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Frozen Beginnings – Chapter Three
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Clenching her teeth to avoid further unnecessary aggravation, she put her head down and focused on the work in front of her. But try as she did, Tina couldn’t help but every so often lift her eyes to look out of the little windows to witness how Bette was so diligent at clearing a path all the way around the chalet. She seemed to move tirelessly, powerfully even, the hard graft barely registering on her features bar maybe a steady if not more rapid breathing pattern, visible in short streams of steam in the cold of the day.
Her eyes lingered on the strong back and arms which shovelled heavy spadesful of virgin snow.
Virgin. Untouched. Immaculate.
Her mind wandered further from that point. Bette was an attractive if not slightly gruff woman. She exuded raw charm, she was tall, lean, strong… mean but despite this last and definitely less enviable quality something invariably drew her to Tina.
She wondered out loud if anyone had ever taken the brunette’s heart. Surely hers was a lifetime of loneliness, despite her saying to the contrary earlier on. No one would wish to start a relationship with someone who revered in alone time as much as Bette did.
Tina swept her surrounding with her eyes, looking for a clue to a loved one, a special somebody, a picture, a memento, anything…. That would show that Bette did have a heart and it did or had at least once belonged to someone. Man or woman…
This last thought kept her interest a little longer. All signs pointed towards it and Tina’s heart beat a little faster. What if she preferred….. women? A long needy sigh escaped her chest but her musing was quickly interrupted when the brunette returned laden with a basket of freshly cut logs.
Silently Bette dropped her heavy load on the floor of the kitchen by the door before shrugging off her heavy coat and boots and making her way towards the fire to dry the dusting of snow in her hair which had started to melt and was dripping on her shoulders and along her face.
“Having fun?” she asked as she turned her back to Tina and shook her damp hair in front of the fire before removing her jumper and shirt to reveal a white tank top she had been wearing below it.
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Another great chapter I was wondering why bette was so angry and then at the end she seemed to soften up a bit looking forward to the next chapter so pps.
Very interesting, I am very curious what connection Bette has with Tina’s father. Loved it, thanks
Great chapter my friend…Love Bettes teasing of poor Tina…Tina biting back at Bette Tinas surprise and indignation at the fact that Bette had dressed her…But then enjoyed Bettes gentleness in tending to her injured foot..Tina is definitely interested in the fact and obviously pleased that Bette prefers ladies.They seem to have a shared interest to in house improvement and interior design…I look forward to the atmosphere thawing between the two as they get to know one another more…Bring on the next chapter A sap..Loving it Kins…Cxx
Loved it! Please post soon!
Thanks for the update – the walls are starting to crumble between the two.. Can’t wait to see where you take this story. PPS!
It is always a delight to read one of your stories! I am aboard and looking forward to finding out what Bette’s problem is!
I love these full integration of pure provocation they have
outra.Acredito with this form of treatment Bette
should be directed to Tina is by having your heart broken due
a loving disappointment, and suddenly falls by parachute in his
port, this lovely blonde with angel face who came to shake her
emotions she certainly did not want to feel.
I just can not explain how Tina’s father does not care about
the fact that your daughter to be with stranger.
Loving this story.
10 stars.
it was a great chapter. I really liked it! I wonder why Bette is cold and unfeeling, with Tina?
wondering what it was that hardened her heart? :)
but it seems that Tina is able to cut her sarcastic comments.
This is really strange: what is the relationship between Bette and Tina’s father?
oh, so Tina evaluate her slightly evil hosts beauty? ;)
and the house projekt … it will be very interesting.
I look forward to the sequel.
I can’t get enough of this story.
Love the dynamics of these two…great story!
Great ! I like it very much. A world that only left two of them…. hope good feelings grow better between them soon.. Thank you for posting.
Awesome as always Kins! Can’t wait for more. Thanks sweetheart!
Your Bette is a ‘perfect’ stranger :)
Your stories always have a tangential entry. Never full on allowing the reader to conjure up many different scenarios, never quite open and direct. Then suddenly, the “Aha !” moment. You’re very skillful.
Love all your stories kins (especially Bette as a vet in Savannah) and am loving this one!
Lovely descriptive paragraphs of the house and surroundings, I had to put a jumper on to combat the cold from the snow!
Looking forward to Bette’s back story and the blossoming relationship so please post another chapter soon.
ok I get the feeling that Bette is piloar ijs…seriously why is she so mean to poor ole Tina and what the hell is it that she does? and when will they hold each other at night…ok that’s was a question for my own pleasure but seriously whats’ going on with Bette?
Very interesting