Fan Fiction
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Chapter 11
Tina smiles as Bette lays gentle kisses on her neck.
(Tina) I’m glad that you came to see me
(Bette smiles) I wasn’t going to let you get away so easily
Bette draws back and smiles and Tina reaches towards her and runs her thumb over Bette’s bottom lip.
(Tina) And why was that?
Bette looks back at her, examining her for a moment.
(Bette) The rules are still off?
Tina slowly nods and Bette continues to look at her uncertainly, unsure of how much she should share. They hold each other’s gaze for a long moment, and Tina then takes hold of Bette’s hand, placing it flat on the centre of her own chest and holding it in place. She then slowly moves Bette’s hand down her body, over her stomach, and under her dress.
Bette feels the air suddenly escape her lungs, closing her eyes and burying her head into Tina’s neck as she struggles to catch her breath. Tina smiles and wraps her arms around Bette’s head and buries her hands in her hair as she reacts to Bette’s slow movements. They hold the position and continue in silence for a moment, both breathing heavily.
(Bette) Is that OK?
(Tina smiles) Oh my God what do you think?
Bette smiles and Tina leans her head back.
(Tina) Jesus
Tina brings her head forward, leaning her cheek against Bette’s as she tightens her hold around her back.
(Tina) Tell me
(Bette) Why I wasn’t going to let you go?
Tina takes a sharp intake of breath.
(Tina) Yes
Tina draws back and lifts Bette’s chin and they meet each other’s eyes. Tina leans further into her.
(Tina) Tell me baby
Bette struggles to keep her breathing even as she looks up at her, feeling overwhelmed with the intensity of the moment.
(Bette) Do you remember when we first met eyes across the room at my gallery?
Tina tightens her hold around Bette’s back.
(Tina) Yes
They maintain eye contact as Tina moves her hand through Bette’s hair to the back of her head and begins to slowly rock her hips to match Bette’s rhythm.
(Bette) I have never in my life felt what I did in that moment
Tina smiles and leans her head back and Bette kisses her firmly on the neck.
(Tina) I felt it too
(Bette) Really?
Tina digs her nails into Bette’s back.
(Tina) Yes
Tina shifts her knees further apart and Bette responds, increasing the speed of her movements as she bites into Tina’s shoulder.
(Tina) Fuck
Bette shuts her eyes and leans into Tina’s neck.
(Bette) I was so worried you were with Helena
(Tina) Don’t talk about Helena
Bette laughs.
(Bette) Sorry
Tina draws back and they both laugh as they lean their foreheads against each other. They both take deep shaky breaths as they hold each other close and continue moving their bodies in sync.
(Bette) You had me, from that first look
Tina gasps and moves her hand through Bette’s hair, pulling her head into her.
(Bette) And then our first conversation, our first night together. I was already gone
Tina smiles as she wraps her arm around the back of Bette’s head.
(Tina) I was too baby
They continue in silence, both breathing heavily and holding one another close. Tina’s breath hitches in her throat as she arches her back and Bette holds her, with her arm wrapped tightly around her back. Tina’s body relaxes in Bette’s arms, and Bette holds her against her, their breathing slowly returning to a usual pace. Tina places her hands on Bette’s shoulders and they look at one another, both feeling utterly overwhelmed by the other. Bette reaches up and moves the hair from Tina’s eyes.
(Bette) Are the rules back on now?
Tina looks at her for a moment and then reaches towards her, holding her hand to the side of Bette’s face. She holds that position for a moment and then nods.
(Tina) Yeah
They continue to look at each other before Tina leans closer, wrapping her arms around Bette’s back and pulling her body into her. Bette buries her head in Tina’s neck and they remain in that position, unable to get close enough to the other.
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Bibi28 says
Rules up and down and up again, but they confessed their true feelings.
I simply love this story!
majicspider60 says
Why is Tina making this so hard? I feel like she is manipiulating Bette for some strange reason. Either she feels the same way or she stops stringing Bette along! Piss or get off the pot , Tina! PPS
Martha3128 says
I am actually getting frustrated with this story. Its a point of trying to keep something hidden from the other… going through the motions of having a true connection when the rules say you do not. And since you do not, it could all be over without a word. No need for goodbyes or an explanations… because there was no connection anyway. Those are the rules. And their individual emotional response is their individual problem…. and that to me seems cruel and uncaring. Its a wall which will cause major heartache at some point which was the point of the making the rules in the first place. To avoid a heartbreak…. Time to take the chance that this relationship is real and is something good and long lasting and meaningful not just a good time momentary fling with no attachments. And just because they are attracted to each other and see and feel something they have never experienced before does not remove the “oh but this is just something for the moment” and has no future rules. And that is truly a frustrating thought…. This is a relationship with conditions.. Truly a bargained arrangement.
Thanks for the chapter…. I do hope these rules go away…. and allow them to love each other without conditions.
Vertigo295 says
I think that’s the point of this story… this journey that katynd is guiding us on. Finding a way. It’s going to be frustrating because the walls won’t come down all at once. They can’t. It’s too much. It’s going to be gradual.
photo79 says
I cannot wait for more chapters this is incredible
hroark says
Running out of superlatives to describe your writing, apropos of nothing, Bette’s line from Chpt 7 has been a recurring thought for me:
“(Bette) I don’t think you need to take quite so much from you feeling jealous. It doesn’t need to be the terrible thing you’re making it out to be, if we choose to look at it differently”
– This line should be framed and hanging on a psychotherapist’s waiting room wall.
Josie says
I created an account on here just to let you know how much I love your stories and your writing. I am so crazy hooked on every single one of your works. Thank you so much for sharing these stories with us.
I can’t wait to see how their relationship will evolve. I’m on the edge of my seat every time you post a chapter and I’m sure things will go terribly wrong before Tina finally realize how good Bette is for her. I can’t wait to hear more about Tina’s backstory and find out why she is so guarded. The way you portray them falling in love subtlety and slowly is pure perfection. It reminds me a little bit of some of your other stories as well. You capture this dynamic between them perfectly every time.
Anyways, can’t wait for more. And thank you again for keeping us entertained and continuing to keep the stories about Bette and Tina alive!
lysa2308 says
Omg I agree Josie!!!! I love this story and this chapter was so intense. I’ve read the end of page 5 going into to 6 like 10 times ! I love how it’s going. I definitely look forward to these.
Cat says
You are brilliant. BRILLIANT. I’m desperate to know what is going on for Tina in this story. Why the rules when you are both so clearly in love?
atvan says
Please update soon! It’s like a good book that I can’t put down.
Love your stories and how the stories evolve.
Carol R says
Tina has apparently been hurt in the past therefore doesn’t want the commitment with Bette. I think we will find out Tina’s reason. Bette is so patient with Tina letting her rule the relationship. Thank you for the new chapters.
Clarice says
This is really really good. thank you so much for sharing. I’m really loving this.