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Chapter 11
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Bette responds with Tina’s finger still resting against her lips.
(Bette) OK
Tina places both of her hands on Bette’s shoulders and then runs them slowly down her arms as they lean their foreheads against the other’s. They speak to each other softly.
(Bette) I went on a date two nights ago
(Tina) I heard about that actually
Bette draws back and they look at each other.
(Bette) I left as soon as we finished our meals and went straight home and called you
They hold each other’s gaze for another moment. Tina nods as she runs her fingers lightly through Bette’s hair.
(Tina) OK
Tina shifts herself closer and Bette reaches towards her and moves her hand through Tina’s hair, pulling her in and bringing their lips together. They draw back but remain close, and Bette moves her hands to Tina’s hips and takes a breath as she looks up at her.
(Bette) Can I also break the rules?
Tina looks back at her and raises her eyebrows, searching her face as Bette continues looking up at her.
(Tina) OK
Bette takes another breath before continuing.
(Bette) I think you’re the most extraordinary person I’ve ever met
Tina takes a sharp intake of breath as Bette reaches up and runs a finger slowly along her jawline, and down her neck, following the journey of her finger with her eyes.
(Bette) I’ve been wishing I could tell you that
Bette raises her eyes to meet Tina’s.
(Bette) I’m very glad that I met you. And very happy that we’re doing what we’re doing
Tina smiles and they look at each other for a moment.
(Tina) Me too
Bette takes hold of Tina’s hand, bringing it to her lips and gently kissing along her fingers. She looks back to her again with her head leaned to one side.
(Bette) Even though you did try pretty hard to ditch me initially
Tina laughs and Bette raises her eyebrows as she again moves her arms around Tina’s waist.
(Bette) I can’t believe you had me contact you through Helena
Tina smiles as she shifts herself closer.
(Tina) I can’t believe you showed up at my work
Bette smiles and leans in and kisses her jawline.
(Bette) What were you thinking agreeing to go out with someone so crazy?
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Rules up and down and up again, but they confessed their true feelings.
I simply love this story!
Why is Tina making this so hard? I feel like she is manipiulating Bette for some strange reason. Either she feels the same way or she stops stringing Bette along! Piss or get off the pot , Tina! PPS
I am actually getting frustrated with this story. Its a point of trying to keep something hidden from the other… going through the motions of having a true connection when the rules say you do not. And since you do not, it could all be over without a word. No need for goodbyes or an explanations… because there was no connection anyway. Those are the rules. And their individual emotional response is their individual problem…. and that to me seems cruel and uncaring. Its a wall which will cause major heartache at some point which was the point of the making the rules in the first place. To avoid a heartbreak…. Time to take the chance that this relationship is real and is something good and long lasting and meaningful not just a good time momentary fling with no attachments. And just because they are attracted to each other and see and feel something they have never experienced before does not remove the “oh but this is just something for the moment” and has no future rules. And that is truly a frustrating thought…. This is a relationship with conditions.. Truly a bargained arrangement.
Thanks for the chapter…. I do hope these rules go away…. and allow them to love each other without conditions.
I think that’s the point of this story… this journey that katynd is guiding us on. Finding a way. It’s going to be frustrating because the walls won’t come down all at once. They can’t. It’s too much. It’s going to be gradual.
I cannot wait for more chapters this is incredible
Running out of superlatives to describe your writing, apropos of nothing, Bette’s line from Chpt 7 has been a recurring thought for me:
“(Bette) I don’t think you need to take quite so much from you feeling jealous. It doesn’t need to be the terrible thing you’re making it out to be, if we choose to look at it differently”
– This line should be framed and hanging on a psychotherapist’s waiting room wall.
I created an account on here just to let you know how much I love your stories and your writing. I am so crazy hooked on every single one of your works. Thank you so much for sharing these stories with us.
I can’t wait to see how their relationship will evolve. I’m on the edge of my seat every time you post a chapter and I’m sure things will go terribly wrong before Tina finally realize how good Bette is for her. I can’t wait to hear more about Tina’s backstory and find out why she is so guarded. The way you portray them falling in love subtlety and slowly is pure perfection. It reminds me a little bit of some of your other stories as well. You capture this dynamic between them perfectly every time.
Anyways, can’t wait for more. And thank you again for keeping us entertained and continuing to keep the stories about Bette and Tina alive!
Omg I agree Josie!!!! I love this story and this chapter was so intense. I’ve read the end of page 5 going into to 6 like 10 times ! I love how it’s going. I definitely look forward to these.
You are brilliant. BRILLIANT. I’m desperate to know what is going on for Tina in this story. Why the rules when you are both so clearly in love?
Please update soon! It’s like a good book that I can’t put down.
Love your stories and how the stories evolve.
Tina has apparently been hurt in the past therefore doesn’t want the commitment with Bette. I think we will find out Tina’s reason. Bette is so patient with Tina letting her rule the relationship. Thank you for the new chapters.
This is really really good. thank you so much for sharing. I’m really loving this.