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Frozen Beginnings – Chapter Two
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“You’ll catch a cold,” she continued turning her gaze towards the fireplace. “If I had known that company was expected I would have lit the fire. Get dressed you are shivering. Then I’ll bring you your dinner.”
“Thanks,” Tina was a little stunned by the change in her host demeanour. “It’s … very kind of you Ms Porter.”
“Please.. call me Bette. No need for such formalities since we now are…. roommates.”
They stood there for a few seconds taking each other in. Tina couldn’t help but notice how really stunning her host was. Not just her face but the woman in her entirety. And there was a little wild beauty to her which Tina found so intriguing and led her to think that in her own way the brunette could definitely turn a few heads.
Catching herself staring, Tina quickly averted her yes. “My father will see to it that you are rewarded for your generosity.”
“Because you think I need money?” Bette stopped in her tracks on her way out the door and turned around, her eyes narrowing slightly.
Tina who had started shivering in earnest in the cool room, was clambering in her bed, struggling to keep her towel around her. She pulled the covers high in an effort to warm up.
“It’s the least I could do. Not many people would say no to a little money.” The blonde continued matter of factly before lifting her eyes and meeting severe brown looking ones.
“I see. You have decided that because I wear worn clothes …I need money.!”
Tina swallowed hard. “I couldn’t say I had noticed.” she lied, hoping to deflect whatever she had said and had seemed to have offended the brunette. “I couldn’t possibly comment on the state of your finances. Anyway… I don’t even know what you do for a living … and to …”
The irritated glare which was scrutinising her did little to encourage her to carry on but Tina had really wanted to know.
“…be honest I cannot for the life of me think what lucrative operation anyone could run from such a God forsaken place… and…”
“I do not live here all the time, Tina!” A sharp voice interrupted her rant, “If you must know I only take care of this place.”
“Oh …Alright.” Tina was finally a little enlightened. Bette was going from odd jobs to odd jobs to earn a living. What a life this must be, she thought inwardly biting her bottom lip as she watched the brunette take her leave once more.
“I will bring you something to eat soon. “Her host said without turning back to look at her.
Tina’s heart sank a little as she let her head fall back in the pillows behind her. She was exhausted and sore. She closed her eyes. Five minutes rest would do, then she would get up and dress for dinner.
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1st! I WIN! I WIN! I WIN!!!!!
You are amazing Kins40! Thank you!!!
you forgot to tell everyone that you left your comment before reading! :0p
hey, that’s supposed to be our little secret!
Looking good. Its relly nice to read your new tory. Thx
I like this story pps
That was great! I am very intrigued how this story wil develop.
Tina must not assume things by how someone looks. She is one spoiled rich girl.
But i believe she will learn that.
And Bette, you surely made her sound like a hard woman, but with a caring side.
Love this story and i am glad you are back!
Great – interest retained – next post please!
Love Bette! ‘Something missing in that request’!! Tina’s in trouble!
Kins,
There is a piece of code you sometimes have to put into the story in the TEXT editing window. You can find that in the upper right part of your editing window next to a tab titled, Visual. Click on Text and you’ll see the codes WordPress uses to make your story appear in its format. I’ll put the little piece of code below this paragraph and hope that WordPress doesn’t make it disappear because that is what this little string does – it makes blank spaces. WordPress may “see” it and make this little bit of simple coding magic vanish. You’ll want to use this code for your stories so they are more readable in appearance.
The code should appear here:
If it’s not above this line then WP disappeared it from this comment box’s text. To find it to use take a story you’re editing and tap the spacebar several times to lift your text, then click the TEXT editing window and you’ll see the code to use. It’s where you’ve inserted the blank spaces.
Sometimes using the space bar between paragraphs and dialogue bites works and sometimes it doesn’t. But this ALWAYS works.
Blackbird
Loved it. Very curious about what Bette said to Tina’s father as well as what she does for a living. Thanks
I absolutely love your style. I feel like a fly on the wall observing Tina’s new surroundings for the first time with her. I can even smell the beeswax & lavender, and I love it!
It’s really great to have you back, Kins. I have a feeling this story will be as epic as all of your other masterpieces. Looking forward to the next chapter.
Regards,
Labrys
Ok so what does Bette really do for a.living? How do she know Tinas father? Why is she so rude to Tina? Questions questions….oh how I love stories like this and it keeps you anticipating, excited, and intrigued at the same time…nice chapter
Loved it! I think Bette is a very rich lady and she has business with Tina Dad. She might just work for him and she owns that cabin. Tina will learn the true meaning of being a simple person and not judging other by there looks. PPS
ok, so now I will leave my real comment. Thanks for blowing my cover!
It was awesome, as usual and you know how much I appreciate the heads up. ;) You’re still my #1.
great update, I really liked this chapter. whether the story’s title refers to Bette’s heart? what a Tina Kennard can be thawed? :P
so early in the story, I have so many questions, but I’m sure that you’ll be slow to answer them all. I have been so enjoying the beginning of this story, I’m sure that by the end, I’m hooked.
I’m looking forward to the next chapter.
Very nice. I will definitely keep reading. It’s been a very long time since I’ve been here and had to reset my password like 20 times just so I can comment. Don’t worry, I wrote down my password I’ll remember. I have even write a story or two, but first I need to finish the others.
Anyway Kins, you’re awesome as always.
Mmmm would really like to know the occupation of one Bette Porter.Definatley not a cabin maid.Some kind of executive probably.Anyway we will find out at some point.Pleased I got the occupant of the cabin right anyway and it was Bette to the rescue.Poor little rich girl Tina will be brought down to size I imagine.2 weeks on their own together.Time for feelings to grow.Love will be in the air as well.Instead of snow.Definately a winner with me.Great second chapter dear friend .Look forward to the next amazing chapter Kins..Cxx
An amazing and intriguing story so far..look forward to the next update!
I loved it. Thank you for posting !
Love it
I am so very glad to see your new story! I cannot wait for more!!
Wow you’re coming back in style.
Only today could conclude both parties
his new story and I confess that I was already
very pleased with what I read.
Loving this little game bette and tina.
Love all your stories.
Ten Stars !!!