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    Chapter 34 – SURPRISE

    Story written on March 24, 2025 by Collins.
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    Who’s the unexpected visitor??

    “She took her meds as prescribed?” Bette inquired.

    “Yes, as scheduled.” Tina told her. “But it seems that the standard meds the doctors have given her aren’t having any positive effect today.”

    “I see.” Bette noticed the tight look around Tina’s mouth that she recalled usually appeared when the blonde was nervous or stressed.

    “Can you help her?” Tina’s brows twisted in worry and concern.

    Before Bette could respond, Ashley shouted out for her sister with a voice laced with unease.

    “Tina!”

    “Coming.” The blonde called out anxiously as she took a step closer to the bedroom and glanced back at Bette to follow her.

    “Why don’t I give Ashley a quick exam and try to determine what’s going on with her right now?” Bette suggested as they reached the doorway to the bedroom. She glanced at Tina waiting for an answer.

    “Oh, that would be great.” Tina touched Bette’s left arm in gratitude. “Thank you.”

    “Um, give me a few minutes and I’ll let you know.” Bette tried to ignore the tremor in the pit of her stomach she experienced from Tina’s touch. She stood up straight and on shaky legs, stepped fully into the bedroom.

    Bette quickly greeted Ashley and over the next ten minutes, she conducted an examination on the weakened woman and assessed her physical condition.

    During that time, Tina took the opportunity to observe the brunette in her true doctor mode. She watched the doctor ask Ashley several questions and performed a few simple tests and body checks. Tina looked on and watched the doctor do her work. She was impressed by the care Bette took in her manner and method. Bette used gentle touches and a calming, reassuring voice. Whatever it took to put the patient at ease. Tina recalled the brunette’s dedication to her vocation.

    Bette was a true, compassionate professional and understood the complexities of the body, especially how it was affected by powerful medications. As she worked, she explained to the sisters that what Ashley was experiencing was normal as her system adjusted to the potent chemicals invading her body through the medications and how her infected immune system still fought to defend her. The doctor explained it’s wasn’t unusual for medication that managed side effects to become less effective as the treatment chemicals accumulated in the body.

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    1. Hi my friend,

      What a pleasant surprise to see an update on this awesome story!

      I hope everything is going well with you and your family.

      Bette going to visit Tina and Ashley after she just only came back and heard the message from Tina to the on call doctor to look and care for Ashley herself.

      Glad Tina asked Bette to stay for a cup of tea, they chit chatted and although Tina hoped for a more in depth conversation it’s a start, Tina is obviously very proud of Bette’s successful career and what she has achieved so far and is still the Bette she knows from the past, involved and attentive.

      Tina also noticed Bette’s tiredness, the trembling of her hand and how she fainted two weeks prior in the office. She is a smart lady and suspects it’s more than the tiredness and stress from work.

      For now, no anger, arguing, just a nice chat over a cup of tea.

      My wife and i will visit a dear friend in the UK in October but i can tell you we will not chat with a cup of tea, she doesn’t like tea, can you imagine, an English resident who doesn’t like tea

      Hope you are posting a new chapter soon.

      Take care of yourself

      • Hey pal,

        Thanks for asking about my family.

        This scene was one option to allow Bette & Tina to talk in a non confrontational manner and be at ease with one another again. The attraction they have for one another is still present and undeniable, regardless of what Bette might think or want.

        You’ve picked up the obvious clues in Bette’s appearance & Tina’s keen ability to see through her.

        Hope you enjoy your vacation in Oct & give Big Ben a wave from me!! I miss London & all the sights!!

        Yes, new chapter will post soon – just one more read through & it should be ready to go.

        Take care & be safe.

    2. I love any chapter with Tina and Bette in it, especially if they talk with one another,

      Liked the interaction with Tina and Ashley also and Bette is so good in treating Ashley.

      Hope we get the big conversation between Bette and Tina soon.

      Thanks so much.

      • Hi,

        I thought this was a good family chapter in that the Kennards got some attention & then Bette & Tina had an opportunity to start the process of getting to know one another again.

        Big convo coming soon!!

    4. So great to see this update! I loved so many things in this chapter – Tina takes such good care of her little sister Ashley, Bette showing up at the door when she saw Tina’s request for the on=call doctor, Bette & Tina having tea and chatting – you could see their connection is still alive. And Tina was so affectionate, cupping Bette’s cheek and kissing her cheek, how much longer can Bette resist, lol.
      As always, so well-written, my friend.

      • Hey friend,

        I was thinking of the importance of the sisterly bond between Tina & Ashley & how deep that connection goes for them.

        And definitely wanted Tibette to have some time to chat & get comfortable with one another again.

        How long do you think Bette can resist Tina??

    6. Great update – always love your scenes between Bette and Tina – so much detail and the situations always seem to tug on our heartstrings.

      Looking forward to what happens next!

      • Hi,

        Thanks for commenting & glad you enjoyed the chapter.

        As you probably know, I like to paint an entire picture of the situation, scene & all the little details along the way.

        More to come.

    8. Glad we got to read about Ashley for a bit. Love the bond that she and Tina have.

      Can’t wait for the big chat between Bette and Tina!

      Thanks for the update.

      • Hiya,

        Family connection is always important to me as I write my stories & present those relationships with respect.

        The big convo coming very soon.

    9. Sorry if I’m late to the party, but this chapter was very good. Loved the reconnection between Tina and Bette. You always write them in such a loving way it’s like a caress to one another.

      Please keep the chapters coming.

      • Hi,
        It’s never too late to leave a comment. Us writers live for them!

        Thanks for your kind words & outlook on this novel. I’ve tried my best to make it interesting, informative & throw a little fun too along the way.

        Several more chapters to come.

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