee cups.

    Alice
    So, when do you go to the lawyer?

    Tina
    2:00

    Dana
    So, as usual. I dont understand what happened.

    Alice
    Bette totally capitulated.

    Dana
    Huh?

    Tina
    Apparently, her lawyer called my lawyer. Bette isnt challenging the divorce and wants it over with as quickly as possible. She is giving me more than half of everything and all of some things. The only thing she asked was to keep the house.

    Dana
    Whoa. Shes giving you all of some things?

    Tina
    Yeah, some CDs we had at the bank and a mutual fund. The rest of the accounts will be split in half.

    Dana
    So, I guess youre happy about this?

    Tina
    (looks sad)
    Im happy that this isnt going to be some long, drawn out, nasty legal battle.

    Dana
    I mean, about Bette giving in so quickly.

    Tina
    (turns to look out the window for a few seconds before answering)
    I guess she just wants to move on with her life.

    Dana
    Have you talked to her?

    Tina
    No, everything came from her attorney to my attorney.

    Dana
    Have you tried to talk to her?

    Alice
    Bette isnt exactly talking to anybody these days. She isnt taking calls at work and her cell goes to voice mail.

    Dana
    Have you gone to the house?

    Tina
    (looks down and shakes her head softly)
    No. (Stands). Ive gotta go. (Exits)

    Dana
    I cant believe Bette totally capitulated. That is so bad.

    Alice
    I agree. I mean, capitulation isnt always bad, but in this case it is.

    Dana
    No, it can be good when people capitulate.

    Alice
    Wheres Tonya by the way?

    Dana
    Shopping, probably finding more expensive stuff for when we register.

    Alice
    Yeah, to capitulate would be bad, wouldnt it?

    Dana
    (stands abruptly)
    Uh, I gotta go to the bathroom.
    (she turns and walks toward the restrooms.)

    Alice
    (sits thoughtfully for a moment and then stands and walks toward the restroom)

    INT: THE PLANET: EVENING
    Shane is sitting at a table with a cup of coffee. She is once again glancing at a newspaper. Tina approaches.

    Tina
    Hey, Shane can I join you?

    Shane
    (puts newspaper on table)
    Sure Tina, have a seat (pause as Tina settles in at the table.) So, how did it go?

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    Comments

    1. Ok so you have done it again…first emails back and forth, now Capitulation…and what a title…I hope you continue with this….you are doing a great….EXCELLENT…job…bravo

    2. seems i’m not the only one tonight whose life’s fucked up. It’s nice, in a weird way… But if theirs doesn’t get fixed (this being fiction), how can i expect mine to get better? Great chapter, and I’ll be waiting for the next one, hoping that in a few chapters, happiness’ll come around :)

    3. It hell when you can get upset ove a F/F For a years we have laugh cryed and seen death broken heart wrecks you name it and your all have taken us there. Guess what I still love to read Fan Fiction. Now we are back to a broken heart. Love it thanks

    4. Wow this is bad, Bette and Tina is divorced now and Tina now going out with Helena and now Bette is alone and lonely and hurt so bad. Anyway please post soon the next one soon, thank you! Great chapter!

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