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When MK returned home she partly wished Bette was there to greet her. She knew she wouldn’t be though. She walked into the bedroom to find Bette had made the bed. She fell for her even more. MK then realized it was the middle of the evening and Bette still had called. As she took her jacket off she removed her cell from her pocket to put away. She noticed she had missed a call and had a voicemail. It was Bette. MK’s heart leapt with the feelings of delight. MK felt her chest get tight and found it hard to breath at the prospect of seeing Bette again. She listened and called Bette back as she had asked.
Bette: “Hello?”
MK: “Hi beautiful.”
Bette: “Hey” Bette said with a grin.
Tina who was in the kitchen could hear the delight in Bette’s voice as she answered the phone. Bette moved into the bedroom to have some privacy.
MK: “I’m just returning you call. No I’m not working tom. I was planning on stopping through.”
Bette: “Oh ok well. Here’s the thing”
Bette knew she could explain Tina’s invitation to MK and how she felt about it. MK would understand and give her honest advice.
MK knew Bette was going to tell her something she didn’t necessarily want to hear but she would be there for her no matter what.
Bette: “Tina asked me to go with her.”
MK: “Do you want to go with her?”
Bette paused.
Bette: “I dunno, I guess.”
MK felt as if someone had kicked her in the stomach.
Bette: “I want to go with you too though. You’ve done so much for me since we met. You’ve such a good friendand more. I just feel like I should try with Tina since she’s tried with me.”
MK was so hurt by this. She knew, however, that Bette was right. They had a child, a family.
MK: “Look Bette, I care for you a lot. But at the end of the day you have a family that your trying to put back together. I would never interfere with that. Tell Tina you’ll go with her. I’ll be fine.”
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It was inevitable for Bette and MK to be together but please let them have a more romantic setting next time. I feel a lot of pain coming in this confused situation. Thanks for another well written chapter.
Sorry but i’m not liking how tina is such a bad guy in this story, have you been taking notes from ilene chaiken or something?
great!!! i loved the end of this chapter. it is a little sad for tina and bette, but even on the show tina continues to treat bette like a doormat. so i would like to see bette happy again, and if that is going to be with MK, i say go for it!!!
WOW!!! That was HOT!!!! As for Tina she got what she had comming. Bette and MK belong together. I am a B and T Fan but Tina want’s the best of both worlds and that’s is not fair to Bette.
MK is great and treats Bette like she should be treated, but MK is also playing a dangerous game with her own heart…..and WOW that was fucking hot :o))
please post again.. i love your story..
they both act like children…can’t they have a mature conversation at least and explain their feelings and thoughts?
post soon. can’t wait for the next chapter.
I am not feeling the fact that the only reason Bette went with Mickie is because Mark showed up and hugged Tina. Someone or everybody is going to get hurt in this but right now I am more concerned for MK cause she’s the one falling in love and shit. But the story is tense full of all the elements that makes it good.
awesome. i’m now offically a MKBETTE fan for life! though i have to say i still like tibette and wish Tina would change back to her old self. but for now tina can go to hell! loven the story, plz continue.
vibes i knew it was gonna erupt like this!! im so glad finally go explore if t n b r meant to b it will happen!! luved it waitin for u next
HELL YEAH YOU GO BETTE. TIME 4 U TO HAVE SOME HAPPINESS!!!!!!!!! YAY!!!!
So Bette get jealous and decides now is time to go with MK?? that sucks..poor MK she is the one who will get hurt. Post soon.
Wow – very hot ending.
I am happy for Bette but still feel sad for tibette. They just seem to fit and it’s hard to picture them apart. You are doing a great job though I am slowly becoming a MKBETTE fan. Keep up the great story.
Tina is going to come up the loser. Mark is never going to be as good to Tina as Bette was. He seems to turn up like Tina was really his already. As least MK gave Bette family with tina a chance to make it. Sad thanks
Yes, yes..Fuck Tina. Go MKBETTE!!!! Looking forward to the next chapter. I think Tina will realixe her answer and it will not be the one she was hoping for. It will probably make her more confused. MK gives fire to Bette and it’s just what she needs!! Good riddance to Tina!! Looking forward to the next chapter
Rough, especially because I could see Tina making an effort and then after alot of hedging Bette goes to MK on more or less a whim after you look at all the soul searching before.
I know Bette is confused about wanting to fix things with Tina, or to explore things with MK, but to go off with her like that, without talking to Tina first isn’t right either. Yeah, Tina is being a jerk, and invited Mark to that BBQ which was cold as ice, but maybe she is realizing that she wants to try with Bette, and that’s why she asked her to the pj party. And Tina did not invite Mark to this party…Kit did. Tina didn’t want hime there. I know everyone seems to want MK and Bette together, but remember, the grass always seems greener on the other side of the fence…dosn’t mean that it actually is…and that goes for both Bette and Tina.