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Chapter 21 – The end and the beginning
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Here and now there was an atmosphere of calm and kindness, and every person in this space feeling this. There were no problems, no worries, just everything that makes happy and peaceful.
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At 11 p.m, almost everyone has left hotel, leaving only Bette, Tina, Angie, Jordi, Shane and Quiara. They were all standing outside the hotel, waiting for the car. Angie should have gone to Shane’s for the night, because Bette and Tina were staying at the hotel, and she didn’t like being home alone at night. But it seems Angie had other plans.
”About the night… Can I go to Jordi’s? I mean, I don’t want to be home alone, so…”
She looked away several times, looking at Jordi, who was talking on the phone to the side. Angie sounded a little unsure, because she expected Bette to probably not be thrilled with the idea.
”Wait, aren’t you going to Shane’s? Shane?” Bette called out to her friend, who was standing off to the side, talking to Quiara. She turned, but Angie started to speak, and Bette looked back at her daughter.
”Yes, but… I’m sure Shane would be more comfortable if I went to Jordi’s…”
”Shane didn’t mind if…”
She hadn’t finished speaking when she felt Tina’s eyes on her. The brunette turned her head and saw Tina looking at her with a slight smile and a look like ”Bette, come on.” Bette raised one eyebrow and seemed to realize for the first time that this wasn’t about Shane’s comfort.
”Aw, um, erm … well…”
Bette felt Tina’s hand stroking her waist, and after that ”aw, um, erm, well” interjection, Tina looked at Angie with the same smile and nodded silently, which meant that she could go to Jordi’s. Angie literally jumped up and down with joy, hugged her moms quickly and sharply, and ran to Jordi.
Bette gave Tina another questioning look, and the blonde kissed her on the lips.
”You’re so cute at times like this”
”I’m not cute, I’m confused. I don’t know how to react to this… yet”
When everyone had said their goodbyes and left, Tina and Bette went to their suite, wanting to continue the anniversary privately.
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Very nice ending to the story…. a twenty-fifth anniversary party…. a honeymoon suite and a trip to Switzerland on Monday…. wow… very nice….
Looks like things are going well for the family…. they have a good foundation on going forward…. Angie is over the troublemaker and attracted to Jordi….. just hope this does not disrupt her plans for college and a future career.
Love at a young age is sincere and passionate but not always the best judgement. Angie will make her own decisions, but if you she puts going to the best school which fulfills her goals on the line as a result, both Tina and Bette will not be happy. I wish them all the best. It appears that many of their problems can be diminished with good ole fashion conversation.
Thank you for your lovely story…. Happy New Year….
I agree with Martha. You tackled a tough subject matter and brought them out the other side in a healthy way. Angie planned a lovely party for her parents, Glad Eddie is yesterday’s news. Good job!
Thank you! It’s been an amazing journey Happy New Year
Hi Ada,
First, Happy New Year!
This was a great story to read and i am very happy with the end. I didn’t always comment but read every chapter. It was quite the journey but they got through it to the other end and ended it with a lovely party organized by Angie.
And the finish touch a second honeymoon to Switserland, a cabin in the mountains.
The eyes speak volumes, especially Bette’s eyes, windows into her soul, i quote these lines because i truly love it:
“Admiration, adoration, reverence, tenderness, care, awe, trust, infinite gratitude and something else that cannot be expressed in words, that can only be seen in the eyes of a person who unconditionally and endlessly loves you.
They continued to look at each other, silently expressing all the feelings that fill them now. It was such a powerful eye contact, such an emotional outburst, a declaration of love that was felt in every cell of the body. A conversation of two hearts, when any words are superfluous.”
Beautiful!
Hope you will be back with another story! I wish you joy, health, inspiration and love for this New Year! Stay save!
Thank you for the story, it was a emotional rollercoaster.
But we wouldn’t know what was Tina’s present?
Happy New Year!
When are you posting more stuff?
Good story line! When can we expect more? Soon I hope!