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Chapter XXVII – Empire State of Mind – An Equal and Opposite Reaction
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“Yeah … I think I swiped a mango or strawberry gloss over my lips before you pulled me up to dance,” Diane answered, smiling at the memory.
“Well it was delicious,” Jules murmured. “And I think I licked off every bit of it.”
Diane whispered just as she dipped her head, “You sure did lover.”
Jules groaned as Diane resumed her slow pump in and out of Jules’ core as the blonde deepened their kiss.
I thought I could hold back on this but, heaven help me, I can’t.
Jules gently rested a hand around Diane’s waist and slipped a knee in between the blonde’s legs, and then, with one quick move, flipped them both over.
“I’m sorry baby, but I need you so badly right now,” Jules murmured in her most regretful voice, once she’d gotten comfortable on top of Diane. She slipped her hand down to the apex of Diane’s slim and toned thighs where she found a slick, ready cleft waiting to be had. “How badly?” Diane growled sexily.
Jules felt her head spin when her fingers grazed over Diane’s wet, hot sex dripping with juice. Diane had been wet even when they’d been out by the bonfire earlier, and that hot, sexy cunt was now waiting for Jules’ touch, she could tell.
“Very, very badly,” she answered Diane huskily as she pressed her body down onto Diane’s and then spread those long, tapered legs with an impatient knee. Diane moaned as she tunneled her fingers through Jules’ silky auburn hair, and then moaned again as Jules easily slid two fingers deep inside the blonde’s waiting core.
They moaned together as Diane’s hips rose slightly to meet each thrust of Jules. Diane bent her head to bite gently and repeatedly on Jules’ shoulder as Jules began to step up her pace and deepen her thrusts, quickly reaching a fast, deep, and steady rhythm as she pounded into Diane’s hungry sex. Diane arched upward as if trying to melt into Jules’ thrusting body, and her arms rubbed her lover’s heated back all over wildly while her hips met each thrust from that hand moving in and out of her with rapid-fire movements, matching Jules stroke for stroke. Jules bit and sucked Diane’s neck, and then licked her way to the spot where she knew she’d be able to feel that throbbing pulse go crazy as she added a third finger and heard the answering cry she was expecting.
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So glad to see this story back!
More bette and tina NC-17 please
Thanks for the update, enjoyed it.
Wow Jules and Diane are not Bette and Tina but that was so hot! There are so many twists and turns and you never really know who to trust. I love it! Thanks for posting.
I’ve spent the last three weeks reading “Let It Happen”, “Love Soul Heaven Hell” and “Empire State of Mind”. I’m a sucker for a good love story and an even bigger one for a love story with mystery, action, and intrigue. I particularly enjoy FanFIction when the author takes the characters in directions different from the original series. I’ve enjoyed how Bette turns out to be some business genius, who is sought after by the world’s movers and shakers. Yet, despite her enormous success in the business world, art still plays and important role in her life, and her life with Tina. I am riveted by the connection between Bette and Tina throughout these stories. Despite their rocky start, their connection remains the axis upon which these stories revolve around. They’ve weathered former suiters, art thieves, fighting factions in a war zone, greedy gold thieves, and rogue intelligence agents, and their connection seems to grow stronger and stronger.
I also enjoy how you keep tying earlier scenes to the current plot line. It’s as if the first two stories laid out all the puzzle pieces and in the third story, we get to see how Bette finally puts all those pieces together. Clever, quite clever. I have a sneaking suspicion that her rescuer, Harry, from the caves, will eventually play a role in wrapping up this gold mystery. I can’t wait to see how this all plays out and whether you have another sequel planned for us. You have some crazy, mad skills as a writer, and I hope you continue to share those skills with your readers.
What can I say….. thanks for the read through! Glad to note the broad storyline “coheres” for you, the independent reader. I must confess there is a future arc I’ve written out, but still mulling over. Do let me know if it works (if I can manage to insert it before this one ends).
Welcome back Sky!! I was wondering what was happening with Tom. I hope the antidote will work for him. His Mom did I want a legacy for him( yes I know his legacy is Tina and Bette’s baby). Is the mystery killer the woman that Tom’s mom contacted. Philby has to be stopped. Glad to see Bette and Brom make up. Diane and Jules have to get married. Diane has to trust her heart. Jules only wants her. I love all the intrigue and backstory. Bette and Tina would be the best guardians for the gold and Peter’s fortune. Their big hearts and giving souls would make them the true protectors of the world. Keep this marvelous story coming with all its twists and turns. I love it!!
Oh my, I was blessed with 32 pages of bliss. My reward for threatening the life of his first born if, my computer tech could not fix my computer, in a timely manner. He was instructed to fix it now or die trying. Discussion on phone that could have started an International incident. But, he did, and I read and reread my reward. Very much worth probably the beginning of WWIII! The episode is amazing and everything is coming together as a good novelist desires. Maybe, Diane should speak with Tina about jumping into forever with J. Tina had somewhat of the same concerns as Diane. And look how well that turned out! Please keep writing and I will try not to threaten the life of anyone else!
A New Chapter! That pleasant surprise.
You have a great story in his
hands, mystery, romance and lots of action.
I love your story.
Do not delay to post a new chapter.
10 stars.