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Frozen Beginnings – Chapter Three
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“What have you managed to do?” Bette continued taking a heavy seat on the sofa next to Tina causing her to shift slightly in her seated position and tilt towards the brunette. Their arms brushed for a split second before Tina straightened herself up again.
“Not very much…” Tina replied trying to contain her reaction to the bare ….warm… olive…skin exposed. “Uh… is it still snowing?”
She knew her question was ridiculous, she could see that it was and the water still trickling from the brunette’s wild hair was still attesting to that fact.
“Yes it is…” the brunette did not choose this time to make a mocking remark, “So what do you think of the project? You like it?”
Bette’s eyes lit up somewhat and Tina grew instantly worried that she might have, even with the little she had done, ruined what seemed to be quite a personal venture.
“You said I could phone my father…” Tina attempted to change the topic of conversation, “…And by the way, what gave you the right to phone him? And how do you know his number? And what have you told him?”
Bette let out a little chuckle putting her hands up in defence at Tina’s rising tone.
“My… my… so many questions! Has your mother never told you to never hassle her after a hard day’s work?”
“My mother died when I was eight.”
Bette’s jaw visibly clenched. She looked down at her hands before looking back up and pouring her warm brown eyes over Tina.
“I’m… I’m sorry.” She offered humbly.
The deep soft timbre of the brunette’s voice and the apologetic look in her eyes made Tina’s skin react in an explosion of goosebumps.
“You.. you have not answered my questions.” Tina reminded the brunette shakily.
“Well, if you must know, it was stored in my phone after you used it yesterday. I thought it best to make sure that he was aware that nothing untoward had befallen his precious daughter overnight. Here…” Bette offered her mobile phone to the blonde, “You can verify it for yourself.”
When Tina finally got the hold of her father, she was surprised to hear that he was by no means worried to know her stuck in the middle of nowhere with a perfect stranger.
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Another great chapter I was wondering why bette was so angry and then at the end she seemed to soften up a bit looking forward to the next chapter so pps.
Very interesting, I am very curious what connection Bette has with Tina’s father. Loved it, thanks
Great chapter my friend…Love Bettes teasing of poor Tina…Tina biting back at Bette Tinas surprise and indignation at the fact that Bette had dressed her…But then enjoyed Bettes gentleness in tending to her injured foot..Tina is definitely interested in the fact and obviously pleased that Bette prefers ladies.They seem to have a shared interest to in house improvement and interior design…I look forward to the atmosphere thawing between the two as they get to know one another more…Bring on the next chapter A sap..Loving it Kins…Cxx
Loved it! Please post soon!
Thanks for the update – the walls are starting to crumble between the two.. Can’t wait to see where you take this story. PPS!
It is always a delight to read one of your stories! I am aboard and looking forward to finding out what Bette’s problem is!
I love these full integration of pure provocation they have
outra.Acredito with this form of treatment Bette
should be directed to Tina is by having your heart broken due
a loving disappointment, and suddenly falls by parachute in his
port, this lovely blonde with angel face who came to shake her
emotions she certainly did not want to feel.
I just can not explain how Tina’s father does not care about
the fact that your daughter to be with stranger.
Loving this story.
10 stars.
it was a great chapter. I really liked it! I wonder why Bette is cold and unfeeling, with Tina?
wondering what it was that hardened her heart? :)
but it seems that Tina is able to cut her sarcastic comments.
This is really strange: what is the relationship between Bette and Tina’s father?
oh, so Tina evaluate her slightly evil hosts beauty? ;)
and the house projekt … it will be very interesting.
I look forward to the sequel.
I can’t get enough of this story.
Love the dynamics of these two…great story!
Great ! I like it very much. A world that only left two of them…. hope good feelings grow better between them soon.. Thank you for posting.
Awesome as always Kins! Can’t wait for more. Thanks sweetheart!
Your Bette is a ‘perfect’ stranger :)
Your stories always have a tangential entry. Never full on allowing the reader to conjure up many different scenarios, never quite open and direct. Then suddenly, the “Aha !” moment. You’re very skillful.
Love all your stories kins (especially Bette as a vet in Savannah) and am loving this one!
Lovely descriptive paragraphs of the house and surroundings, I had to put a jumper on to combat the cold from the snow!
Looking forward to Bette’s back story and the blossoming relationship so please post another chapter soon.
ok I get the feeling that Bette is piloar ijs…seriously why is she so mean to poor ole Tina and what the hell is it that she does? and when will they hold each other at night…ok that’s was a question for my own pleasure but seriously whats’ going on with Bette?
Very interesting