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Chapter XXVII – Empire State of Mind – An Equal and Opposite Reaction
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But Jules couldn’t stop talking now for some reason. “I’d like to stay in bed and make love to you all day and all night tomorrow, D,” she verbalized the latest thought that zinged through her mind as she alternated between quick licks of the stiff clit and soft, playful rolls around it.
Diane groaned and squeezed her breasts. “Well, I will fuck you all night tonight and keep you from sleeping if you don’t stop talking baby,” she responded hoarsely.
Jules answered with a chuckle as she parted Diane’s nether lips with her tongue, pressing her mouth deeply against that sweet, sexy entrance, before drawing back again with, “Tsk … tsk … promises, promises.”
Before Diane could respond Jules pushed her tongue through those nether lips and started licking inside, employing all the skill of her tongue that she’d learnt over the years, a skill Diane raved about, that could bring her lover to ecstasy. Diane bucked her hips in response to the skillful tongue-fucking invading her, and sought to press her cunt closer against Jules’ mouth.
“I may not be as skillful as you are,” the blonde breathe out. “But, yes, I promise to blow your mind all night tonight and love you like you’ve never been loved.” She moaned with delight as she felt Jules’ skillful tongue work expertly inside her.
“Not as skillful?” Jules asked in an incredulous voice as she withdrew her mouth to take a breath and massage her jaw slightly, to a series of disappointed groans from her lover.
“Baby if you get any more skillful at this, I think I will truly lose my mind the next time you fuck me … happily, I might add,” Jules answered her own question and then fondly kissed both of Diane’s silky inner thighs. Diane uttered an answering groan when she felt Jules’ tongue back at her clit and felt the three fingers that had fucked her senseless earlier replacing the tongue that had been filling her.
As Diane bucked and writhed on the bed, Jules found the g-spot she’d caressed unmercifully earlier and began stroking it again just as she wrapped her lips around Diane’s clit, sucking it gently into her mouth and then going back to the soft, rolls and hard licks against it with her questing tongue.
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So glad to see this story back!
More bette and tina NC-17 please
Thanks for the update, enjoyed it.
Wow Jules and Diane are not Bette and Tina but that was so hot! There are so many twists and turns and you never really know who to trust. I love it! Thanks for posting.
I’ve spent the last three weeks reading “Let It Happen”, “Love Soul Heaven Hell” and “Empire State of Mind”. I’m a sucker for a good love story and an even bigger one for a love story with mystery, action, and intrigue. I particularly enjoy FanFIction when the author takes the characters in directions different from the original series. I’ve enjoyed how Bette turns out to be some business genius, who is sought after by the world’s movers and shakers. Yet, despite her enormous success in the business world, art still plays and important role in her life, and her life with Tina. I am riveted by the connection between Bette and Tina throughout these stories. Despite their rocky start, their connection remains the axis upon which these stories revolve around. They’ve weathered former suiters, art thieves, fighting factions in a war zone, greedy gold thieves, and rogue intelligence agents, and their connection seems to grow stronger and stronger.
I also enjoy how you keep tying earlier scenes to the current plot line. It’s as if the first two stories laid out all the puzzle pieces and in the third story, we get to see how Bette finally puts all those pieces together. Clever, quite clever. I have a sneaking suspicion that her rescuer, Harry, from the caves, will eventually play a role in wrapping up this gold mystery. I can’t wait to see how this all plays out and whether you have another sequel planned for us. You have some crazy, mad skills as a writer, and I hope you continue to share those skills with your readers.
What can I say….. thanks for the read through! Glad to note the broad storyline “coheres” for you, the independent reader. I must confess there is a future arc I’ve written out, but still mulling over. Do let me know if it works (if I can manage to insert it before this one ends).
Welcome back Sky!! I was wondering what was happening with Tom. I hope the antidote will work for him. His Mom did I want a legacy for him( yes I know his legacy is Tina and Bette’s baby). Is the mystery killer the woman that Tom’s mom contacted. Philby has to be stopped. Glad to see Bette and Brom make up. Diane and Jules have to get married. Diane has to trust her heart. Jules only wants her. I love all the intrigue and backstory. Bette and Tina would be the best guardians for the gold and Peter’s fortune. Their big hearts and giving souls would make them the true protectors of the world. Keep this marvelous story coming with all its twists and turns. I love it!!
Oh my, I was blessed with 32 pages of bliss. My reward for threatening the life of his first born if, my computer tech could not fix my computer, in a timely manner. He was instructed to fix it now or die trying. Discussion on phone that could have started an International incident. But, he did, and I read and reread my reward. Very much worth probably the beginning of WWIII! The episode is amazing and everything is coming together as a good novelist desires. Maybe, Diane should speak with Tina about jumping into forever with J. Tina had somewhat of the same concerns as Diane. And look how well that turned out! Please keep writing and I will try not to threaten the life of anyone else!
A New Chapter! That pleasant surprise.
You have a great story in his
hands, mystery, romance and lots of action.
I love your story.
Do not delay to post a new chapter.
10 stars.