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Chapter XXVII – Empire State of Mind – An Equal and Opposite Reaction
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Damn, it’s coming! Diane thought to herself, equal parts hotly anticipating the giant orgasm just seconds away now … her third..or fourth?…as well as disappointed that Jules’ ministrations of her sopping cunt and clit would soon come to an end. ”
Baby…Jules….honey…I’m….cuh…!” Diane cut herself off as she let out her loudest scream yet. Her body shot out of bed in spasms, shaking. Her walls squeezed on Jules’ fingers tightly before she felt an explosion from deep inside her gush out girl cum all over Jules’ smiling face.
Diane moaned in relief when she realized Jules wasn’t letting up, though, as she’d thought her lover might have, once Diane came again. Instead, Jules kept at it, continuing to finger her inside and lick at her sore clit, carrying her through the aftershocks of her orgasms as they wracked her body. Her body shook again and she moaned erotically as Jules continued to fuck her, helping her ride out the fresh waves of orgasm that tore through her, until Diane felt she couldn’t take anymore.
She sat up with a last burst of energy and pushed gently at Jules’ head to nudge it away from the reddening clit. And then collapsed into a sex-coma.
Hours later, she awoke to Jules gently brushing her hair away from her face, and tucking some hair behind her ear.
“Hey there lover,” she said softly, as she kissed the gentle fingers that wandered over her face to brush against her lips.
She took a deep, satisfied breath in. “You showered.”
“I did,” Jules smiled back. “And I gave you a rubdown also with a soapy face towel. I know that you don’t like sleeping without cleaning up after …”
“Hot sex?” Diane asked with a naughty smile.
They gazed at each other for what seemed like forever.
“What got into you tonight?” Diane asked, as she started to caress her lover’s beautiful face.
“You,” Jules answered simply, kissing Diane’s palm.
“You are just so hot and beautiful … inside and out,” Jules continued.
Diane smiled at her, and then ran a finger lightly over those pouty lips, and up and down the elegant jawline. “No, really. What happened? I felt something in the way you made love to me tonight.”
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So glad to see this story back!
More bette and tina NC-17 please
Thanks for the update, enjoyed it.
Wow Jules and Diane are not Bette and Tina but that was so hot! There are so many twists and turns and you never really know who to trust. I love it! Thanks for posting.
I’ve spent the last three weeks reading “Let It Happen”, “Love Soul Heaven Hell” and “Empire State of Mind”. I’m a sucker for a good love story and an even bigger one for a love story with mystery, action, and intrigue. I particularly enjoy FanFIction when the author takes the characters in directions different from the original series. I’ve enjoyed how Bette turns out to be some business genius, who is sought after by the world’s movers and shakers. Yet, despite her enormous success in the business world, art still plays and important role in her life, and her life with Tina. I am riveted by the connection between Bette and Tina throughout these stories. Despite their rocky start, their connection remains the axis upon which these stories revolve around. They’ve weathered former suiters, art thieves, fighting factions in a war zone, greedy gold thieves, and rogue intelligence agents, and their connection seems to grow stronger and stronger.
I also enjoy how you keep tying earlier scenes to the current plot line. It’s as if the first two stories laid out all the puzzle pieces and in the third story, we get to see how Bette finally puts all those pieces together. Clever, quite clever. I have a sneaking suspicion that her rescuer, Harry, from the caves, will eventually play a role in wrapping up this gold mystery. I can’t wait to see how this all plays out and whether you have another sequel planned for us. You have some crazy, mad skills as a writer, and I hope you continue to share those skills with your readers.
What can I say….. thanks for the read through! Glad to note the broad storyline “coheres” for you, the independent reader. I must confess there is a future arc I’ve written out, but still mulling over. Do let me know if it works (if I can manage to insert it before this one ends).
Welcome back Sky!! I was wondering what was happening with Tom. I hope the antidote will work for him. His Mom did I want a legacy for him( yes I know his legacy is Tina and Bette’s baby). Is the mystery killer the woman that Tom’s mom contacted. Philby has to be stopped. Glad to see Bette and Brom make up. Diane and Jules have to get married. Diane has to trust her heart. Jules only wants her. I love all the intrigue and backstory. Bette and Tina would be the best guardians for the gold and Peter’s fortune. Their big hearts and giving souls would make them the true protectors of the world. Keep this marvelous story coming with all its twists and turns. I love it!!
Oh my, I was blessed with 32 pages of bliss. My reward for threatening the life of his first born if, my computer tech could not fix my computer, in a timely manner. He was instructed to fix it now or die trying. Discussion on phone that could have started an International incident. But, he did, and I read and reread my reward. Very much worth probably the beginning of WWIII! The episode is amazing and everything is coming together as a good novelist desires. Maybe, Diane should speak with Tina about jumping into forever with J. Tina had somewhat of the same concerns as Diane. And look how well that turned out! Please keep writing and I will try not to threaten the life of anyone else!
A New Chapter! That pleasant surprise.
You have a great story in his
hands, mystery, romance and lots of action.
I love your story.
Do not delay to post a new chapter.
10 stars.