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Frozen Beginnings – Chapter Three
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“It’ll be good for you to rough it a little.” He had even said laughingly ignoring his daughter’s protestations before abruptly finishing the call claiming how his chauffeur was waiting for him to take him away on an engagement.
“Well, is he worried about you?” Bette asked as Tina begrudgingly ended the call. “I tried as best I could to put his mind at rest by telling him I would take care of you and how you were already helping with a little project. By the way, you still haven’t showed me what you have done so far.” Bette tilted her chin towards the computer which was still perched on Tina’s lap.
“You haven’t told me exactly what your boss’ brief was… a theme, a vision or other things such as do they want to tear walls down… what?”
“Wow wow… you are really starting to sound like a pro,” Bette mocked trying to stop Tina’s destructive approach by lifting her hands up.
“If you are going to ridicule my work, you can have your computer back and I’ll grab a book to read.” Tina huffed.
Bette reached for the computer on Tina’s lap and tilted the screen to correct the glare coming from the fire place.
“Seems I owe you an apology… you do know how to use a computer after all.”
Tina lifted her gaze to observe the tanned face. Bette was studying her work with interest but Tina however saw no real sign of repentance.
“The living room is far too big.” Bette declared a few seconds later.
“”What makes you think that… and how much do you know about what your boss wants to do with the house?”
“They want to move to London and use this house as a pied-à- terre for work. So a big office space would suit better.”
“What kind of work?”
“Finance… I think.”
“Do you not know what your employer does for a living?” Tina asked mockingly. “Wait, do you think maybe they thought you would not understand?”
Bette ignored the little jibe Tina was trying to rile her with and instead kept asking more questions about windows, archways, stud walls and countersunk lighting…
Tina matched each questions with a passionate answer but her new found elation was short lived when Bette out of the blue slammed the lid of the computer shut before getting up to throw a log on the fire. She, then, headed for one of the bookcases, picked a book and threw it to Tina.
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Another great chapter I was wondering why bette was so angry and then at the end she seemed to soften up a bit looking forward to the next chapter so pps.
Very interesting, I am very curious what connection Bette has with Tina’s father. Loved it, thanks
Great chapter my friend…Love Bettes teasing of poor Tina…Tina biting back at Bette Tinas surprise and indignation at the fact that Bette had dressed her…But then enjoyed Bettes gentleness in tending to her injured foot..Tina is definitely interested in the fact and obviously pleased that Bette prefers ladies.They seem to have a shared interest to in house improvement and interior design…I look forward to the atmosphere thawing between the two as they get to know one another more…Bring on the next chapter A sap..Loving it Kins…Cxx
Loved it! Please post soon!
Thanks for the update – the walls are starting to crumble between the two.. Can’t wait to see where you take this story. PPS!
It is always a delight to read one of your stories! I am aboard and looking forward to finding out what Bette’s problem is!
I love these full integration of pure provocation they have
outra.Acredito with this form of treatment Bette
should be directed to Tina is by having your heart broken due
a loving disappointment, and suddenly falls by parachute in his
port, this lovely blonde with angel face who came to shake her
emotions she certainly did not want to feel.
I just can not explain how Tina’s father does not care about
the fact that your daughter to be with stranger.
Loving this story.
10 stars.
it was a great chapter. I really liked it! I wonder why Bette is cold and unfeeling, with Tina?
wondering what it was that hardened her heart? :)
but it seems that Tina is able to cut her sarcastic comments.
This is really strange: what is the relationship between Bette and Tina’s father?
oh, so Tina evaluate her slightly evil hosts beauty? ;)
and the house projekt … it will be very interesting.
I look forward to the sequel.
I can’t get enough of this story.
Love the dynamics of these two…great story!
Great ! I like it very much. A world that only left two of them…. hope good feelings grow better between them soon.. Thank you for posting.
Awesome as always Kins! Can’t wait for more. Thanks sweetheart!
Your Bette is a ‘perfect’ stranger :)
Your stories always have a tangential entry. Never full on allowing the reader to conjure up many different scenarios, never quite open and direct. Then suddenly, the “Aha !” moment. You’re very skillful.
Love all your stories kins (especially Bette as a vet in Savannah) and am loving this one!
Lovely descriptive paragraphs of the house and surroundings, I had to put a jumper on to combat the cold from the snow!
Looking forward to Bette’s back story and the blossoming relationship so please post another chapter soon.
ok I get the feeling that Bette is piloar ijs…seriously why is she so mean to poor ole Tina and what the hell is it that she does? and when will they hold each other at night…ok that’s was a question for my own pleasure but seriously whats’ going on with Bette?
Very interesting