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Chandelier – 26
Angelica, who would probably have Bette’s charm and charisma and the combined get-what-I-want drive of Bette and Tina. Oh yes, Angelica was going to be trouble.
Tina smiled at her daughter. "Listen, what do you say we break every dating rule in the book and call your Mama B this soon after the first date?"
Angelica nodded.
So obedient. Tina relished Angelica’s obedience, knowing from every book she’s read that children enjoyed the word ‘no’ by the age of two.
Tina glanced in the direction of the bedroom. "But first I’m gonna brush my teeth. You want to stay here, or do you want to come along?"
Angelica glanced at the bed.
"Okay," Tina picked up Angelica, and placed her on the floor. "Just to be sure you won’t fall off the bed."
Angelica preoccupied herself with the magazines on the floor beside the bed, and flipped through them with glee, enjoying the noise the pages made, as Tina disappeared in the bathroom, leaving the door open to keep an eye on Angelica.
The phone rang, interrupting them both.
Tina poked her head out of the bathroom, and Angelica looked up at her. They looked at each other, puzzled. Why would the phone be ringing?
Tina finished brushing her teeth, and answered the phone on what was the fourth ring. "Hello?"
"I wasn’t sure, did we or did we not set a second date?" Bette.
"You know there are dating rules about calling so soon after the date." Tina told her.
"I’m not the one who ended the goodnight kiss prematurely."
"I think nearly undressing each other on your front door is hardly premature, B."
"After that dance? Are you kidding?" Bette asked. "I just got out from the cold shower."
"I left your place thirty minutes ago."
"Oh, like you haven’t."
"Angel’s still awake."
"Oh."
"Yeah, she’s looking at me right now, which is why I can’t indulge you."
"Oh."
"Second date?" Tina prompted.
"I’m free tomorrow."
"We’re exchanging Angelica at The Planet. Unless you want our friends to know, I don’t think I’ll be able to play the role of your ex very well if we’re dating mere hours later."
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Wonderful dynamic between the two mothers and their child! I’m hanging from this Chandelier, having a ball!
Uhhhh, how about: “I’m hanging on EVERY WORD of this Chandelier, having a ball!”??…better image…
You are killing me softly with your story, it is perfect! Thank you.
Tiff, I love how these characters are teetering between lust and the need to reclaim their relationship. I truely hope they are able to answer what needs answering and work through what needs working. I think the gang is going to be ok with them back together, but I wouldn’t tell them too quickly, although I would have liked to see them going out tomorrow. Perhaps Tina can stop over to see her favorite two gals.
Another Great chapter. Thank you I am glad Bette and Tina are talking.
That’s really really nice. I’m looking forward to seeing them being like this without a phone.
Great update, Tiff. Love this story and how they are interacting with each other. TAking thngs slowly seems to be the best for them even though it is kinda rough, physically on them. Thanks.
Thank you Tiff! not only do you write the best dialogue for B&T now you write great dialogue for A too!
Nice, T.D.
I love Angie.The way she looks at Her mom and her unzipping Tina dress. Smart kid thanks
This story is delightfully exciting and I love your dialogue.
Nice. Very Nice. I love that you have them talking. Smart baby…smart mom’s!
I started to read this chapter and realized that I was missing something, the dance. And I still don’t know how I could’ve missed the last chapter. Beautiful. Just love the way you write your dialogue.
Love the story.
I am amazed how you can draw a reader into the picture that you paint. With your words you place the reader in the same room. It is like a movie only we are not there to see it first hand. The way that Bette and Tina relate to each other and the way that Angelica relates to both of her mommas is increditable. You can feel the love and the sexual tension building. I look forward to this story and am never disappointed.
i honestly thought bette was going to go straight over and kiss her 2 favourite girls goodnight – i would have, but i’m lucky i’ve got my girl beside me every night, unless i have to go away for work. Thank you for that post looking forward to the next one
Loving the story. Tina and Angies conversatioons are delightful
Good chapter. I like this Tina, the way Bette and Tina doing right is cute and sweet. Angie is cute, she and Tina so wonderful!
tiff: you made my nite fining out that your post was up before i went to bed.thank you! when you write we feel like were siting at the planet in there conversation youre wonderful writer
Just about to go to sleep but saw that you posted and I HAD to read this chappy. Wonderful dialogue as usual. You just know how to set the scene.
As mush as I don’t want to I find myself liking this Tina, alot. She is different from the show!
what a good day it is going to be…I wake up and you have posted. Now I can go to work and be happy. thanks, tiff
I really love how Tina sits and talks to Angelica. The zipper comment cracked me up. lol
feel so right after readin your story everytime. *happy grin*
i agree, it has to change soon…this is the most amazing story, feels like heaven
I continually strive to write dialogue as smart as yours…and know that I never quite get there. Thank you.
God, I hope you become a double fanfic award winner.
I love the way they are talking to each other. Honesty? How ’bout that.Nice job.
This story is so good, i love every word of it. You’re a genius.