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Bette couldn’t believe what was coming out of MK’s mouth. Was this the most perfect woman in the world? MK couldn’t believe it either. She felt like someone was talking for her cuz that’s not really how she felt. She wanted to tell her to tell Tina to go to hell. She was going to be with MK and loved her deeply. But she knew this was a pipe dream. So she was supportive to Bette’s plight.
Bette: “are you sure?”
MK: “I’m positive. You have no obligation to me Bette. You have enough of those as it is. I wont allow you to make me another one. I’ll be there so we’ll see each other anyway, right?”
Bette: “Yeahright.”
MK had to get off the phone while she still had her resolve. She couldn’t hide her feelings in her voice much longer.
MK: “Ok great. I’ll see you tom night then.”
Bette: “right.”
MK: “Ok, night.”
Bette: “night.”
Bette was stunned. She thought MK cared for her a little bit more then that. She thought MK would at least protest or be able to hear some type of regret in her voice. But she didn’t. She seemed fine. Maybe she was wrong about MK.
The party was in full swing by the time Tina and Bette arrived. Bette had a short silk dress with spaghetti straps. She and Tina walked over to the bar where everyone was hand in hand.
Alice as well as everyone else was pulling for MK. They felt Mk was what Bette needed.
When Bette and Tina walked in hand in hand they all froze and looked on surprised. After a few seconds they pulled it together and tried to express happiness for them pulling it together.
Jenny: “Its good to see you two together.”
Carmen: “Yeah really it is.”
Tina: “Thanks guys.”
Tina walked moved to the side to get closer to the bar to order a drink for her and Bette.
Bette: “Nothing. Well somethingI’m just trying to patch my life together.”
Tina shortly came back and handed Bette a drink. Bette took a sip. It felt unfinished without MK’s special touch. Speaking of which, Bette noticed she wasn’t there yet.
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It was inevitable for Bette and MK to be together but please let them have a more romantic setting next time. I feel a lot of pain coming in this confused situation. Thanks for another well written chapter.
Sorry but i’m not liking how tina is such a bad guy in this story, have you been taking notes from ilene chaiken or something?
great!!! i loved the end of this chapter. it is a little sad for tina and bette, but even on the show tina continues to treat bette like a doormat. so i would like to see bette happy again, and if that is going to be with MK, i say go for it!!!
WOW!!! That was HOT!!!! As for Tina she got what she had comming. Bette and MK belong together. I am a B and T Fan but Tina want’s the best of both worlds and that’s is not fair to Bette.
MK is great and treats Bette like she should be treated, but MK is also playing a dangerous game with her own heart…..and WOW that was fucking hot :o))
please post again.. i love your story..
they both act like children…can’t they have a mature conversation at least and explain their feelings and thoughts?
post soon. can’t wait for the next chapter.
I am not feeling the fact that the only reason Bette went with Mickie is because Mark showed up and hugged Tina. Someone or everybody is going to get hurt in this but right now I am more concerned for MK cause she’s the one falling in love and shit. But the story is tense full of all the elements that makes it good.
awesome. i’m now offically a MKBETTE fan for life! though i have to say i still like tibette and wish Tina would change back to her old self. but for now tina can go to hell! loven the story, plz continue.
vibes i knew it was gonna erupt like this!! im so glad finally go explore if t n b r meant to b it will happen!! luved it waitin for u next
HELL YEAH YOU GO BETTE. TIME 4 U TO HAVE SOME HAPPINESS!!!!!!!!! YAY!!!!
So Bette get jealous and decides now is time to go with MK?? that sucks..poor MK she is the one who will get hurt. Post soon.
Wow – very hot ending.
I am happy for Bette but still feel sad for tibette. They just seem to fit and it’s hard to picture them apart. You are doing a great job though I am slowly becoming a MKBETTE fan. Keep up the great story.
Tina is going to come up the loser. Mark is never going to be as good to Tina as Bette was. He seems to turn up like Tina was really his already. As least MK gave Bette family with tina a chance to make it. Sad thanks
Yes, yes..Fuck Tina. Go MKBETTE!!!! Looking forward to the next chapter. I think Tina will realixe her answer and it will not be the one she was hoping for. It will probably make her more confused. MK gives fire to Bette and it’s just what she needs!! Good riddance to Tina!! Looking forward to the next chapter
Rough, especially because I could see Tina making an effort and then after alot of hedging Bette goes to MK on more or less a whim after you look at all the soul searching before.
I know Bette is confused about wanting to fix things with Tina, or to explore things with MK, but to go off with her like that, without talking to Tina first isn’t right either. Yeah, Tina is being a jerk, and invited Mark to that BBQ which was cold as ice, but maybe she is realizing that she wants to try with Bette, and that’s why she asked her to the pj party. And Tina did not invite Mark to this party…Kit did. Tina didn’t want hime there. I know everyone seems to want MK and Bette together, but remember, the grass always seems greener on the other side of the fence…dosn’t mean that it actually is…and that goes for both Bette and Tina.