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Bette: “Why? Is your boyfriend busy?”
Tina: “Actually I haven’t asked him. I wanted to see if maybe we could do something together, its been so long.
Bette was torn. She wanted to patch things up with Tina but she had serious feelings for MK. She wasn’t sure if MK had to work or not, but if she didn’t she wanted to go with MK to show her she didn’t just have to spend time with her behind closed doors.
Bette: “Can I think about it Tina?”
Tina was saddened cuz she knew Bette had to think about who she wanted to go with. The obvious choice was no longer Tina.
Tina: “Sure”
Bette sat on the porch and thought for hrs. She was truly torn as to what to do. She came to the conclusion that she owed it to MK to be there with her. MK had done so much for her. She wanted to show MK where she stood in her life. Bette picked up the phone and called MK’s cell. She got no answer so she left a message.
Bette: “Hey MK. You told me to call when I thought of you, so I’m calling. I need to ask you a quick question too, about the pj party at the planet tom. So if you could give me a call back on my cell later that would be great.”
MK never heard her phone ring. She was on her hog as Bette called. She was heavy in thought as well. MK did her best thinking while on the open road. She couldn’t stop thinking about last night. She loved being so close with Bette. She was also scared. Afraid she was getting too much into a person who could probably never be emotionally available to her. But how she felt about Bette was inexcusable. She had never met a woman she liked to much in her life. She had been with many women too. When she first came out she wanted to explore as much as she could. She also wanted to be affluent in the sex arena, and that took practice. So MK wasted no opportunity to put the time in. And though she had been with many women she still had never felt about them as she did Bette. Bette was smart and beautiful. Strikingly so. Looks didn’t mean much to MK but she couldn’t ignore Bette’s beauty. She loved her dark curly hair and her skin tone. The fact that Bette was of two ethnicities was an extra plus for MK. She was getting the best of both worlds. MK loved diversity. Bette was understanding and appreciative. She listened and opened up. She knew when it was time to talk and time to just like the situation play itself. She loved her passion and drive. She loved the way she smelled and the way she walked. She loved.her. MK felt like running her bike into a tree when she realized that. The last thing she wanted to do was get hurt. But it was too late now. MK cared. And what happened with their relationship was purely up to Bette. MK learned from experience that expectation seldom breed surprise so she just made sure she was ever prepared for Bette to hurt her somehow.
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It was inevitable for Bette and MK to be together but please let them have a more romantic setting next time. I feel a lot of pain coming in this confused situation. Thanks for another well written chapter.
Sorry but i’m not liking how tina is such a bad guy in this story, have you been taking notes from ilene chaiken or something?
great!!! i loved the end of this chapter. it is a little sad for tina and bette, but even on the show tina continues to treat bette like a doormat. so i would like to see bette happy again, and if that is going to be with MK, i say go for it!!!
WOW!!! That was HOT!!!! As for Tina she got what she had comming. Bette and MK belong together. I am a B and T Fan but Tina want’s the best of both worlds and that’s is not fair to Bette.
MK is great and treats Bette like she should be treated, but MK is also playing a dangerous game with her own heart…..and WOW that was fucking hot :o))
please post again.. i love your story..
they both act like children…can’t they have a mature conversation at least and explain their feelings and thoughts?
post soon. can’t wait for the next chapter.
I am not feeling the fact that the only reason Bette went with Mickie is because Mark showed up and hugged Tina. Someone or everybody is going to get hurt in this but right now I am more concerned for MK cause she’s the one falling in love and shit. But the story is tense full of all the elements that makes it good.
awesome. i’m now offically a MKBETTE fan for life! though i have to say i still like tibette and wish Tina would change back to her old self. but for now tina can go to hell! loven the story, plz continue.
vibes i knew it was gonna erupt like this!! im so glad finally go explore if t n b r meant to b it will happen!! luved it waitin for u next
HELL YEAH YOU GO BETTE. TIME 4 U TO HAVE SOME HAPPINESS!!!!!!!!! YAY!!!!
So Bette get jealous and decides now is time to go with MK?? that sucks..poor MK she is the one who will get hurt. Post soon.
Wow – very hot ending.
I am happy for Bette but still feel sad for tibette. They just seem to fit and it’s hard to picture them apart. You are doing a great job though I am slowly becoming a MKBETTE fan. Keep up the great story.
Tina is going to come up the loser. Mark is never going to be as good to Tina as Bette was. He seems to turn up like Tina was really his already. As least MK gave Bette family with tina a chance to make it. Sad thanks
Yes, yes..Fuck Tina. Go MKBETTE!!!! Looking forward to the next chapter. I think Tina will realixe her answer and it will not be the one she was hoping for. It will probably make her more confused. MK gives fire to Bette and it’s just what she needs!! Good riddance to Tina!! Looking forward to the next chapter
Rough, especially because I could see Tina making an effort and then after alot of hedging Bette goes to MK on more or less a whim after you look at all the soul searching before.
I know Bette is confused about wanting to fix things with Tina, or to explore things with MK, but to go off with her like that, without talking to Tina first isn’t right either. Yeah, Tina is being a jerk, and invited Mark to that BBQ which was cold as ice, but maybe she is realizing that she wants to try with Bette, and that’s why she asked her to the pj party. And Tina did not invite Mark to this party…Kit did. Tina didn’t want hime there. I know everyone seems to want MK and Bette together, but remember, the grass always seems greener on the other side of the fence…dosn’t mean that it actually is…and that goes for both Bette and Tina.