Fan Fiction
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Chapter31.
Come with me. That I really knew what the edge felt like.
Together, our thumbs pressed against our ***** and our fingers stilled for a moment, holding the moment when both of our bodies crumbled into sensory overload. Then, joining our mouths in a kiss we began pumping our way through our orgasms. It all seemed to slow down for a moment, as our cries of pleasure echoed through the room our eyes met. Somewhere in the midst of indescribable bliss and indefinable sensations, something other than feeling rippled though us. An understanding, an unsaid combination that neither of us could pinpoint. It was the look, the mutual agreement that we weren’t going to take our eyes off each other. We promised to never stop looking, never to let our mind wander or our thoughts stray.
It was right then, in the middle of the most intense ***** my body had ever experienced that I felt the true meaning of the expression making love. We made love, a love which wasn’t for a holiday or until someone better came along, it was forever. Only sheer stupidity and inhumane piggishness could ruin this love and I knew that could happen. It wasn’t a perfect world and neither Millie nor I was perfect, so we would have to rely on the perfection of our love to over rule the imperfection of our mediocre minds.
As our breathing fought to keep up with the pace of our passion inflicting fingers, we slowed them till they stilled against the velvet walls of our warm, undulating insides. Millies face was pressed into mine, our lips shaking on top of each other as our breathing returned to normal. We removed our fingers and Millie sank onto my body, her head resting against my chest as I stroked her hair.
Well I don’t think I’ve ever come that hard in my life, ever.
I smiled, sighing in agreement. My fingers running through the thick, silky tresses as my mind was transported to a place filled with contentment and lazy smiles. The term glowing didn’t even come close to how I felt, my body was bronzed and blazing, illuminating the way for lost and misguided, loveless souls. A tour guide which really had been sampling the local specialities, down under so to speak. I giggled, holding Millie’s closer to me as I amused myself with mindless dreams and insane imagery.
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(49 votes, average: 3.96 out of 5)
Seahurst has the best comment so I’m with her all the way. This is a five Loohing forward to boyh in LA together. thanks so much
aka ?. I was looking 4 a cont. of the shane and tab story.
this is worth more than 5 bloody stars! i’ve fallen in love with this story and your writing! please continue and post soon!
Hey Kat, I’m just catching up….Another superbly written chapter….You never cease to amaze me with your writing…..5 stars all the way:)
Diddo to what Seahurst said. And I know I have said it before, but I am going to say it so much more clearly now. The idea of the rating system seems not accurate to me in the least, because you always bring your reads such well written prose, and interesting, full characters. If this a four, then anything I’ve ever written is like a two or three. Sorry for the rant, but your story is so 20 stars.
This line….. “It wasn’t a perfect world and neither Millie nor I was perfect, so we would have to rely on the perfection of our love to over rule the imperfection of our mediocre minds…” was wonderful. This is a five all the way!! Thank you.
OMG u posted this really quickly, thank you!!!! im with Seahurst, that line was like…wow! Not looking fwd to Millie leaving… but looking fwd to Trixie going to LA *wink wink*