Fan Fiction
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Chapter 1
(Bette) Fine
(Tina) She leaves for camp Monday
(Bette) I know that, you don’t need to remind me
(Tina sighs) OK, well I want to see her before she goes. Can we work out something for Sunday?
(Bette sighs) Tina I’m fine with plans being shifted when they need to be but I do have a life outside of this you know. I’m not just at your beck and call
Tina rubs her temple and looks back towards the driveway.
(Tina) For fuck’s sake
Angelica yells out from the lounge.
(Angelica) Language!
Tina holds her hand over her eyes.
(Tina) Sorry!
Tina and Bette look back at each other.
(Tina) We need to do a better job of shielding her from this
(Bette) Well I think not crossing paths usually serves us well
Tina raises her hands.
(Tina) Fine, I shouldn’t have come. I’ll email you in future. So I can’t see her before Monday?
(Bette sighs) She has a sleepover at Jessica’s Saturday, you can pick her up from there and drop her off here
(Tina) Fine, thank you I guess
Tina adjusts her bag on her shoulder and yells out to Angelica.
(Tina) I’m off Ange, see you after school tomorrow
(Angelica) OK
Tina turns and walks to her car and Bette closes the door.
Later, Tina walks into a bar and scans the room, eventually spotting Alice, Shane and Dana sitting at a table. She smiles and makes her way over.
(Alice smiles) Well hello birthday girl
Tina smiles as she sits down.
(Tina) Al, it’s not my birthday
(Alice) Well I missed it so it is now
(Tina smiles) OK
Shane pours Tina a drink from the cocktail pitcher on the table and slides it over to her.
(Tina) Thanks
(Shane) No problem, how was your day?
(Tina sighs) Weird actually. I had my first session of that new therapy I’m trying this afternoon
(Alice) Oooh, the hypnotherapy thing someone recommended to you?
(Tina nods) Yeah
(Alice) Was it as weird as it sounds? If we say the right word will you act like a chicken?
Tina laughs.
(Tina) Fuck I hope not
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hroark says
Sounds v. original so far – key is to hide one’s sources!
Martha3128 says
Wow, so what has happened to Tina? She did not recognize her bag nor her own phone nor did she know how to use it…. and Franklin was Bette’s boss from years ago?
Something is up with Tina… must be the therapy session got her brain stuck somewhere in the past…. Tina will soon figure it out when she sees Angie next. She won’t be expecting a 12 year old… but maybe a 5 or 6 year old? We will see. This is interesting….
Keep it coming….
DumplinT says
Tina was hypnotized at her therapy session remem? And told to focus on a time when she was happy.
Seems like she has gone back to that scene when Franklin was giving Bette fits and Tina had called to get Bette to promise to come home for dinner.
She had prepare a special dinner w/ the appetizer being a “positive” pregnancy test
DeeTee says
Wooohooo! A chapter 1! I’m in for the ride!
Bibi28 says
This is certainly very interesting!
What happened with Tina? Is it because of the hypnose session and maybe to much alcohol that has her mixed up?
Looking forward to read the next chapter!
majicspider60 says
This is very different. So Tina went back to past where she was happy? Interesting!
SassyGran says
Wow so interesting!
Really looking forward to more.
SG
Maddyson says
I just have to say I absolutely love your fic, I’m not sure if you’re still active on here but I came across this fic from someone on Twitter and I absolutely love your writing. And how you wrote Bette and Tina and Angie it’s all just incredible thank you I can’t wait to read more of your fics
welshgirl68 says
Lovely story
BnTinmyhead says
Oh this is clever I like this already…