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Chandelier – 26
"Mama."
"B."
"Bee." Angelica echoed.
"Mama B?" Tina asked hopefully.
Angelica looked at her with a puzzled expression.
"Still not with the compound words, huh?" Tina smiled. "Well, okay. Where to start. She was gorgeous, of course, because she’s gorgeous when she’s just gotten out of bed, so imagine what she’s like when she puts in some effort."
Angelica picked up her stuffed rabbit.
"Dinner was simple, and then we danced."
Tina closed her eyes, remembering the dance. God, just like all those other times she and Bette danced, she could replay that moment over and over in her head. The way Bette took her hand, not accepting anything less than surrender, with a simple command disguised as a request: "Dance with me."
One time during their courtship, she couldn’t remember which of them said it, but one of them had summed up their penchant for slow dancing to a simple statement.
It’s musical foreplay.
And she’d welcomed the dare of foreplay by daring Bette with an honest statement: I bet you look good on the dancefloor.
She’d noticed the dancefloor almost instantly upon entering the restaurant, which was a little expensive, but Helena had sworn by. What the hell, it was the first date. And the need for a cold shower was worth every penny.
"Mama," Angelica cut into her mother’s introspection. Honestly, what did she have to do to get her mother’s attention?
Tina turned back to Angelica. "Okay, here’s the thing. It was the first date. Things aren’t supposed to happen on the first date."
Angelica tilted her head to the side.
"Don’t look at me like that. You know, between the car and that dance, it would’ve been so easy to come home a little later than expected." Tina told her. "Baby, if you have half the charm your Mama B’s got, I’m gonna have trouble keeping boys away. Or girls, if that’s your preference."
Oh God. Tina winced. The prospect of Angelica growing up and having Bette’s charms hit her like a ton of bricks. The Kennard mischievous streak and the Porter charm?
"You’re going to be trouble, I can tell," Tina said softly, a statement highlighted by Angelica’s wide-eyed look of innocence.
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Wonderful dynamic between the two mothers and their child! I’m hanging from this Chandelier, having a ball!
Uhhhh, how about: “I’m hanging on EVERY WORD of this Chandelier, having a ball!”??…better image…
You are killing me softly with your story, it is perfect! Thank you.
Tiff, I love how these characters are teetering between lust and the need to reclaim their relationship. I truely hope they are able to answer what needs answering and work through what needs working. I think the gang is going to be ok with them back together, but I wouldn’t tell them too quickly, although I would have liked to see them going out tomorrow. Perhaps Tina can stop over to see her favorite two gals.
Another Great chapter. Thank you I am glad Bette and Tina are talking.
That’s really really nice. I’m looking forward to seeing them being like this without a phone.
Great update, Tiff. Love this story and how they are interacting with each other. TAking thngs slowly seems to be the best for them even though it is kinda rough, physically on them. Thanks.
Thank you Tiff! not only do you write the best dialogue for B&T now you write great dialogue for A too!
Nice, T.D.
I love Angie.The way she looks at Her mom and her unzipping Tina dress. Smart kid thanks
This story is delightfully exciting and I love your dialogue.
Nice. Very Nice. I love that you have them talking. Smart baby…smart mom’s!
I started to read this chapter and realized that I was missing something, the dance. And I still don’t know how I could’ve missed the last chapter. Beautiful. Just love the way you write your dialogue.
Love the story.
I am amazed how you can draw a reader into the picture that you paint. With your words you place the reader in the same room. It is like a movie only we are not there to see it first hand. The way that Bette and Tina relate to each other and the way that Angelica relates to both of her mommas is increditable. You can feel the love and the sexual tension building. I look forward to this story and am never disappointed.
i honestly thought bette was going to go straight over and kiss her 2 favourite girls goodnight – i would have, but i’m lucky i’ve got my girl beside me every night, unless i have to go away for work. Thank you for that post looking forward to the next one
Loving the story. Tina and Angies conversatioons are delightful
Good chapter. I like this Tina, the way Bette and Tina doing right is cute and sweet. Angie is cute, she and Tina so wonderful!
tiff: you made my nite fining out that your post was up before i went to bed.thank you! when you write we feel like were siting at the planet in there conversation youre wonderful writer
Just about to go to sleep but saw that you posted and I HAD to read this chappy. Wonderful dialogue as usual. You just know how to set the scene.
As mush as I don’t want to I find myself liking this Tina, alot. She is different from the show!
what a good day it is going to be…I wake up and you have posted. Now I can go to work and be happy. thanks, tiff
I really love how Tina sits and talks to Angelica. The zipper comment cracked me up. lol
feel so right after readin your story everytime. *happy grin*
i agree, it has to change soon…this is the most amazing story, feels like heaven
I continually strive to write dialogue as smart as yours…and know that I never quite get there. Thank you.
God, I hope you become a double fanfic award winner.
I love the way they are talking to each other. Honesty? How ’bout that.Nice job.
This story is so good, i love every word of it. You’re a genius.