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Tina leaned over and give Bette a peck on the cheek. It almost scared Bette due to the fact it was the only contact they at had made for months. Right when Tina had leaned over to kiss Bette MK had walked over.
MK was wearing a black and pink corset top cinched tight with short silk girl boxers. Her hair was down and curled. She had on tall spiked healed boots. She looked like a chocolate Pam Anderson. The whole group stopped in their tracks. She was oozing with sex. They could barley keep their mouths open. They were all thinking of the sexual things they could do to her in that outfit. MK knew what she was doing. She wanted to remind Bette to be sure about the decision she made. She wanted to give Bette the space and time to get her home situations together but she wasn’t going to just lay down and not put any effort in. Seeing Tina kiss Bette was like a slap in the face.
MK: “Hey everyone.”
Shane: “Damn.”
Carmen hit Shane in the arm.
Shane: “I mean Hihey MK.”
MK: “this is some party huh?”
MK wasn’t ignoring Bette, but she wasn’t paying her the attention she would have normally.
Dana: “Yeah it’s a rager.”
MK: “Lara its good to see you in something besides and apron.”
Lara laughed. Lara, Carmen and MK saw a lot of each other on the weekends. It was as good to see them and not behind a car, counter, or dj booth.
MK: “Loved to Al.”
They walked over to the floor and began to move to the fats praised song. Bette looked on jealously. Tina could see she was interfering in things between them and continued to dominate Bette’s attention.
All night long MK was occupied with one woman or another. She was the life of the party. Women were using the opportunity of her not being at work to put the moves on her. MK didn’t give a damn about any of them though. She was just using them as an excuse to not think about Bette or have to see her with Tina. MK was drinking the whole night as well. Trying to drown her sorrows. She would take a drink because she was mad at herself for falling for Bette then take a drink for being mad about drinking. A dumb line of events.
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It was inevitable for Bette and MK to be together but please let them have a more romantic setting next time. I feel a lot of pain coming in this confused situation. Thanks for another well written chapter.
Sorry but i’m not liking how tina is such a bad guy in this story, have you been taking notes from ilene chaiken or something?
great!!! i loved the end of this chapter. it is a little sad for tina and bette, but even on the show tina continues to treat bette like a doormat. so i would like to see bette happy again, and if that is going to be with MK, i say go for it!!!
WOW!!! That was HOT!!!! As for Tina she got what she had comming. Bette and MK belong together. I am a B and T Fan but Tina want’s the best of both worlds and that’s is not fair to Bette.
MK is great and treats Bette like she should be treated, but MK is also playing a dangerous game with her own heart…..and WOW that was fucking hot :o))
please post again.. i love your story..
they both act like children…can’t they have a mature conversation at least and explain their feelings and thoughts?
post soon. can’t wait for the next chapter.
I am not feeling the fact that the only reason Bette went with Mickie is because Mark showed up and hugged Tina. Someone or everybody is going to get hurt in this but right now I am more concerned for MK cause she’s the one falling in love and shit. But the story is tense full of all the elements that makes it good.
awesome. i’m now offically a MKBETTE fan for life! though i have to say i still like tibette and wish Tina would change back to her old self. but for now tina can go to hell! loven the story, plz continue.
vibes i knew it was gonna erupt like this!! im so glad finally go explore if t n b r meant to b it will happen!! luved it waitin for u next
HELL YEAH YOU GO BETTE. TIME 4 U TO HAVE SOME HAPPINESS!!!!!!!!! YAY!!!!
So Bette get jealous and decides now is time to go with MK?? that sucks..poor MK she is the one who will get hurt. Post soon.
Wow – very hot ending.
I am happy for Bette but still feel sad for tibette. They just seem to fit and it’s hard to picture them apart. You are doing a great job though I am slowly becoming a MKBETTE fan. Keep up the great story.
Tina is going to come up the loser. Mark is never going to be as good to Tina as Bette was. He seems to turn up like Tina was really his already. As least MK gave Bette family with tina a chance to make it. Sad thanks
Yes, yes..Fuck Tina. Go MKBETTE!!!! Looking forward to the next chapter. I think Tina will realixe her answer and it will not be the one she was hoping for. It will probably make her more confused. MK gives fire to Bette and it’s just what she needs!! Good riddance to Tina!! Looking forward to the next chapter
Rough, especially because I could see Tina making an effort and then after alot of hedging Bette goes to MK on more or less a whim after you look at all the soul searching before.
I know Bette is confused about wanting to fix things with Tina, or to explore things with MK, but to go off with her like that, without talking to Tina first isn’t right either. Yeah, Tina is being a jerk, and invited Mark to that BBQ which was cold as ice, but maybe she is realizing that she wants to try with Bette, and that’s why she asked her to the pj party. And Tina did not invite Mark to this party…Kit did. Tina didn’t want hime there. I know everyone seems to want MK and Bette together, but remember, the grass always seems greener on the other side of the fence…dosn’t mean that it actually is…and that goes for both Bette and Tina.