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Capitulation Part II
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Shane
Nah, I thought Id take a night off.
Bette
Are you sick? Im worried here, Shane.
Shane
I promise, Im okay, man. Sometimes it just gets old, you know? Same faces, same routine, same story.
Bette
Yeah.
Shane
Uh, Tina and I had a little disagreement today.
Bette
Really?
Shane
She told us about Helena, well Alice already knew because someone saw them together. I told Tina that I thought it was pretty low.
Bette
Were divorced now, Shane. It is her right to move on with her life.
Shane
Honestly Bette. I mean, I know you and I dont do honesty when it comes to feelings and stuff, but honestly, are you okay with it?
Bette
I dont have a choice. I made a choice with Candace and now I am paying the consequences. Anyway, you want another drink?
(we return to the scene later, Bette and Shane are both drunk with margarita glasses and an empty pitcher on the floor between them as they sit on the floor, Shane has an ashtray next to her as she is smoking inside the house. Bette in condoning the smoking as she is smoking also).
Bette
(slurs her words slightly)
Besides, youre all alone when you face the murderers knife, anyway.
Shane
(slurring her words as well)
What the ***** are you talking about?
Bette
Nothing, who knows? Im drunk. How about another pitcher?
Shane
You think you can make another pitcher
Bette
Youre right, ***** it. Lets just drink it straight.
(She stumbles into the kitchen and returns with the tequila bottle. She fills her glass and Shanes spilling some on the floor)
Bette
Oh, *****, I spilled some tequila. Better clean that up. Tina would have a fit. And, the house smells like smoke.
(Bette stumbles out of the room and returns with a towel which she uses to wipe up the spilled tequila).
Bette
Oh, *****. It doesnt matter. Tina doesnt live her anymore. (Picks up her glass and turns to Shane, making a toast). Heres to having nobody telling you what the ***** to do. Its my house and I will do whatever the ***** I damn well want. Here is to being alone.
(They try to clink their glasses, but are too drunk to coordinate their glasses meeting).
End of Part II
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Ok so you have done it again…first emails back and forth, now Capitulation…and what a title…I hope you continue with this….you are doing a great….EXCELLENT…job…bravo
Damn…this one almost had me in tear…how can things get so fucked up?
Great update, but poor Bette and her Poo Sandwitches……:)-
I really like the script format. Thanks for capturing the nuance of the scene.
damn im on the verge of crying right now, it is soooo emotional. plz more
excellent story! thank you for writing it :)
seems i’m not the only one tonight whose life’s fucked up. It’s nice, in a weird way… But if theirs doesn’t get fixed (this being fiction), how can i expect mine to get better? Great chapter, and I’ll be waiting for the next one, hoping that in a few chapters, happiness’ll come around :)
What can I say, save, I liked it a lot, format and all.
It hell when you can get upset ove a F/F For a years we have laugh cryed and seen death broken heart wrecks you name it and your all have taken us there. Guess what I still love to read Fan Fiction. Now we are back to a broken heart. Love it thanks
Wow this is bad, Bette and Tina is divorced now and Tina now going out with Helena and now Bette is alone and lonely and hurt so bad. Anyway please post soon the next one soon, thank you! Great chapter!
I think my heart just broke over fictional characters. How can that happen…oh yeah, when the writing is as wonderful as yours. Thank you.