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    Chapter31.

    Dont make promises you cant keep. she whispered, sniffing back the tears and pouting as she sulked.

    I couldn’t help but find this surly demeanour and child like expression the most adorable thing Id ever seen. With hardly any constrain I smiled, getting even more of a frown in return.

    Don’t Millie, I can keep my promise because I love you and nothing is going to stop us from being together.

    Something already is stopping us! You, not coming back to LA with me!

    Shhh…calm down baby. I hushed soothingly, stroking her cheek and gazing into her moody eyes.

    Listen Millie, I cant pack up my life in two days and move in with you. Its just not gonna happen that quick, I have to sort out my job and Lizzie, get some money together and then get my ***** onto the first flight to LA.

    The stubborn stare softened slightly, but the prominent pout was unmoving. I leant forward and kissed her mouth, getting a minimal response. My lips sank against Millies gently, opening ever so slightly to pull her bottom lip in-between my own. Even though Millie was trying to show me she was still upset by not responding, I took no notice and continued to make love to her lips. As I gently pulled on her bottom lip, replacing my lips with my teeth I felt my own urgency heighten at this subtle display of submission on Millie’s behalf. I ran my tongue along her bottom lip, nudging the meek mouth open with my own. I covered her mouth with my lips, kissing her deeply as my breathing picked up a notch. My tongue sought out hers, licking, playing and then retracting. Tempting Millie to join in, to just give in for a second, to give in to me. I felt her hands in my hair and then she was kissing me with double the passion, I let out a moan. The brunette fighting for dominance in my mouth, taking the slow seduction I had begun to a forceful fever pitch in our mouths.

    You better get your ***** to LA, or Ill kidnap it and take it with me. Millie said, panting above me.

    Youll kidnap my *****, but then Ill be ***** less. I said, giggling at this rather interesting visual suggestion.

    Millie grinned, her hand slipping underneath me to grab my *****. I gasped as she pinched my right cheek, laughing as she wiggled her eyebrows at me.

    Yeah, so you better get it to LA, A.S.A.P. Or its mine, you got that Hayley? she said, her voice a low growl.

    I wrapped my arms round her neck and pulled her in close, our faces so close I could feel her warm breath against my cheek.

    I got it Miller.

    Comments

    1. Diddo to what Seahurst said. And I know I have said it before, but I am going to say it so much more clearly now. The idea of the rating system seems not accurate to me in the least, because you always bring your reads such well written prose, and interesting, full characters. If this a four, then anything I’ve ever written is like a two or three. Sorry for the rant, but your story is so 20 stars.

    2. This line….. “It wasn’t a perfect world and neither Millie nor I was perfect, so we would have to rely on the perfection of our love to over rule the imperfection of our mediocre minds…” was wonderful. This is a five all the way!! Thank you.

    3. OMG u posted this really quickly, thank you!!!! im with Seahurst, that line was like…wow! Not looking fwd to Millie leaving… but looking fwd to Trixie going to LA *wink wink*

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