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When Tina went to the bathroom Bette used the opportunity to approach MK.
Bette: “Can I get a minute?”
MK excused herself from the person she was talking to.
MK: “What’s up?”
Bette: “What’s up with you?”
MK: “Huh?”
Bette: “what are you doing with all these women?”
MK: “Having fun.”
Bette: “Not funny.”
MK: “That wasn’t a joke.”
Bette could tell she wasn’t by her serious eyes that Bette hadn’t seen in some time.
MK: “Why are you questioning me anyway. You’re here with your wife.”
Bette: “She’s not my wifeanymoreand I didn’t think you cared by the way you sounded on the phone when we spoke yesterday.”
MK: “I was trying to be supportive.”
MK was saying things she wouldn’t normally due to the liquor.
MK: “but duh I was hurt. You have a family. I’ll never be number one in your life Bette. So I’m looking for the closest thing to you I can find.”
MK was intoxicated but she never meant to tell Bette that much. Bette didn’t realize MK cared so much.
Bette: “Why didn’t you say that then. How can I know how you feel if you don’t say anything?”
MK: “I thought I showed you. I guess I didn’t do such a good job tho, huh?”
MK had actually don’t a great job at showing how she felt. Bette just had a tendency to forget things.
Bette: “No MK you’ve done a fantastic job. I’m sorry for yelling at you I justI’m so confused.”
MK: “I know you are, that’s why I’m trying my hardest to make this as easy as possible on you.”
They stood and looked at each other. The alcohol was making MK horny as hell. She was looking at Bette with fire in her eyes. Bette could feel the heat radiating off MK’s body.
Across the room, Tina’s friend Mark was entering. Tina came out the bathroom and saw him talking to Dana and Shane.
Tina: “Mark? What are you doing here?”
Tina was relieved Bette wasn’t there right then.
Mark: “Well Kit had told me about her party about the bbq the other day.”
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It was inevitable for Bette and MK to be together but please let them have a more romantic setting next time. I feel a lot of pain coming in this confused situation. Thanks for another well written chapter.
Sorry but i’m not liking how tina is such a bad guy in this story, have you been taking notes from ilene chaiken or something?
great!!! i loved the end of this chapter. it is a little sad for tina and bette, but even on the show tina continues to treat bette like a doormat. so i would like to see bette happy again, and if that is going to be with MK, i say go for it!!!
WOW!!! That was HOT!!!! As for Tina she got what she had comming. Bette and MK belong together. I am a B and T Fan but Tina want’s the best of both worlds and that’s is not fair to Bette.
MK is great and treats Bette like she should be treated, but MK is also playing a dangerous game with her own heart…..and WOW that was fucking hot :o))
please post again.. i love your story..
they both act like children…can’t they have a mature conversation at least and explain their feelings and thoughts?
post soon. can’t wait for the next chapter.
I am not feeling the fact that the only reason Bette went with Mickie is because Mark showed up and hugged Tina. Someone or everybody is going to get hurt in this but right now I am more concerned for MK cause she’s the one falling in love and shit. But the story is tense full of all the elements that makes it good.
awesome. i’m now offically a MKBETTE fan for life! though i have to say i still like tibette and wish Tina would change back to her old self. but for now tina can go to hell! loven the story, plz continue.
vibes i knew it was gonna erupt like this!! im so glad finally go explore if t n b r meant to b it will happen!! luved it waitin for u next
HELL YEAH YOU GO BETTE. TIME 4 U TO HAVE SOME HAPPINESS!!!!!!!!! YAY!!!!
So Bette get jealous and decides now is time to go with MK?? that sucks..poor MK she is the one who will get hurt. Post soon.
Wow – very hot ending.
I am happy for Bette but still feel sad for tibette. They just seem to fit and it’s hard to picture them apart. You are doing a great job though I am slowly becoming a MKBETTE fan. Keep up the great story.
Tina is going to come up the loser. Mark is never going to be as good to Tina as Bette was. He seems to turn up like Tina was really his already. As least MK gave Bette family with tina a chance to make it. Sad thanks
Yes, yes..Fuck Tina. Go MKBETTE!!!! Looking forward to the next chapter. I think Tina will realixe her answer and it will not be the one she was hoping for. It will probably make her more confused. MK gives fire to Bette and it’s just what she needs!! Good riddance to Tina!! Looking forward to the next chapter
Rough, especially because I could see Tina making an effort and then after alot of hedging Bette goes to MK on more or less a whim after you look at all the soul searching before.
I know Bette is confused about wanting to fix things with Tina, or to explore things with MK, but to go off with her like that, without talking to Tina first isn’t right either. Yeah, Tina is being a jerk, and invited Mark to that BBQ which was cold as ice, but maybe she is realizing that she wants to try with Bette, and that’s why she asked her to the pj party. And Tina did not invite Mark to this party…Kit did. Tina didn’t want hime there. I know everyone seems to want MK and Bette together, but remember, the grass always seems greener on the other side of the fence…dosn’t mean that it actually is…and that goes for both Bette and Tina.