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    Frozen Beginnings – Chapter Two

    Story written on September 17, 2014 by kins40.
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    When the time came, she hoisted herself as best she could out of the old fashioned slipper shaped with claw feet cast iron tub before wrapping herself into a white cotton bath sheet Bette had left for her. Hair still sleek with water and dripping down the middle of her back, she hobbled to the

    When the time came, she hoisted herself as best she could out of the old fashioned slipper shaped with claw feet cast iron tub before wrapping herself into a white cotton bath sheet Bette had left for her. Hair still sleek with water and dripping down the middle of her back, she hobbled to the bathroom door to call her host.

    “Could I borrow some of your clothes?” she hollered down the stairs.

    Bette appeared at the base of the steps with a pot in her hand.

    “Pardon?”

    “I was saying,” Tina spoke again, slowing her words down deliberately, “Could I borrow some of your clothes?”

    “Oh…I heard you the first time,” the brunette explained, “It’s just that there seems to be something missing in that request.”

    The sarcasm that Tina had momentarily forgotten whilst she took her bath made its abrupt come back. She was already having troubles holding her towel up, to Bette’s obvious glee but now she also had to deal with the brunette’s mocking streak.

    “Please?”

    “Much better.” Bette announced climbing the steps clearly enchanted by the milestone Tina seemed to have passed. “You can use the guestroom.”

    The brunette opened the door in front of Tina and helped her hobble inside. It was a tiny room decorated in the eclectic style of the rest of the chalet. A predominance of wood, accented with warm woollen rugs. There was a fireplace, a bed, a tad bigger than a single bed, a dresser and a wardrobe. It smelt of beeswax and lavender, it was cosy and feminine and nothing like her host, Tina thought within herself.

    Seeing the look of surprise on Tina’s face, Bette asked, “Will that be good enough for Milady?”

    “Yes.. yes..” Tina stuttered her eyes fixed on the patchwork cover on the small bed, “It’s fine.”

    “Good,” Bette declared noticing that the blonde was intrigued by the small bed, “There is only one double bed in this house and it is in my room. This..” Bette pointed to the guest bed, “Is as far as my hospitality goes.”

    “You may now change,” Bette added. The brunette’s gaze lingered a little over Tina’s lithe body which she was still struggling to keep decently covered with the help of her towel. The brunette’s voice then changed suddenly laced with concern.

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    4. That was great! I am very intrigued how this story wil develop.

      Tina must not assume things by how someone looks. She is one spoiled rich girl.

      But i believe she will learn that.

      And Bette, you surely made her sound like a hard woman, but with a caring side.

      Love this story and i am glad you are back!

    6. Kins,

      There is a piece of code you sometimes have to put into the story in the TEXT editing window. You can find that in the upper right part of your editing window next to a tab titled, Visual. Click on Text and you’ll see the codes WordPress uses to make your story appear in its format. I’ll put the little piece of code below this paragraph and hope that WordPress doesn’t make it disappear because that is what this little string does – it makes blank spaces. WordPress may “see” it and make this little bit of simple coding magic vanish. You’ll want to use this code for your stories so they are more readable in appearance.

      The code should appear here:  

      If it’s not above this line then WP disappeared it from this comment box’s text. To find it to use take a story you’re editing and tap the spacebar several times to lift your text, then click the TEXT editing window and you’ll see the code to use. It’s where you’ve inserted the blank spaces.

      Sometimes using the space bar between paragraphs and dialogue bites works and sometimes it doesn’t. But this ALWAYS works.

      Blackbird

    8. I absolutely love your style. I feel like a fly on the wall observing Tina’s new surroundings for the first time with her. I can even smell the beeswax & lavender, and I love it!

      It’s really great to have you back, Kins. I have a feeling this story will be as epic as all of your other masterpieces. Looking forward to the next chapter.

      Regards,
      Labrys

    9. Ok so what does Bette really do for a.living? How do she know Tinas father? Why is she so rude to Tina? Questions questions….oh how I love stories like this and it keeps you anticipating, excited, and intrigued at the same time…nice chapter

    10. Loved it! I think Bette is a very rich lady and she has business with Tina Dad. She might just work for him and she owns that cabin. Tina will learn the true meaning of being a simple person and not judging other by there looks. PPS

    11. ok, so now I will leave my real comment. Thanks for blowing my cover!

      It was awesome, as usual and you know how much I appreciate the heads up. ;) You’re still my #1.

    12. great update, I really liked this chapter. whether the story’s title refers to Bette’s heart? what a Tina Kennard can be thawed? :P
      so early in the story, I have so many questions, but I’m sure that you’ll be slow to answer them all. I have been so enjoying the beginning of this story, I’m sure that by the end, I’m hooked.
      I’m looking forward to the next chapter.

    13. Very nice. I will definitely keep reading. It’s been a very long time since I’ve been here and had to reset my password like 20 times just so I can comment. Don’t worry, I wrote down my password I’ll remember. I have even write a story or two, but first I need to finish the others.

      Anyway Kins, you’re awesome as always.

    14. Mmmm would really like to know the occupation of one Bette Porter.Definatley not a cabin maid.Some kind of executive probably.Anyway we will find out at some point.Pleased I got the occupant of the cabin right anyway and it was Bette to the rescue.Poor little rich girl Tina will be brought down to size I imagine.2 weeks on their own together.Time for feelings to grow.Love will be in the air as well.Instead of snow.Definately a winner with me.Great second chapter dear friend .Look forward to the next amazing chapter Kins..Cxx

    19. Wow you’re coming back in style.
      Only today could conclude both parties
      his new story and I confess that I was already
      very pleased with what I read.
      Loving this little game bette and tina.
      Love all your stories.
      Ten Stars !!!

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