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Chapter 4 – Philadelphia – Day 3
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Bette: Okay, let’s do that then.
Tina: You want some more coffee or are you ready for that shower?
Bette: Let’s get that shower so we smell a little better when the bellman gets here.
Tina: Are you suggesting we stink?
Bette: We smell a little like sex… or that may be because I am so in tuned to that smell. But it’s a smell that I only want to share with you.
Tina: I think we should wear some comfortable jeans today. I want to wear my loose-fitting ones in case I have another hot flash. I want my skin to be able to breathe a little.
Bette: Yeah, I brought some as well. That would be perfect for this early fall day.
They went off to the shower and enjoyed being clean again. They were dressed and had their makeup and hair done by the time the bellman arrived with a cart of food.
Bette signed the ticket and helped set up the food on the table. She then tipped the bellman and he was out the door. Tina came in and saw the food.
Tina: I may have gotten a little carried away in my ordering.
Bette: Well, I hope you’re hungry because there is a lot here. Eggs benedict, bacon, English muffins, strawberries and blueberries, hash browns and a couple of apple fritters. Oh, and coffee and orange juice.
Tina: Sorry… too much?
Bette: Well, we may be able to wrap the apple fritters and take with us for a late morning snack. But the rest of it probably needs to be consumed or left to be disposed of. Coffee?
They sat and ate and enjoyed their breakfast. They laughed and teased one another about the fact that they spent most of the morning nude and sweating but no sex.
After they finished their breakfast, Bette got out a small back pack and began to pack for the day. A jacket for each of them in the event it got cold, the apple fritters, some reserve cash, water, headache remedy, and Tina’s camera. Bette then threw in a face towel from the hotel. They put their billfolds and cell phones in their pants pocket’s along with their room keys and headed out for their day. Bette asked the bell captain to have a cab waiting for them so they could be on their way.
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Hi Martha, what an amazing trip to Philadelphia. There was so much information regarding Melvin and what they learnt if him and his life. Poor Bette, I think it’s going to be pretty difficult to explain this all to Mary and her sister as it has obviously hit her hearing all this. Tina is such a tower of strength to her, I love how they are so besotted with each other and hold each other up! I love hearing about their plans for Angie and Daniel, they are so attentive to their children and want only the best for them. The way they talk through everything with them making sure they understand .
Finally the love they have for each other, is incredibly. They way they do everything for each other, they just want to be together, all the time. Enjoying being out shopping, visiting museums, enjoying meals or just cuddling up on the sofa. They are, as you said, the other half of each other !
Loving this so much, will continue on….o hope you are also continuing on, with this story….
Take care and Thankyou, for this amazing piece of writing!
Thanks… I have always thought that the relationship between Bette and her father was the most important relationship of her life prior to Tina. I could see that she struggled to love and admire the man who always seemed to believe she never quite measured up to his standards. But in my mind, I always knew that Melvin loved his children with all of his heart. He just didn’t have the ability to show this to them. His thought was to just leave them all his worldly possessions and they would know. But the truth is that until Bette talked to Gabriel Scott and to Harriett Myers, she would never know how much Melvin loved Bette, Kit, Mary, Paris and even Tina.
When Tina points out that if Melvin had told Bette on his death bed that Mary was alive and that she had another sister, Bette would be in shock. But if he told her that he had known for 15 years or more, Bette might have taken a pillow and smothered him on the spot. The truth was there was never going to be an ideal time to tell Bette or Kit about Mary Southerland. And Bette knows this deep in her heart. She also knows that all of this is a part of the past. A past which is done and dusted. And all the what ifs and if onlys are a waste of energy. Melvin and his relationship with Bette, Kit and Tina is what it was and had its impact on their lives. For Bette and for Tina, it explains so much. It explains why Tina is a part of his will. It explains why the final distribution was 18 years after his death. It explains how he found out about Mary Southerland and her daughter Paris. It explains how Paris was educated in England during her teen years and college years. And it gives another dimension to the personality of Melvin William Porter.
Bette is going to explain most of this to Kit, Paris and Mary in a future chapter. And in their own way, they will reconcile the Melvin they knew to the Melvin to the man they found in Philadelphia.
This for me is the most emotional chapter I have ever written… deep in my soul, I feel the loss Bette feels for the relationship she never had with her father and that is more painful than the fact that she had all those years of loss in not knowing her mother and sister. The reason is because Mary and Paris are still around and there is opportunity to have a good relationship with them. But Melvin is gone and there is no opportunity to mend that relationship with him. Such as life. But as Bette Porter and Tina Kennard always do – they learn from the mistakes including the mistakes of others around them. They have learned a lot from Melvin and much of it is what not to do in life.
Thank you for reading this and commenting…. it is rather gratifying to see that someone sees this story as a gratifying piece of entertainment. There are several more chapters to this Volume and it will continue.