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Chapter XXVII – Empire State of Mind – An Equal and Opposite Reaction
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Her neck began to ache so she let a breast go to the sound of a soft “pop” and laid her head back down on the cool pillow again. “Do you remember our first kiss?” she asked Diane softly, getting lost in the blue eyes that turned almost sapphire when Diane was turned on.
She reached out and ran her hands through the silken blonde hair of her beloved, telling Diane with her eyes that her heart ached for her, too, just as those now-sapphire eyes were telling Jules how deeply their owner felt about Jules.
“When we were slow dancing in that club in Greenwich, at, like 2 or 3 in the morning?” Diane asked with a small smile.
“I felt my legs turn to jelly when I finally got to kiss those soft, warm, and red lips that I’d been dreaming about since we sat next to each other in that hair salon,” Jules admitted with a slight chuckle. “It’s a good thing we were holding each other so tightly!”
Diane smiled and bent down to kiss the pouty, pillow-soft lips of her lover, biting and pulling on them gently as they kissed. Their tongues pressed together softly and sweetly, as they both thought back to the memory of how that first kiss went. Back then they had only tentatively let their tongues slip into each other’s mouths, feeling the other out. Jules had been slightly shocked that Diane was getting into the kiss as eagerly as Jules had been, with Diane’s kiss betraying a passion and interest almost equal to hers. Once Jules had gotten over her shock at the intensity of Diane’s kiss back, they let the kiss take over. Their lips explored, their tongues roamed, each one took turns to let the other one take charge as their owners continued to gently sway to the sensual music playing in the club at that hour.
Diane released from their kiss now, and brushed some hair that had fallen across her lover’s lovely, well-trimmed dark brows. “Were you wearing some gloss or chapstick then?” Jules asked after a few minutes, enjoying the play of Diane’s fingertips that danced across her face. Diane loved touching her all over when they were alone; and Jules loved to be touched by Diane. Truth be told, she ached for Diane’s touch, especially when they were seated together while out in public, like most of the night tonight, bodies pressed against each other, and when Diane was on her lap, playfully rubbing her slight wetness that Jules could feel through Diane’s panties.
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So glad to see this story back!
More bette and tina NC-17 please
Thanks for the update, enjoyed it.
Wow Jules and Diane are not Bette and Tina but that was so hot! There are so many twists and turns and you never really know who to trust. I love it! Thanks for posting.
I’ve spent the last three weeks reading “Let It Happen”, “Love Soul Heaven Hell” and “Empire State of Mind”. I’m a sucker for a good love story and an even bigger one for a love story with mystery, action, and intrigue. I particularly enjoy FanFIction when the author takes the characters in directions different from the original series. I’ve enjoyed how Bette turns out to be some business genius, who is sought after by the world’s movers and shakers. Yet, despite her enormous success in the business world, art still plays and important role in her life, and her life with Tina. I am riveted by the connection between Bette and Tina throughout these stories. Despite their rocky start, their connection remains the axis upon which these stories revolve around. They’ve weathered former suiters, art thieves, fighting factions in a war zone, greedy gold thieves, and rogue intelligence agents, and their connection seems to grow stronger and stronger.
I also enjoy how you keep tying earlier scenes to the current plot line. It’s as if the first two stories laid out all the puzzle pieces and in the third story, we get to see how Bette finally puts all those pieces together. Clever, quite clever. I have a sneaking suspicion that her rescuer, Harry, from the caves, will eventually play a role in wrapping up this gold mystery. I can’t wait to see how this all plays out and whether you have another sequel planned for us. You have some crazy, mad skills as a writer, and I hope you continue to share those skills with your readers.
What can I say….. thanks for the read through! Glad to note the broad storyline “coheres” for you, the independent reader. I must confess there is a future arc I’ve written out, but still mulling over. Do let me know if it works (if I can manage to insert it before this one ends).
Welcome back Sky!! I was wondering what was happening with Tom. I hope the antidote will work for him. His Mom did I want a legacy for him( yes I know his legacy is Tina and Bette’s baby). Is the mystery killer the woman that Tom’s mom contacted. Philby has to be stopped. Glad to see Bette and Brom make up. Diane and Jules have to get married. Diane has to trust her heart. Jules only wants her. I love all the intrigue and backstory. Bette and Tina would be the best guardians for the gold and Peter’s fortune. Their big hearts and giving souls would make them the true protectors of the world. Keep this marvelous story coming with all its twists and turns. I love it!!
Oh my, I was blessed with 32 pages of bliss. My reward for threatening the life of his first born if, my computer tech could not fix my computer, in a timely manner. He was instructed to fix it now or die trying. Discussion on phone that could have started an International incident. But, he did, and I read and reread my reward. Very much worth probably the beginning of WWIII! The episode is amazing and everything is coming together as a good novelist desires. Maybe, Diane should speak with Tina about jumping into forever with J. Tina had somewhat of the same concerns as Diane. And look how well that turned out! Please keep writing and I will try not to threaten the life of anyone else!
A New Chapter! That pleasant surprise.
You have a great story in his
hands, mystery, romance and lots of action.
I love your story.
Do not delay to post a new chapter.
10 stars.