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    Frozen Beginnings – Chapter Two

    Story written on September 17, 2014 by kins40.
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    “What? Two weeks!!” Tina cried panic returning once again. “Lucky for you, I have a cellphone…” the wicked smile on the brunette’s tanned features showed with evidence that she really enjoyed making her accidental guest squirm. She did not, however, move from her spot to attempt to go and get it. “Could you go get

    “What? Two weeks!!” Tina cried panic returning once again.

    “Lucky for you, I have a cellphone…” the wicked smile on the brunette’s tanned features showed with evidence that she really enjoyed making her accidental guest squirm. She did not, however, move from her spot to attempt to go and get it.

    “Could you go get it…. Please? I need to phone my dad to tell him that I’m ok… He’ll be able to inform Eric and all my friends…” Tina resented it but if she wanted a chance at telling anyone where she was, she had to resort to begging.

    “But certainly…” the brunette mocked, reaching in her back pocket to retrieve the device before ceremoniously presenting it with a little curtsy to the now desperate Tina.

    The blonde ignored the gesture to grab the phone and dial as quickly as she could. A few short rings later, her father answered his phone. Careful to downplay the details of her misadventure so as to not worry her father unnecessarily, Tina explained her predicaments but hid from the conversation, the reason for it entirely.

    John Kennard adored his daughter, it was an undisputed fact. He had however never hidden from anyone that he loathed the sight of her boyfriend.

    “Who is your …host?” Her father asked.

    Covering the handset with her hand, Tina asked for the woman’s name. She was still standing in front of her, not having once thought that Tina might need some privacy for her conversation.

    “Give me the phone.” The order was abrupt and the voice just as gruff.

    Tina clenched her teeth at the further demonstration of rudeness but refrained from saying anything as she placed the handset in the hand extended in front of her. The blonde’s patience was further tested when her host disappeared out of the room and out of earshot.

    How dared she? What could she be saying to her father that Tina was not allowed to hear? She mulled over all sorts of questions until the brunette reappeared in the room a few minutes later to hand the phone back to her.

    Tina spoke briefly to her father once more before saying goodbye and placing the phone back gently on the table by the sofa.

    “What did you tell my dad?” Tina asked suspiciously. “What is your name… and why did you not answer me when I asked you earlier on?”

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    4. That was great! I am very intrigued how this story wil develop.

      Tina must not assume things by how someone looks. She is one spoiled rich girl.

      But i believe she will learn that.

      And Bette, you surely made her sound like a hard woman, but with a caring side.

      Love this story and i am glad you are back!

    6. Kins,

      There is a piece of code you sometimes have to put into the story in the TEXT editing window. You can find that in the upper right part of your editing window next to a tab titled, Visual. Click on Text and you’ll see the codes WordPress uses to make your story appear in its format. I’ll put the little piece of code below this paragraph and hope that WordPress doesn’t make it disappear because that is what this little string does – it makes blank spaces. WordPress may “see” it and make this little bit of simple coding magic vanish. You’ll want to use this code for your stories so they are more readable in appearance.

      The code should appear here:  

      If it’s not above this line then WP disappeared it from this comment box’s text. To find it to use take a story you’re editing and tap the spacebar several times to lift your text, then click the TEXT editing window and you’ll see the code to use. It’s where you’ve inserted the blank spaces.

      Sometimes using the space bar between paragraphs and dialogue bites works and sometimes it doesn’t. But this ALWAYS works.

      Blackbird

    8. I absolutely love your style. I feel like a fly on the wall observing Tina’s new surroundings for the first time with her. I can even smell the beeswax & lavender, and I love it!

      It’s really great to have you back, Kins. I have a feeling this story will be as epic as all of your other masterpieces. Looking forward to the next chapter.

      Regards,
      Labrys

    9. Ok so what does Bette really do for a.living? How do she know Tinas father? Why is she so rude to Tina? Questions questions….oh how I love stories like this and it keeps you anticipating, excited, and intrigued at the same time…nice chapter

    10. Loved it! I think Bette is a very rich lady and she has business with Tina Dad. She might just work for him and she owns that cabin. Tina will learn the true meaning of being a simple person and not judging other by there looks. PPS

    12. great update, I really liked this chapter. whether the story’s title refers to Bette’s heart? what a Tina Kennard can be thawed? :P
      so early in the story, I have so many questions, but I’m sure that you’ll be slow to answer them all. I have been so enjoying the beginning of this story, I’m sure that by the end, I’m hooked.
      I’m looking forward to the next chapter.

    13. Very nice. I will definitely keep reading. It’s been a very long time since I’ve been here and had to reset my password like 20 times just so I can comment. Don’t worry, I wrote down my password I’ll remember. I have even write a story or two, but first I need to finish the others.

      Anyway Kins, you’re awesome as always.

    14. Mmmm would really like to know the occupation of one Bette Porter.Definatley not a cabin maid.Some kind of executive probably.Anyway we will find out at some point.Pleased I got the occupant of the cabin right anyway and it was Bette to the rescue.Poor little rich girl Tina will be brought down to size I imagine.2 weeks on their own together.Time for feelings to grow.Love will be in the air as well.Instead of snow.Definately a winner with me.Great second chapter dear friend .Look forward to the next amazing chapter Kins..Cxx

    19. Wow you’re coming back in style.
      Only today could conclude both parties
      his new story and I confess that I was already
      very pleased with what I read.
      Loving this little game bette and tina.
      Love all your stories.
      Ten Stars !!!

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