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Chapter XXVII – Empire State of Mind – An Equal and Opposite Reaction
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After a few minutes she felt Diane edge closer to an orgasm, and decided she’d help Diane get there. She slipped a hand under the sexy ass that she’d been adoring earlier and slipped a pinky into the puckered sphincter. She felt an initial resistance from the forbidden flower before she sensed the finger get sucked in up until the first digit. At the same time she cupped her palm over the blonde’s clit, rubbing it repeatedly as she continued to finger her. The combination made Diane jerk up and press harder into Jules’ body with a loud cry.
Jules felt Diane’s walls close in on her fingers tightly, and just when she thought those surprisingly strong muscles would break her fingers, they released and opened Diane’s core up softly. Jules felt an orgasm rocket through her lover’s heated body, and felt the vaginal walls suck and convulse around her fingers as Diane screamed another loud cry.
Jules wasn’t done, however, and resumed thrusting her fingers, going deeper inside Diane this time, finding and stroking that g-spot tenderly again and again as she urged Diane to cum once more. Her hand was soon filled with Diane’s juice and the sheets underneath them got soaked with her lover’s cum, as Diane obeyed Jules with a silent scream, head thrust back, body bent in a bow. Jules smiled at Diane, whose eyes were shut and who looked spent. A few strands of blonde hair began to stick on the lightly sweating skin, but Jules could feel one more orgasm building inside Diane.
She withdrew her hand and quickly slipped down that sexy body to lap at the sweet nectar dripping out of the engorged lips, tonguing Diane from the bottom of her slit all the way to her clit. She paused to look at Diane, legs spread apart, the wet core blossomed and waiting for Jules. “Your cunt is just so incredibly sexy, baby,” Jules said out loud in wonderment.
“Not talking time, honey,” Diane answered weakly in a far-away voice above her.
Jules chuckled before dipping her head back into the hot, wet entrance. She put out her tongue to let Diane’s small, stiff clit catch it. Diane moaned aloud and urged Jules with the fingers she’d tunneled through her lover’s hair to lick her again.
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So glad to see this story back!
More bette and tina NC-17 please
Thanks for the update, enjoyed it.
Wow Jules and Diane are not Bette and Tina but that was so hot! There are so many twists and turns and you never really know who to trust. I love it! Thanks for posting.
I’ve spent the last three weeks reading “Let It Happen”, “Love Soul Heaven Hell” and “Empire State of Mind”. I’m a sucker for a good love story and an even bigger one for a love story with mystery, action, and intrigue. I particularly enjoy FanFIction when the author takes the characters in directions different from the original series. I’ve enjoyed how Bette turns out to be some business genius, who is sought after by the world’s movers and shakers. Yet, despite her enormous success in the business world, art still plays and important role in her life, and her life with Tina. I am riveted by the connection between Bette and Tina throughout these stories. Despite their rocky start, their connection remains the axis upon which these stories revolve around. They’ve weathered former suiters, art thieves, fighting factions in a war zone, greedy gold thieves, and rogue intelligence agents, and their connection seems to grow stronger and stronger.
I also enjoy how you keep tying earlier scenes to the current plot line. It’s as if the first two stories laid out all the puzzle pieces and in the third story, we get to see how Bette finally puts all those pieces together. Clever, quite clever. I have a sneaking suspicion that her rescuer, Harry, from the caves, will eventually play a role in wrapping up this gold mystery. I can’t wait to see how this all plays out and whether you have another sequel planned for us. You have some crazy, mad skills as a writer, and I hope you continue to share those skills with your readers.
What can I say….. thanks for the read through! Glad to note the broad storyline “coheres” for you, the independent reader. I must confess there is a future arc I’ve written out, but still mulling over. Do let me know if it works (if I can manage to insert it before this one ends).
Welcome back Sky!! I was wondering what was happening with Tom. I hope the antidote will work for him. His Mom did I want a legacy for him( yes I know his legacy is Tina and Bette’s baby). Is the mystery killer the woman that Tom’s mom contacted. Philby has to be stopped. Glad to see Bette and Brom make up. Diane and Jules have to get married. Diane has to trust her heart. Jules only wants her. I love all the intrigue and backstory. Bette and Tina would be the best guardians for the gold and Peter’s fortune. Their big hearts and giving souls would make them the true protectors of the world. Keep this marvelous story coming with all its twists and turns. I love it!!
Oh my, I was blessed with 32 pages of bliss. My reward for threatening the life of his first born if, my computer tech could not fix my computer, in a timely manner. He was instructed to fix it now or die trying. Discussion on phone that could have started an International incident. But, he did, and I read and reread my reward. Very much worth probably the beginning of WWIII! The episode is amazing and everything is coming together as a good novelist desires. Maybe, Diane should speak with Tina about jumping into forever with J. Tina had somewhat of the same concerns as Diane. And look how well that turned out! Please keep writing and I will try not to threaten the life of anyone else!
A New Chapter! That pleasant surprise.
You have a great story in his
hands, mystery, romance and lots of action.
I love your story.
Do not delay to post a new chapter.
10 stars.