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Chapter 10 – Step by step
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”Hello”
The woman’s voice was calm and Bette didn’t think she would be able to talk to her as calmly, but the brunette pulled herself together
”Good evening, Elsa. This is Bette Porter. I’m sorry for calling outside of business hours and with a very strange question…”
Bette tried to pretend calm, but everything inside her was shaking with excitement for her daughter
”Hello, Bette. What are you calling about?”
Elsa’s voice became more interested, but remained measured
”The thing is, my daughter and your son Tyler have the same group of friends… Angie left her phone at home, and I’d like to make sure she’s okay. I know that Tyler is throwing a party tonight…”
”Oh, Bette, unfortunately I’m not in LA right now and I don’t think I can help you talk to your daughter… Tyler told me about a party, I think some of his friends from college are going there”
Bette put her hand to her forehead and closed her eyes. She wanted to see her daughter right now or her heart would just stop. Tina sat next to her and listened to the entire conversation, biting her lip, crossing her arms over her chest and looking at Bette.
”Elsa, I know this looks strange, but could you send me the coordinates of your house? We have a little problem with our daughter, so …”
Bette didn’t finish her sentence when Elsa interrupted her.
”Don’t explain, Bette. There are problems with teenagers. I’ll send you the address of our house”
Bette exhaled and looked at Tina
” Thank you very much. Once again, I’m sorry to bother you.”
” No problem. ”
They said goodbye and Elsa sent the address in a couple of seconds. Tina picked up her jacket and Bette’s raincoat. They quickly left the house, Bette driving and Tina in the passenger seat.
About 20 minutes later, they arrived at what appeared to be the Nelson house. It was a three-story large house with panoramic Windows and blue-green lighting around the perimeter of the house and the entire plot. The music didn’t come from the house itself, but rather from the backyard. Bette and Tina got out of the car and walked quickly around the house to see a lot of young people by the pool. Most of them were definitely several years older than their daughter. Many had fun in the pool, some went into the house, and some talked in companies.
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Bette and Tina make a good parenting team. They did the right thing going to the party and bringing Angie home. Angie is still a child and does not need to be at a party partaking of drugs and alcohol. There can be nothing but trouble at such an event. Drugs and alcohol are responsible for a lot of teenage pregnancies as well as destructive or addictive behavior. It was also a good idea to take all her communications devices away from her until they reach an understanding of what is happening with Angie and to re-establish the boundaries of acceptable behavior which is expected of Angie. Angie needs to understand the dangers she its putting herself into with this drinking and drug use. And Angie sneaking out of the house and going to a party when she has been prohibited from engaging in social activities needs to be addressed. I do not have children, but my suggestion is lengthening the time in which she does not have access or at least controlled access to her cell phone and other communication devices. Perhaps asking her to get involved in some community service project which deals with people who have alcohol or drug addiction problems. Angie needs to see the results of substance abuse when it goes unchecked without experiencing the problem personally. A night of vomiting with your mom holding your hair out of the way and wiping the sweat away with a damp washcloth is not going to be available forever. Then what? It’s a part of becoming an adult…being responsible for your own decisions and the results of those decisions. And Angie needs to see that even though she wants to be an adult, she is no where near showing that she is willing to assume the responsibility of being an adult.
Going to the house on the lake for a few days as a family was brilliant on Bette’s part. Deciding to stop their love making was also a wise decision by both Bette and Tina. They truly need to have a conversation as to where this is all going before they start down that road. Temporary physical satisfaction is highly tempting and definitely hard to resist. But, having an understanding as to the intents of both parties, particularly given their history is a wise decision for both of them. And they need to inform Angie as much as possible as to what their intents and what the status is as they go. Withholding information from Angie on Bette and Tina’s relationship and intents will only cause hard feelings and distrust from Angie. As Angie said – she has felt left out in the past. Do not make that mistake with the current situation nor their intents for the future. Treat Angie as a party to the process – for she absolute is a huge part of both Tina and Bette’s life.
Thanks for this chapter….. I feeling good about this story… love to see more.
Agree. As the mother of a son I will say that the teenage rebellious moment is so challenging. Angie has some deep seeded hurt that her moms need to help her work through. She has to be their focus right now and seems to definitely have their attention. Bette’s notion to change the environment was excellent. Bette giving up a few days of important work is even more so. Hope Eddie takes a hike but he seems like an Eric type who will enjoy tormenting Angie about her moms and especially Bette. Do so at your own peril Eddie.I like this story as well.
I think many parents of teenagers reading this chapter will find Angie’s behavior somewhat familiar… Thanks for your comment, Billy! ❤️
Martha, I agree that children are always participants in the processes that occur in the family, but they are not always able to understand the motives and desires of their parents. Unfortunately, parents also make mistakes and sometimes do not know which way to move and whether it is right. It’s absolutely true that Bette and Tina should be honest with Angie, but it’s important to find a middle ground so that you don’t say too much and get your hopes up. Well, I think so. It’s always difficult. Thank you for reading and as always very interesting comment.
Ada
Lovely lovely chapter.
Bette’s need to be close to Tine while feeling the stress of Angie’s behavior was so tender and sweet and Tina’s awareness to halt their physical actions completely understandable. The focus is on Angie as it should be. Angie could get in over her head very quickly. Eric sounds like he enjoys the chase and will introduce her to all sorts of things she is not ready for. Making pillows to look like she was sleeping – oldest trick in the book – and good detective work on the mamas to find her. Funny how teens always think they are clever. Angie may need some counseling and strict restrictions on her phone, laptop and free time.
The trip away was an excellent idea and already yielded results the first night they were there. They will come back stronger I hope.
Sweet story Ada, thank you for writing
BK
Agree. Dealing with Angie is bringing Bette and Tina closer together. Angie loves having her moms together. Even if she is hard on both of them. This trip is good for all of them. Tough love time Angie – you cannot lie to your parents. And Eddie is definitely BAD news. Bette is my warrior.
I agree Angie will be one of the best ways for Tibette to come together. Putting their issues aside to focus on a common concern will break barriers. This is very realistic response that a kid would have when there is disruption, confusion and inconsistency. Kids see more then parents would like and emotionally respond in ways that are complicated for parents.
K
Yes, for some reason, not only do teenagers think their parents are stupid, but parents often think that their children do not notice anything… this, of course, is not the case. Thanks, K!
I’m so looking forward to you releasing some new story!
Teenagers very often consider their parents fools who do not understand anything :) this is an interesting thought process in the minds of young people. Thank you for taking the time to read this chapter. It means a lot to me. Thanks BK!
So true!!! Lovely to come out the other side.
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