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Centre of my Universe, Part 28
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Alice stood there and hid her smile behind her hand. My, my, look at those two. Sparks all over the place. If they are over, I am the Queen of England !
Then she cleared her throat and tried to break the eyelock. It didn’t work. She coughed lightly and finally two eyes looked into her direction.
“You should be a little more discreet while we are inside. We wouldn’t want to clue the banker in, would we ?” She deadpanned.
“What the…” Jenny began.
“You are right, Alice.” Marina laughed.
Jenny’s gaze went between Alice and Marina like in a tennis match and finally she blushed. She wriggled herself out of Marina’s arms and momentarily felt the loss of warmth. She recaptured her dignity by saying, “Let’s go, you two.” And stepped into the direction of the bank.
Alice captured Marina’s look and smiled. Marina just shrugged. They followed after Jenny and all three vanished into the bank.
A few minutes and an introduction later Alice and Jenny were looking at the loan contract.
“You can take it with you to get the aproval from your lawyer, Ms. Pieszecki. I recommend that to everyone. Makes me sleep better.” The banker grinned and watched Alice and Jenny. He couldn’t make up his mind with the third woman, but he guessed she must be the older sister to Ms. Schecter.
“Well yes, thank you for that. We will do that. When do you think we should meet again ?” Jenny asked him.
“Let’s make it Monday morning.” He scrolled through his desk calendar. “I can offer 9:30 or 11:15 am. Which would you prefer ?”
Alice looked at Jenny and mouthed, “11” and Jenny nodded.
“We take 11:15. That way our friend Shane can be with us then.” Alice smiled at him.
“Good, good. Now I have to bid you goodbye, ladies, because I have another appointment. Sorry for keeping this brief.” He shook their hands and within minutes they were outside again.
“What the fuck…” Alice was flabbergasted.
“Welcome to the world of money.” Marina grinned. “If you have the adequate resources, they are throwing the money in your face. But believe me, if you hadn’t you would still filling out forms.”
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Great Update!!!! I would love to be a fly on the wall when Tina finds out about Bette and Helena living together. Thanks PPVS
Welcome back Kijuma and it’s good to see you have not lost your touch. Excellent post by the way. It’s good to see Bette&Helena are still communicating both verbally as well as physically. And the interaction between Alice,Jenny&Marina are quite good. As for April she’s a likable character. The girl has spunk and I like that. I’m hoping Tina is not, But if she is I’m quite sure the gang will stand by her. That’s what friends do, something she seem to have forgotten. But let’s let by gones be by gones. So your babies are Pisces. Good sign,being one myself you should never get bored.
Hello kijuma,I must say that you have totally immersed me into the world of Bette and Helena, these are two of my favorite characters and to see them together, so masterfully played out by your incredible writing is amazing.It is not often that I sit down and read 28 chapters of such and engaging story in one day, and it is next to impossible after reading that much that I can’t contain myself and desperately need to see where a story is heading. You are brilliant… all your character interaction is brilliant, you ability to showcase all of their emotions is poetic. You my friend are gifted beyond gifted to be able to bring such great characters together in such a way to make a reader feel like they actually know these people, actually love these people and to care about what is going to happen in their lives.I hope you keep this going for a long time coming and even if you happen to conclude this story I hope you will Bring Bette and Helena tales to life for a long while.Sincerely,JC
I just caught up with this and it would be so cruel to make Tina pregnant but I am sure you are bent on her suffering so I’ll just read quietly and wait on Susannah…Hey Sue I see that you missed me. Where are you dear come out and play…
Due to some things I only had time to read this chapter now. Good job as always and dang I had no clue you would get Da Queena pregnant lol.Hey sky babe you can play with Su all you want but don’t forget i’m keeping a close eye on the two of you LOL
do i get to be first? yeeeaaaahhhaaa. ok, so how thrilled am i to read this ongoing saga? SO thrilled. helena and bette are such hotties together, and now they get second chances to work on their lesbian dramas and insecurities–which we all deserve kids! lmao. but for serious, i love seeing these two together, and i’m sorry about the ‘more sex less cat’ comment. how about more sex, and more cat? but not necessarily TOGETHER, i mean that’s not what i’m getting at…ok, anyway…thanks for this! pps!!!
BBQ…an appetite, I’m always having an appetite huh. Well sorry I knew you posted yesterday afternoon and I intented to read your chapter in the evening…but I forgot all about it *blush* so I’ve read is first thing in the morning, does that count too…Well I can only say, I enjoyed reading it, I can so feel Helena’s pain caused by insecurity, that is just the way you feel when you’re deeply in love and start thinking of loosing that. You crave reassurance all the time. Also loved the way you described what happened at the bank, great writing and great writing too when both Shane and April realised that they are falling for each other. I sure hope Tina isn’t pregnant, I smell troubles in that case…she and Henry are over, aren’t they?. Blue…everytime I read about him I falling deeper and deeper for him….he will grow a aristocat….euhm aristocrat sorry. Don’t let us wait that long anymore for the next chapter ok!
Good chapter. Hope you not make Tina’s life living hell, let get her not pregnant but find someone that good for her and leave Bette alone or being good friend to her and be happy, and please let her dump that stupid hendick, can’t stand him. Anyway love B&H and let see more please, thanks!
Dear readers, as you may have guessed already, this story was on leave… Well, some time ago I had an inner dialogue again… this time I lost. I don’t really know if it might disappoint some of you, but this story will for now no longer be continued online !!! I’ll try to finish it so I can fulfill my promise to all of you who ever left a comment, but it may take some time…. I hope you’ll take my heartfelt gratitude for all your encouraging words with you and I’d like to wish all of you the best for your future lifes. Sincerely Kijuma