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    Frozen Beginnings – Chapter Two

    Story written on September 17, 2014 by kins40.
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    The brunette lifted her head from her task to look at Tina in disbelief. Seeing that she was not being believed, Tina clenched her teeth. She would not give this woman the satisfaction of justifying herself some more. “How would you know anyway that my ankle is not broken?” Tina changed the topic of conversation.

    The brunette lifted her head from her task to look at Tina in disbelief. Seeing that she was not being believed, Tina clenched her teeth. She would not give this woman the satisfaction of justifying herself some more.

    “How would you know anyway that my ankle is not broken?” Tina changed the topic of conversation.

    “I know it. That’s all you need to know.” The reply was just as gruff as all the others.

    “Am I to believe you are a doctor?”

    “No.”

    “So what do you do?” Tina boldly asked.

    Her question remained unanswered as her rescuer kept her focus on finishing bandaging her foot. Tina was seething quietly; she had never encountered so much rudeness in her life. She leant back into the sofa’s armrest and angrily removed the woolly hat she was still wearing. Her long blonde hair fell in a cascade over the shoulders and the pillow behind her back.

    “Are you not going to answer?” Tina was now incredulous.

    Brown eyes finally turned towards her.

    “Let one thing be very clear,” the tone was unmistakably irritated, “You are here in my house and as such I will be asking the questions. Understood?”

    Stunned, Tina could only look at her rescuer, unable to riposte.

    “When I have my answers,” the woman continued, “I will draw you a bath and give you a change of clothes.”

    Tina had never known such arrogance and found herself totally dumbstruck.

    “First of all, explain to me how you found yourself in these parts, away from the normal ski runs?”

    It took Tina a few seconds to reply.

    “I… I tried to avoid an avalanche…”

    “Where?” the next question came swiftly.

    “Near Val d’Isère. I… I have had a little argument with my boyfriend and I thought skiing would calm me down. And then there was this avalanche… a little one … which took me off course.”

    “Bloody women!” The indignant remark was once again muttered under breath.

    But Tina heard it and wished at this point that she could leave this place as sleeping outside, at this very moment of time, offered nicer prospect than the insufferable company of this woman. But her ankle hurt so much that the blonde felt obliged to swallow her pride.

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    4. That was great! I am very intrigued how this story wil develop.

      Tina must not assume things by how someone looks. She is one spoiled rich girl.

      But i believe she will learn that.

      And Bette, you surely made her sound like a hard woman, but with a caring side.

      Love this story and i am glad you are back!

    6. Kins,

      There is a piece of code you sometimes have to put into the story in the TEXT editing window. You can find that in the upper right part of your editing window next to a tab titled, Visual. Click on Text and you’ll see the codes WordPress uses to make your story appear in its format. I’ll put the little piece of code below this paragraph and hope that WordPress doesn’t make it disappear because that is what this little string does – it makes blank spaces. WordPress may “see” it and make this little bit of simple coding magic vanish. You’ll want to use this code for your stories so they are more readable in appearance.

      The code should appear here:  

      If it’s not above this line then WP disappeared it from this comment box’s text. To find it to use take a story you’re editing and tap the spacebar several times to lift your text, then click the TEXT editing window and you’ll see the code to use. It’s where you’ve inserted the blank spaces.

      Sometimes using the space bar between paragraphs and dialogue bites works and sometimes it doesn’t. But this ALWAYS works.

      Blackbird

    8. I absolutely love your style. I feel like a fly on the wall observing Tina’s new surroundings for the first time with her. I can even smell the beeswax & lavender, and I love it!

      It’s really great to have you back, Kins. I have a feeling this story will be as epic as all of your other masterpieces. Looking forward to the next chapter.

      Regards,
      Labrys

    9. Ok so what does Bette really do for a.living? How do she know Tinas father? Why is she so rude to Tina? Questions questions….oh how I love stories like this and it keeps you anticipating, excited, and intrigued at the same time…nice chapter

    10. Loved it! I think Bette is a very rich lady and she has business with Tina Dad. She might just work for him and she owns that cabin. Tina will learn the true meaning of being a simple person and not judging other by there looks. PPS

    12. great update, I really liked this chapter. whether the story’s title refers to Bette’s heart? what a Tina Kennard can be thawed? :P
      so early in the story, I have so many questions, but I’m sure that you’ll be slow to answer them all. I have been so enjoying the beginning of this story, I’m sure that by the end, I’m hooked.
      I’m looking forward to the next chapter.

    13. Very nice. I will definitely keep reading. It’s been a very long time since I’ve been here and had to reset my password like 20 times just so I can comment. Don’t worry, I wrote down my password I’ll remember. I have even write a story or two, but first I need to finish the others.

      Anyway Kins, you’re awesome as always.

    14. Mmmm would really like to know the occupation of one Bette Porter.Definatley not a cabin maid.Some kind of executive probably.Anyway we will find out at some point.Pleased I got the occupant of the cabin right anyway and it was Bette to the rescue.Poor little rich girl Tina will be brought down to size I imagine.2 weeks on their own together.Time for feelings to grow.Love will be in the air as well.Instead of snow.Definately a winner with me.Great second chapter dear friend .Look forward to the next amazing chapter Kins..Cxx

    19. Wow you’re coming back in style.
      Only today could conclude both parties
      his new story and I confess that I was already
      very pleased with what I read.
      Loving this little game bette and tina.
      Love all your stories.
      Ten Stars !!!

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